SS:TUJHSE NARAAZ NAHI ZINDAGI CHAPTER:6 Last part UPDTD PG:67 22/09/16 - Page 43

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: jayasree.rao


Hello Aazeen! I am a regular reader.pl.see the like clicks.
As I am reading through my phone I am lazy to post replies.
Infact since the end of April I am with our second son in the USA.
Read and reread all the five chapters.
Pl. Update as and when it is convenient.
We are dependent on our regular dose only on Induji and you.
So we will.
Wish you a happy Ramzan month.

Hehehe... Okay...😃
I won't disappoint you all really...
I will complete this story in another update...
The good news is I have already started writing for my first book...
Would be ready for publishing by the end of this year Inshallah...
So you see, I will be giving some or the other piece of my writing...
And obviously, IF is my home, I can always come here to write as much as I want...😃
Just need you all to keep on giving me this unwavering support you all have been giving me for the past 4 years...😳😃
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: bawaswift

Wo junooon hi tha jisne humein unse mila diya...

Aaj ye pal kho na jaayen bas yahi junoon baaki hai...
-- Ghustakhi ke liye maafi... Par wo kya kehte hain... Deir aaye par durust aaye... Toh lo ji... Hum aa gaye...😆
Veerji, aaj bata hi deejiye, ye sher-o-shayari aap kab se karne lag gaye hain? dekh rahi hu pichle kayi reviews ki shuruaat aapki kisi poetry se hi hoti hai...😉😃

Loved the update.. ! ⭐️👏
I mean this is the strong Nidhi i have seen... she can respond so well to the taunts she is facing at this phase of time.. ! She is marrying... n living her life,, God dammit... whats the probs of the world... ??/
-- I can exactly say here that- Kuch toh log kahenge, logon ka kaam hai kehna...
But! Enough is enough... At certain point one stops caring what people say...🤢

N even her sibling is angry with her... ! Gosh... ! I hated the couple echoing those words ... n her bhabhi accusing her of... 😲 Kya Nidhi ko khush hone ka haq nahi tha... ??/ She has given good 15 yrs to you... now plzz let her live the way she always had to...
-- Your family are your support, but they never are your property... They are mere mortal living beings who need happiness as much as you wish for... This is what Nidhi basically has been a victim of...

Ashu well took over the charge of her n said everything so politely... n aptly... perfect as hubby ,,, 👏 And Baba,,, he did what was desired.. what was expected from him... ⭐️⭐️
-- Exactly, they have turned her guardian angles for her... They are there for her... Thats the best thing...

Today Nidhi has a hubby very loving hubby... a good n understanding family with a protective father... what she has got from the sacrifice of her love n emotions... ! God's been good to the couple... n here the two lovers who gave off their happiness for the wishes of society... have got themselves.. n that forever.. !
-- "I took from you, return I shall; that's the promise of God, he knows what is better for you"... It took her loads of heart pain, distances, lost relations; to stand where she is now... Atleast she shall be at peace for the rest of her life...😊

Beautifully written the emotional n hard part where you had to deal with the relations... Aazu a great job well done.. ! ⭐️👏

Dont underestimate my sis ever... she is always up to the mark... !
Not humble this time as well... 😳😉😆

God bless you... !

-- Thanks a lot Veerji... They mean a lot to me... Thank you for all the encouragement...😃
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Swatishubh

It has turned out very well sweetie 👏

Thanks a ton bhabhi...😃
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Swatishubh

I loved Nidhi smilingly replying to the neighbor's unwanted queries. I loved her reciprocating in the same tone that the world understands. 👏
-- Bohot lagaa li chuppi, kuch todne ka waqt aa gaya... Kya hua gar kuch ke dil aur kuch ki gair-zaruri himmat bhi toot gayi...😉

Nidhi nodded, and looked at Ashutosh, whose face shone brighter than the sun, to have her in his home; their home... Finally! She couldn't herself resist the happy grin that contagiously came to her face looking at him... He was happy, how wouldn't she be happy... No matter what the world did to them, it's no time to think about the negativity. It's time to live... Live for self and for the ones who really are happy with her happiness.
The theme of the story, and happiness knocking their door. Well expressed! 👏
-- Yeah! Happiness has slowly started knocking their door... Maana kisi ko mukammal jahaan nahi milta, lekin usey uska jahaan toh mil jaaye pehle...😊

Aazu, this was not an easy update, yet you have come out emotionally so well, loved it!
-- Thank you loads bhabhi...😃

No marriage ceremony, and only reception taking place. Cud understand well how it was rough to pen down the simple ceremony and then showing the reception.
-- I think the relevance also wasn't there to show the entire ceremony...😛

Loved how Ashu has arranged the function. Minimum possible people and a grand heart to embrace her. Where i loved this, i equally hated Nidhi's so called family so far. I hated them researching for the words that society holds. I hated them to make Nidhi's function a miserable one as per their words.
But i loved Ashu and Baba fully supporting Nidhi and becoming her family at once.
-- Nidhi's family are the final threads of the left pieces of attachments that try and hurt her... But from here on, they are either supposed to behave, or leaving is already an option given...😡

jo pyaar, aur sirf pyaar, understanding and care ke basis par bhi saath rehte hain.
I loved Ashu saying this cos he is the witness of her and his own plight that they have suffered!
-- Exactly!

