Ts Revelation of truth last part on page 2

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Sorry guys but couldn't stop myself from writing this:

Revelation of Truth

Abhi raised his hands to slap Pragya but his hand was caught up by Purab whose eyes looked so enraged that it sent shivers down Aliya's spine.

Purab-"Bas Mr.Abishek Mehra bas.."

Aliya-"Purab where the hell were you?"

Purab-"I was "

Aliya-" I knew that you would be with this Bhenji..I am gonna "

Purab-" Don't you dare Aliya " he shouted and continued" I had enough of you..I curse the day I met you..."

Aliya was shocked.. and so was abhi..

Purab turned to Pragya-"You were begging me to marry her. Who doesn't even know how to act like a woman "pointing to Aliya

Abhi-"What.."

Dadi-" Can anyone tell me what is going on please."

Aliya-" This Pra.."

Purab-" Enough you will not insult my sister any more.."

Abhi-" Your sister but.."

Purab walked towards someone and pulled Bulbul in front of everyone .

Purab-" She is the girl I love and Pragya di was only approving me for Bulbul. That is what Aliya mistook and created the whole scene for your marriage. She kept quite and let you torture Pragya even after knowing the truth. She simply used you Abhi.."

Abhi looked shocked and hurt, but of all was totally broken. Though he did not show it yet.

Purab moved towards Aliya-"You want to marry me right...come lets get married but I swear I will never treat you as my wife.. not even as my mistress"

Aliya paled and stood shocked as her hands began to shiver

Purab continued- No guy in his sane mind will marry someone as self-centered as you..You have no identity for yourself.. You are a nobody if I remove Abhishek Mehra's name from you.. and you dare to try and remove Pragya di's identity..."

Bulbul rushed to control Purab. With her one soft touch and cares everyone could see him calming down..

Purab-"I am sorry Bulbul di had to face so much because of me"

The whole scene crashed as Dadi fainted..

Pragya-" Dadi " she screamed and ran towards her..

4hours later...

Abhi was sitting outside the ICU totally lost. Taiji ,Tauiji and Akash sat looking rather ashamed with themselves..

They watched as Pragya walked to and fro as she handled everything single handedly. Aliya was sitting in one corner looking totally white and pale as Purab's words echoed inside her.

Tanu had left...t long back not wanting her image tarnished due to Aliya, which was a rude awakening for Abhi and everyone else

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Oh wow...what a big mess!! Purab, couldn't you find another way? 😲 But yes very interested to see what happens next. Amazing that Pragya is there taking care of things while Mehras are in shock. Hope Dadi will be ok...what will Abhi do now! And what will Bulbul do too I wonder...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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is it true? or gonna be bulbul dream?? 😕
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Loved it so much and thank you for the pm.
Hope that Daadi will be fine.
Wonder what wiil Aaliyah do after she recovered from the shock .
Please do update soon wondering what's going to unfolds in the next part.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Wow that was amazing hope something like this happens in the show !!
Well done great story !!
Thanks for sharing !! 👏
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Posted: 10 years ago
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wow yaar...loved Purab accusing Aliya part...
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VERY BEAUTIFUL
KASH SHOW MEI KUCH AISA HOTA
you have written it very beautifully dear
do contibue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nice!! Wish it happens and dadi :( aww
But nicely written!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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nice😊😊
update soon
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Part 2

5 days later

Abhi walked into his room to see Pragya who was about to fall of the couch sleeping. She had taken in charge of the whole situation from Dadi's health to the media and the guest. She had not complained or got irritated even a bit due to the continuous questions of all. She even took care of Aliya

Even as she was about to fall down Abhi rushed to catch her. He steadied her slowly and lifted her in her arms and carried her to the bed and put her down slowly as if she was made of porcelain..

He sat beside her and watched her sleep,the tiredness evident on her face.

He silently pushed back her hairs and tucked it..

The blazing of the alarm woke her up and she got up startled almost into her husband's arms..

Prag-"What time is it..?"

Abhi-"Relax Chashmish it is 1 in the afternoon.."

Pragya-"I need to go.. and she literally ran down away from Abhi

Abhi followed her to see her important work which was nothing but to give his Dadi her medications

Pragya walked to the dining table and served the food to all of them..

As they ate in silence, Abhi noticed Aliya playing with the food and not exactly eating it..

Abhi-"Aliya why are you not eating?"

Aliya-"Woh mujhe ..Am not hungry Bhai.."

Pragya -"Umm..par you did not eat your breakfast properly as well.." The way in which Pragya said that clearly showed hesitation, which did not go unseen by Aliya

"What have I done ,my own Bhabhi is hesitant to talk to mee..Was I so rude.."knowingly or unknowingly that day Pragya was accepted by Aliya..

Aliya was no sadist or blinded to ignore or see Pragya's goodness .When she saw it she decided to never let go of her no matter what.

3 months later..

Abhi knocked the door as Aliya looked up from the amount of text books she was studying for her IIT entrance exam..

Abhi-" Hey Kiddo...How is it going?"

Aliya-"almost done with it.."

Knock..

Aliya turned to see Pragya standing with a tray of her favorite milkshake.

Even as Pragya turned to leave the room she felt the whole room spin and everything go dark...

Epilogue

One drop and then another and slowly the sweat ran down Karan's forehead..

"What have I got into" he wondered as Maya and Mayur began to round him, as if checking him out. He looked up pleadingly to Aliya and Pragya di..

Karan-" A little help please"

Pragya-" I am sorry but they love their massi so much that they will not let you go without doing what they intend to do.."

Maya poked him on his leg and karan came to face the miniature replica of Pragya.

Maya-"Will you let Massi visit us atleast once in a week?"

Karan couldn't help but smile at her childish demand

He had met Aliya in a workshop while she was doing her masters in IIT.Like every fairy tale, they met, fought on everything, befriended and finally fell in love. Today he was to ask her hand in marriage from her Bhai and Bhabhi her second parents and now as he waited for her Bhai to speak her brothers kids were interrogating him.

Maya-"Missy is waiting.."

Karan-" She will thrice a week ,will that suffice? Can I come with her?"

Maya nodded excitedly and kissed him-"Of course Mamu.."

Maya gave a toothy grin and looked opposite side to face her brother who was glaring at her angrily and she gulped,

8weeks later Purab recived the wedding card of Aliya Mehra and Karan Rathode..

The End

Edited by smritiz - 10 years ago

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