AbhiGya OS (Untitled) - Completed - Page 2

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Posted: 10 years ago
#11
Ai hai what a tempting teaser! Rudra to the rescue and Abhi to stew in jealousy? Heehee.
Thanks for your comment too! Hope to post the last part of that SS today :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
#12
nice story - cant wait for "next" rockstar's entry.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#13
Loved the teaser.
A new Rockstar in the town.
Please update soon.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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loved the teaser...excited on what will happen next
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: StarryStarryNyt


Chapter 2 (Teaser)

Pragya walked to the counter and let the cop examine the contents of her bag. All this while, she could feel Abhi's eyes on her but didn't look in his direction. Abhi took his ex wife in. Dressed in a white dress (wait, dress?), a blue cardigan and silver sandals, Pragya looked simple yet angelic. Aliya and Tanu were shocked too and knew she wore the look well but never in a million years would they admit to this.


Theek hai madam ji, bag ka to ho gaya ab aapki baari hai.'' Pragya gulped. She wondered why she was being subjected to this. She saw the cop move towards her with a handheld metal detector. She opened her mouth to voice her opinion but someone beat her to it. Ruko,'' a male voice shouted. Pragya looked up trying to find the owner of the voice...

great teaser can't wait to read the chapter
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Posted: 10 years ago
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awesome cont. soon glad the trio's suffering they deserve it
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Posted: 10 years ago
#17
Thank you for your comments guys. It's what encourages me to write. I apologise in advance for the short update but its all I could write. I've always wanted to include Ramesh in an OS and what better chance then now when he's coming back.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#18
Aaha so it was not Rudra but Suresh! I thought maybe you might surprise us and you did, though now I'm still more curious about Rudra!

Loved this chapter so much! Feels like it belongs in the show. Hurrah for bringing back oily Ramesh and LOL at him thinking Pragya and Suresh got married. Bahaha I can just imagine the tension in the room, all the thoughts in all the characters heads...you suggest it all so wonderfully. Thanks for the update and more soon please!! 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
#19
I just found this ff. Loved it! hope you continue soon.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#20
Oooh exciting!!! Waiting for the chapter!

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