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logambika

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Posted: 10 years ago

#61

both the parts are awesome... abhi repends for his deeds... wanna know what happens...

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nitarata

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Posted: 10 years ago

#62

Mina, it's unfair that you stop there. How on earth you could stop at "Eey Chashmish".. Please post more.

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Lkb79

@Lkb79

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Posted: 10 years ago

#63

Omg Mina. So good! I don't know why you thought I wouldn't like the progression of the story. Your Abhi thinks! For himself! Like his skull is not just unused storage space for his sister and girlfriend's dumb ideas! It's the best.

I really like your writing style also. It's very clear and consistent! Keep going! I'm excited to see where it will go next!

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nitarata

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Posted: 10 years ago

#64

replies to page 4 commenters (later part)

[quote=-Tia-]Pragya will first deny to want anything to do with him. But he will charm her to it. [/quote]

Ahem. I thought you'd be wrong, because I thought this was gonna be a serious story, but it looks like you know all versions of Abhi all too well. I didn't think I could write charm, but I think Abhi is about to make me try 😆

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This is why Pragya will melt too! How can anyone be upset with him for too long?

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FhatTheWuck.

@FhatTheWuck.

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Posted: 10 years ago

#65

OMG!!! how cute was that last part!!! my baby saying eey chashmish!!

and yes! suresh saying that was a nice twist! and purab situation!

love it mina!

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crtkelly

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Posted: 10 years ago

#66

You have me coming back for more😊

I enjoyed both updates (2+2.5) and despite indicating how refreshing it was to see a more insightful Abhi in your parts 1 and now part 2, I cannot deny that his Eeey, chashmish at the end of 2.5 just reeled me in, classic Abhi, love it!😆

Really looking forward to your next update!

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Laugh.Out.Loud

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Posted: 10 years ago

#67

I am not really into reading Fan Fictions, but I felt like I should read yours because whenever I have seen Pragya and Abhi together, I have always wondered what it would be like when Abhi gets to know the truth after they sign the divorce.

And, uh, frankly, I am new in the forum and it's the perfect welcome I can ever ask for. It's so nicely written and it's not so serious neither not so funny, just the perfect mix. The perfect fusion that keeps me reading.

And like everyone else had been repeatedly saying, you stopped at a really wrong place. Part 2.5 was so funny, charming and heartwarming!

Glad to see Abhi back-to-himself. Continue soon, will be waiting!😃 And apparently, I have no thoughts to share on the coming chapter. 😒

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Lasya Adiraj

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Posted: 10 years ago

#68

Both the parts were marvellous

Beautifully written

Their feelings were beautifully explained

Loved it

Continue soon!

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Nitya Suresh

@TheAutumnFizz

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Posted: 10 years ago

#69

Oh.. So he finally found out the truth... I just wonder sometimes if its possible for Abhi to ask for forgiveness and for Pragya to actually forgive him... Well, its upto them now..
Beautifully written post.. Loved it totally!!
Looking forward to the next one.. :-)