Hello everyone!
and WELCOME to the fanfic made by the fans of Kulvaddhu forum!
Last week we all started a short story about love which somehow ended up with the story of "the sacred stick".. how that happened.. you got to read and find out!! after 1 week 13 pages and lots and lots of creativity it is my pleasure to announce the priemere of "Ek Anoki Khani.."
Kulvaddhu is a show with Agni in it. Love starts between Rajlaxmi and her ex-husband Margaya. They cried all night because she hurts and because she is ugly. All of a sudden Agni comes in and faints seeing Niyati with his chappal threatening him if he did not propose to her and also took his perfume. Just when Agni is about to say "will you" Shourya enters and hugs Agni and says "mein tumhe naya perfumes la doonga isse par gussa mat hou". Agni looks at Niyati and then back at Shourya and shouts and jumps with excitement about Shourya's offer, but he's also upset because he couldn't' finish his line. (Haila… perfume pay.. I jump when I see him on screen) So he tried again by turning to Niyati and looks at her with his heavenly eyes (I think I am going to faint) and says "Niyati… I think that I am falling in love with you. Please accept my love for you." Niyati was shocked. She looked back at him and said "That is right I love you too.
Shourya was shocked. ****Shocked Mode**** whaaaaaaaaaaaaa????!! You actually love him? NO come back to me… "*****
Agni steps can be heard from behind.. ****Agni Jyoti joyti Agni swahaaaaaaa…(hahahahaah)
****** Agni thinks to himself, wonder what' that chant I keep on hearing whenever I come. Agni looks at Shourya and Niyati and says "Niyati ko chod de, varna muhje apni sacred stick uthani padegi. ****DUN DUN DUNNNNNNNN******
Agni says to Shourya "Shourya mere aur Niyati ke beech mat awo… varna.. iss stick ke siwa mere dogs bhi ready hai." Shourya looks at Agni scared and says "NAHIIIIIIIIIIIIIII……. Not your stick..!! Someone help me.." Agni says to Shourya "Then never come between my Niyati and me ever again." He laughs that sexy evil laugher (haila.. mai maar jawa) and he takes Niyati by one hand and his stick falls… he tries to pick it up but Shourya grabs it! Shourya laughs evilly (Aryan from Vaidehi laugh!! ) and looks at Agni and Niyati and says "I got your stick… give me Niyati or else.." (he threatens to smash his stick..).. Agni looks shocked and says "NAHIIIIIIIIII!!!!!!!! NOT MY STICK!!!! Niyati patted his shoulder and said "Koi baat nahi Agni. Main hoon na. Javnvi ko jab pata chale ga to who Shourya ko samjhadegi and you can then have your stick back." Agni smiled at her and Shourya dropped the stick and ran away crying. Agni and Niyati then laughed heartily and gazed into each others eyes lovingly. Niyati to Agni: "Agni Kya ma tum se kuch mang sakti ho. Kya ma tumhara kajaal borrow kar sakti ho…" Agni looks at her and says "Kajaal hi kyun? Tum mera dil, meri jaan, meri yeh sacred stick, aur saath main, mera who bhajan bah le jao (agni joyti joyti agni swahaaa)." Niyati looking scared says to him "Nahi nahi.. bhajan nahi.. varna sari ladkiya IF forum is mujhe jota marah gi!!! In totally filmy way Niyati starts singing. Agni *thinks*: kya khoobsurat gati hai niyati
Then Agni says to Niyati "Sorry niyati… per yahaan naach ne ke liye trees bhi nahi hai! Tumhe mujhse kaam chalana padega! Niyati looks at Agni "Koi baat nahi.. mai tumahre liya without trees nachongi!!" Niyati sings "Tujhe dekh dekh sona.. tujke dekh karha jugna.." Agni stops her and sings "Adaa.. aye hai adaa, hosh udaye adaaa, kar de deewana……….. adaa jaan leva adaa, katilaana adaa, maar dale na…….. aware yahaan dil kitne hue la pata… adaa..!!! ..
