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Tasha1994

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Posted: 9 years ago

#71

how is ur health now zannat hope u are feeling better

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Swaminathan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#72

Nice ff...pm me wid ur next upd8

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Babita

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Posted: 9 years ago

#73

Wow, many chapters in one go ! Zannat this may take time in reading and then reviewing.

Can i review separately to every chapter, or U want the review in one comment ??

Edited by babita.. - 9 years ago

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Tasha1994

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Posted: 9 years ago

#74

Originally posted by: zakter
I'll prefer separately 😊

ok zannat will post them

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jahanaara

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Posted: 9 years ago

#75

Bahot khoobsoorat chapter hai Zannat thankq so much.

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Tasha1994

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Posted: 9 years ago

#76

Part 3

Wonderful update raman di. Really loved the update .really loved the emotions ashni are going through loved ashu liking nidhi hair and flawless skin. Shows that he is slow are falling in love with her. Really loving their love hate relationship. Wow nidhi working as a teacher. Really liked the scene where she tells ashu that shaanti to do a job. Really loved the scene when ashu carries nidhi to the room. Loved the slight romance between them. Nidhi held ashu hand thinking it to be vicky. Really loved a lot it showed nidhi emotions very well. Hope nidhi forgets vicky soon. Really loved the party scene a lot. Wow ashu got attracted to nidhi when she wore the sari. Really loved the dance scene alot. Thanks for posting the update zannat. Will comment on the other updates tomorrow

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Swati Kapoor

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Posted: 9 years ago

#77

Part 3 -

A mesmerizing update i must say Raman di 👏

Journey has started and the couple have reached their home. I loved Nidhi taking a relaxed sleep over her hubby's shoulders, though both did not wish to like it. 😳

Nidhi's inner trauma has over powered her emotions totally and she can't think of a happy married life, even to give it a chance. Liked the flourished well decorated home of Ashu! But the dwellers are two with many a servants to serve! Meeting Maria seems good to her.

It was a good watch of Ashu observing his beautiful wife and Nidhi her handsome husband. The pull is gaining it's pace and they won't be left liking each other at least.😊 I loved Nidhi telling him that she wants to teach as a profession. Loved her confidence high amidst the tensed times.👏

The most brilliant lines comes with the fact that Ashu was cursing his brother for breaking Nidhi's delicate heart. It was solemn beauty of Ashu's heart and his care and concern were shown when he took her to her room. Awesome!!!

Cute fighting talks continued that i enjoyed 😳 😉

Armaan's party! I loved Nidhi dressing up as the most precious living being on the Earth. Soon Ashu will become a dreamy man of dreaming her beauty and her simplicity. ⭐️

The party went right and straight to what it had to be until the entry of mallika. The dance and the stunned audience have seen a lovely couple who are made for each other. But the very moment got snatched away from Ashu's " friend ". Did not like her presence and even Nidhi standing alone to witness the drama.

Will read the next and review. Thanks so much Zannat for this sheer beauty! Luv ya ❤️🤗

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Swati Kapoor

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Posted: 9 years ago

#78

Part 4 -

Nice progress in the story, loved it Raman di 👏

Mallika tried her best to shake the life of AshNi and got success. But the rage of emotions and fight later on made Nidhi getting closer and formal to Ashu. I liked her bursting out of how she felt over mallika's cheap gestures and attitude. But how Ashu took the charge - it was outstanding, i mean he managed to feel free of every charges with his sense of dominating!

Rohan is liking Nidhi as a deep lover and is well observed by Ashutosh!

My my what a glance he noticed in Rohan's eyes and the jealousy took over him. I loved Nidhi leaving the dinner and went with Ashu. Loved her smiles on talking of her new job and even Ashu liked her face beaming.

The faulty laptop did a good twist for Nidhi once again confronting Ashu. Helping Vicky every time of his life has made him a spoil brat. And Nidhi is right in telling Ashu his faults. But the rounds of accusations have resulted in a hated kiss for both. I feel Ashu was longing this kiss and Nidhi was all through waiting for it too 😳 😉

Beautiful explanations of turmoils and joys going parallel with much sadness hidden is out at some level. This is what happening between Ashu and Nidhi. Loving this story and can't resist reading more 😉

Thanks Zannat for posting many chapters in one go 😃 Will read more and review. Take care, luv ya ❤️ 🤗

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Bhavit Kapoor

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Posted: 9 years ago

#79

Part three..

Good one.. thanks Raman di... ⭐️👏

I have sensed one thing... The heartsone Ashu can melt if some one force him to.. ! 😉

Yeah he can... 😳

Loved the way both approaching towards the life.. ! Nidhi taking up the teaching career n Ashu reaching heights in his own.. ! Loved to see Nidhi getting the job by her own n Anji all the way helping her as a true supporter.. !

Nidhi has got an invisible support from Ashu in the name of good home,, permission or a nod to try for the job,, and her privacy with Anji... ! She is living a luxury life... but without love,, n companionship.. ! Good life consists of all the issues... but without love the life seems like a dull n a forced one..

Looking like a Goddess... Ashu got bowled over with Nidhi's beauty.. Wow.. ! She is gorgeous... n what a stunning beauty that stunned the man like Ashu... 😉

Party thrown by Armaan was good.. n the glory that Ashu n Nidhi had with their impact upon every one present.. Loved them dancing.. loved them so close like heavenly bliss upon them..

But ye mallu kahaan se aa gayi...

Dont like her here taunting n teasing the " happy couple "... ! Last scene... even i was standing bewildered.. Perfect song in the background.. Teri meri prem kahaani hai mushkil...

More later... thanks dear Zannat... an Awesome job by you sis... ! 👏

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Tasha1994

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Posted: 9 years ago

#80

chapter 4
wonderful update Raman di .really loved it a lot wonderful progress in the story .so Mallika is ashu's ex girlfriend. but I am glad ashu is ignoring her.liked the way nidhi confronted ashu after getting to know that mallu was Ashus girlfriend. so nidhi joined her job loving her bond with her friends.so Rohan likes nidhi .liked the bond between nidhi and Tia .liked the party scene a lot .where nidhi went with ashu .liked the laptop scene a lot first .loved the scene where nidhi gets to know ashu is helping Vicky .loved their confrontation a lot and last the punishing kiss was awesome thanks a lot for this wonderful update Raman di .really love your writing style .I also started to read your other stories on the khm forum. really love your stories. thanks a lot zannat for posting such a wonderful story over here.

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