You have thrown her out, and I have married her, so you don't have to think about her anymore... Aur rahi baat bachhon ki, toh who gives the guarantee out there that every couple must have kids of their own when they are marrying... That's all the Almighty's wish...
He is so right 👏 Every one have done their duties - good or bad, now it's in God's hands what they get from this marriage!
-- This is a question really out of my mind, its the problem of the couple, what they want and what they get... Why has the society to keep on telling them what shall happen...😡

She had immediately gone into those fatherly arms, hiding her face in his chest, as he continued saying- "Hum dekh lenge hum apni beti ko kaise khush rakhenge... Aap logon ko chinta karne ki bilkul zaroorat nahi hai...
She got what she longed so far! A father who protects her, and a husband who is there with her in her goods and odds. 👏
-- The ultimate relief... Good or not, kids or not... She has finally found harmony and peace... That's foremost...😃
Loved the way you have portrayed the social issue of late marriage Aazu, luv ya❤️🤗
Kuch toh log kahenge, chodo bekaar ki baatein!!!
-- Point exactly taken... Late marriage social issue... Highly hyped... Especially in a narrow thought society... Found it a path breaker though...😃
Will wait for the post marriage scenario and AshNi's new life together ❤️
-- Yup! That shall be the last update... Coming soon... Before I resume with my book writing...😃

-- Thank you once again bhabhi for this detailed wonderful review... Love you so much!❤️🤗
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Aazeen02

Ramzan Mubarak to you too Veerji... May all your wishes come true...

PS: Bhabhi kahan hain?

So rahi hai,,, she will come here in our morning,,, me the only one who has no time n energy to sleep these days... 😆
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: bawaswift


So rahi hai,,, she will come here in our morning,,, me the only one who has no time n energy to sleep these days...😆

Oh my dear poor Veerji... Exhausting yourself, majboori hai... No time to sleep, samajh mein aata hai... par no energy to sleep,... eheh, hum jaise kam dimaag Ko ye baat samajh nahi aayi... 🤓 Sone ke liye toh kahin ek jagah baithna bhi kaafi hai... 😆
But if to trust my sister's words, they have even attempted sleeping, standing against the wall, when they were given 72 hours continuous duty during her internship...
So what kind of drained energy are you talking about mere bhai... Sona bhi toh zaroori hai na... you may get sick otherwise...
Take very good care of yourself... ok?

And will wait for bhabhi... 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Aazeen02

Oh my dear poor Veerji... Exhausting yourself, majboori hai... No time to sleep, samajh mein aata hai... par no energy to sleep,... eheh, hum jaise kam dimaag Ko ye baat samajh nahi aayi... 🤓 Sone ke liye toh kahin ek jagah baithna bhi kaafi hai... 😆
But if to trust my sister's words, they have even attempted sleeping, standing against the wall, when they were given 72 hours continuous duty during her internship...
So what kind of drained energy are you talking about mere bhai... Sona bhi toh zaroori hai na... you may get sick otherwise...
Take very good care of yourself... ok?

And will wait for bhabhi... 😃

😆

Really Aazu, he has no time for sleeps these days. And energy is all lost in work, work and work!
I've stopped bothering him for the groceries even. Going alone is too hectic for me but i have to. he is much busier than ever. No energy for sleep means he gets busy with Indian ppl there during the day time there, and gets no time to sleep and gets exhausted every time.
Am taking care of his this routine, but sometimes ends up in a big cute pout from him and then i surrender. He is occupied with work, but you wanna guess? His manufactured items have been given a good name here. The goods are needed by almost every company. Every highs have their disadvantages, so are here.

How about you? How is everything at home and studies?
luv ya ❤️🤗
Edited by Swatishubh - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Aazeen02

-- Thanks a lot Veerji... They mean a lot to me... Thank you for all the encouragement...😃

You rock dear... never doubts... !
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: bawaswift

You rock dear... never doubts... !


Ya me the witness..😃 Bro writes awesome..truly beautiful poetry written by him at Youtube..really missing those fun n good times we all used to had there...n also here at forum..missing my Youtube buddies..n Ktlk friends..a lott..🤗
Edited by floridadoc - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago


Girl is missing...

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