Niyati smiles and says "shhhhhhhhh... bua-saa sun legi… tum to maro ge… saath mein hume bhi marwawo ge… chal garden mein ja kar gaate hai…" Agni looks at Niyati and says "thou kya hua agar bua se sune legi unko bhi pata chalna chahiye ke mein tumhe apna dil de bheta hoon." Niyati blushes as she hears Agni's sweet comments. Suddenly Niyati feels dizzy and she faints… Agni looks worried and calls a doctor to do Niyati's checkup. The doctor says she is pregnant. Agni takes her to the room and lies her down. He looks at her and thinks ye nahi ho sakta...niyati maa banne wali hai..ye kaise..kab..kahan huwa...meanwhile whole rathod family knows and they cant believe niyati jo khandaan ki izzat ke liye jaan deno ko tayyar thi..aaj mu dekhane layak nah chora..agni thinks..niyati to mere itne kareeb kabhi nahi aaya...Shourya! haa shourya!...but wait! shourya to itne dino se bahar tha... matlab koi teesra bhi hai!!! Agni phir sochtta hai "Akhir.. yeh theersa wala kaha se ageya?" He suddently jumps in shock "RAJVEER.. Nahi nahi ye nahi ho sakta! Rajveer carol se bahut pyar karta hai.. aur wo bhi pregnant hai".. phir kaun.. Agni phir sochtha hai.. Niyati chupke se usko dektha hai, aur gabratha hai. Agar Agni ko patha chalega ke Rajveer hi mere pyar aur Shourya Carol ki.. Woh bohot gussa ho jayega, akhir unse kaun pyar karega. Agni strides fast and furiously him and witout a word grabs his hands and shakes it in relief. Arre yaar, thank goodness tum abaap ho mein nahin, aab me azaad hoon.
Everything fades black. Agni with passionate anger in his eye "Aaj mai rajveer ki to daachya aura doonga. Rajveer aaj tumne mujse hoi bacha nahi sakta." Rajveer enters.
Niyati pretends to wake up and realizes that it was all a dream… yeh kaisa sapna dekha maina… mein rajveer se nahin sif Agni se pyaar karti hoon.
Niyati gets up and has no water… She's very confused about her dream…" Lagta hai in dino mein jo kuch bhi huwa… Uska wajeh se ye bura sapna aaya… hum ja dekhte hai.. Agni so raha hai ya humari painting bana raha hai." She getsw up and sneaks over to Agni's room, and peeks inside. She sees him sleeping peacefully so goes and sits at the edge of his bed watching him sleep. Suddenly he opens his eyes and in a very filmsy style looks at her and sings "Chaudvin Ka Chand Ho, Ya Aaftaab Ho.. Jo Bhi Ho Tum Khuda Ki Kasam, Lajawab Ho...
niyati is shocked out of her mind.. she replies.... I'm sorry i didnt mean to wake you up....niyati blushes a little... agni takes her hand and says.......who says i'm not sleeping....if this is not a dream...than what is it...my love sitting next to me looking beautiful in the moonlight (coming through the open window).....he puts niyatis hand on his heart and looks her deep in the eyes and says...ye dil har pal....sirf tumhare liye jeeta hai...sote jaagte sirf tumhe hi dekhta hai (haila what a romantic scene.. full credits goes to sharief for this scene..). Niyati is touched by his words and has a tear in her eye.. Jus when se is gonan say something Agni stops her. He touches her lips with his hands and says "shhhhh… you don't have to say anything.. Let's just enjoy this moment by dreaming away in each others eyes.." Agni then moves away to a drawer, opens it and takes out a wrapped present. He hands it to a curious Niyati, when she opens it, it turns out to be Sacred stick part 2 ****Agni Jyoti Jyoti Agni Swahaaaa….." Niyati is really surprised and says "Yeh aap humare liya laya hai?" Agni says "Haan ab hum matching sticks ke saat rahenge aur saath saath.. yeh bhajan gayen gaye.. Agni Jyoti Jyoti Agni SWAHAAA…….."
The looked into each other's eyes and with the sticks hand in hand lived happily ever after
THE END!!!!
guys.. this story had everything.. from romance to laughter to tears to some more laughter..
Thank you everyone who particpated 🤗 .. thank you so much guys!
all the credits goes to all the creative and goofy heads of this forum!!!
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