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Posted: 9 years ago
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If winter has come, can spring be far ??
Very nice and emotional update Indu di 👏👏
It was so nice of Dr. Sudhir who was so affectionate to Nidhi and felt good of the love between Ashni. His good wishes made them both smiling.
But what happened at the hospital with Nidhi ! It was so sad a situation. She was not able rather was not allowed to handle the baby and Anji's attitude was so different. It was shocking and very immature on her part.
Ashu knowing Nidhi's condition and not able to do anything at the time, he felt so helpless. I felt it. Rohan became the only solace and very rightly told everything to Ashu later.
Last scene was very emotional and touching. United in grief as they both have been in happiness. Loved Baba's lines can spring be so far ??
I wish Ashni soon get the colors of life and happiness knocks at their door !
Loved the chapter, loved how Ashu is doing every bit to let Pooja know the reports and to progress as she advise.
Thanks Indu di, loves ❤️
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nidhi was so happy as a Massi she was needed at the hospital. She was so happy that for next two days she will take care of Anji and her baby. She did not see her own cabin that was arranged by Ashu, but she opted to go to Anji. And Anji and her inlaws. What they did? They were not liking her presence there. And not letting her have the baby in her hands. It was very sad scene, and i felt very very bad for Nidhi!
Ashu is always there for her for sure, but sometimes other people's words and actions makes you so down that your loose confidence. Then only love and the one who feels you purely can give you the arms to cry, sob and to burst all that you had in your heart and was killing you.
Lovely to see Ashu there for Nidhi, consoling her without even talking her of what Rohan has told him. I wish Anji will behave more maturely next time, otherwise Nidhi can loose the charm of being the paediatrician and of taking care of the children's ward.
I wish the joy of becoming parents is there in AshNi's life and all gets settled. But happiness never comes flying over, it takes time and till then Ashu have Nidhi and Nidhi have Ashu to live a life looking forward and praying for the bliss they both are longing!
Indu di, very sensitive issue you have touched this time, and it went so well in your narration. Luv ya ❤️🤗
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Induji just loved the scene, ro lo...mann halka ho jaayega and as he just held her, together they stood...united in grief. Hats off to your narration, thank you sooo much .
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Posted: 9 years ago
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This is my 25000th post... n i have turned IF Stunners... 🥳
I find myself so lucky that my status changes at this thread... !
I started with Indu di's FF... n now have reached today this status... to get the blessings of Indu di... ! 🤗

Indu di... much regards... much love...



yours bawa



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Posted: 9 years ago
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.these are tiny steps towards an effort..the effort may fail..it may take time..u have to be very tough mentally
Yeah... Ashu has mentally prepared Nidhi n Nidhi knows that his hubby will do anything he can do for her... !

"sochta hoon aaj main bhi burger hi khaa loon"and nidhi laughed..a strange hope twinkling in her eyes...n Ashutosh just gave her fingers a squeeze as a silent prayer escaped his lips...
Beauty lies in the sweetness of the love that they feel for each other...


dr Priyanka studied the vitals n smiled at Nidhi..patting ger shoulder n said"kal se to join ker rahi hai as a paediatrician. ..to tu hi dekhegi baby ko..2 din.."!
Cud see Nidhi being so happy...


.but the baby's dadi replied"arre chodo..maine paale hain bachche..kitaab padhna aur palne alag alag hota hai..ab tum to na hi sikhaao beta..ki bachche kaise paalte hain"!!
Very sad ... Nidhi has gone thru so much that doesnt mean that she will have to suffer the ugly words...


.he was looking straight into her eyes...eyes that seemed to say.."nidhi...plzz...don't cry.."!
Loved the silent love..

"nidhijiii"it was Rohan..carrying a boquet of Red roses ..n one of mixed colours n a box of chocolates..hugging nidhi he said"arre phool to leejiye..apne nephew se koi khaali haath milta hai kya..main jaanta tha aap bhool jaayengi
Rohan is n will always be there for them... good that he told all to Ashu...

"i know tu paediatrician hai..per only a mother knows ki baby ko kya chahiye..dekho..mamma knows..mere raja ko bhooku lagi hai..dudu time..tell everyone to go..bye bye..."and a stunned nidhi looked up..
Anji was so insensitive... so immature.. so...


Nidhi went into her room..not switching on the light. .she wanted the darkness to envelope her..to engulf her..to swallow her..
I wish them light n brightness of lovely n happy life ahead..
Difficult time for the lonely Nidhi... she never thought that Anji cud ever...


."Rohan looked at Ashutosh n said"maine kabhi nahi socha tha ki Anjiji itti insensitive ho jaayengi..woh bhi nidhiji..jo unki bestie hain.."Ashu patted him n dighed"Rohan..apni khushi me quai baar hum doosron ke ghum bhool jaate hain...joy is a surge..its like a flood...takes quite a bit with itself..
Reality... sheer reality... ⭐️👏

Ashutosh sighed..he knew it was just the starting of a long drawn out battle..in which nidhi's emotional stability mattered a lot..he brought her close...n said as softly as possible..."ro lo..mann kuch halka ho jaayega.."!and Nidhi clutched onto his shirt n broke down silently at first then into uncontrolled sobs...as he just held her...cocooned from all that could hurt her...
Together they stood..united in grief ..as they had been in joy.
Unspoken beautiful love... unconditional care... pure concern... Only Ashu can give it to Nidhi... Bless them... !
Very well narrated.. !


Ashutosh softly kissed her neck n recalled something that baba had taught him.."if winter has come...can spring be far behind"???
.LETS HOPE ASHNI GET COLOURS OF LIFE

Very right n natural... Lets hope what you have hoped Indu di...
Very nice n an emotional touch to what we say ... Dil ka dard samjhe dilwala... !
Thnkuu... 🤗

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Congrats to Bawa bro on turning IF Stunners ! 🥳
Have made a thread on his achievement, please see the link :





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Posted: 9 years ago
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Indu Ji yet another terrific update. You have such amazing writing skills. It was an emotional roller coaster ride. So the hardstone ate a burger for his love. ;)

Anji's in-laws are so backward , for them still a boy is everything forgetting a women is the one who goes through all sorts of torture to bring the baby in the world , nurture her and go through physical mental stress.

Motherly feelings finally develop in Anji , in her moment of happiness she forgot her best friend who has been part of her from such a small age . But that was natural.

Rohan is such an amazing friend who understood the storm Anji had created in Niddhi's life and he was worried for her. He is the best friend Niddhi got even Ashutosh they both are blessed .

Baba is sensible knows how and when he has to step down.

Lovely update.

Mid Semester Exams starting from 4th April , need to prepare BS in Psychology is so tough .. need a lot of time for all the subjects ; so a short review will be back after the exams.

My IF on desktop is still troubling me , congratulations Bawa Bhai on getting the Stunner Status.

Hope all is well at everybody's end.
Edited by Minahil96 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: bawaswift

This is my 25000th post... n i have turned IF Stunners... 🥳

I find myself so lucky that my status changes at this thread... !
I started with Indu di's FF... n now have reached today this status... to get the blessings of Indu di... ! 🤗

Indu di... much regards... much love...



yours bawa



Congratulations Bawa...the fact is that my stories are incomplete without u!
U have always stood by me n i shall never forget that!!
Love u son..u are simply the best
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: snehatanu

Induji just loved the scene, ro lo...mann halka ho jaayega and as he just held her, together they stood...united in grief. Hats off to your narration, thank you sooo much .

Yes that was the best shot...specially bcoz Ashu had said just an update back that he couldn't see tears in her eyes!!
But he understands nidhi needs to cry to heal!
First i had written a long sentimental para for ashu but then i rubbed it n wrote just this one line...bcoz ashu is a man of few words...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: indu6789

Congratulations Bawa...the fact is that my stories are incomplete without u!
U have always stood by me n i shall never forget that!!
Love u son..u are simply the best

🤗 🤗 🤗

You are very special for me Di... 🤗

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