SS:TUJHSE NARAAZ NAHI ZINDAGI CHAPTER:6 Last part UPDTD PG:67 22/09/16 - Page 4

Originally posted by: Swatishubh

For me Aazu, i cud feel when the two lovers got separated, they had to live for their families, had to smile, had to possess a faith in each other, with time going away from their hands.

Yes they are not annoyed with their life, but they are amazed to see how the world can be looked so happy without their happiness shared? Deep thoughts - They wanted to live a life with each other, full of love, and ecstacy if they can call it. But they will have to shed tears all alone, not even with each other cos they are separated by the cruelty of the family. They have to make their pains their treasures and their love as their companion of memories.

Jeene ke liye socha hi nahi dard sambhalne honge

Originally posted by: Amreen...

Wonderful thoughts swati...
Loved to read the depth of the title in your words...
Beautifully presented...

Originally posted by: Swatishubh

For me Aazu, i cud feel when the two lovers got separated, they had to live for their families, had to smile, had to possess a faith in each other, with time going away from their hands.

Yes they are not annoyed with their life, but they are amazed to see how the world can be looked so happy without their happiness shared? Deep thoughts - They wanted to live a life with each other, full of love, and ecstacy if they can call it. But they will have to shed tears all alone, not even with each other cos they are separated by the cruelty of the family. They have to make their pains their treasures and their love as their companion of memories.

Jeene ke liye socha hi nahi dard sambhalne honge

Originally posted by: sshirley

Hi. Aaz,

Thanks for the pm

-- Hi Shirley Di...😃

You are welcome for the PM...

Wow a new story!! From one of best writers !!😃

-- Please don't embarrass me di... I keep on giving myself a reality check... And I certainly am not one of the best... I just try to do my best...😳

Really looking forward to it.

-- Hopefully I do the same justice di...😳

Loved the concept... Esp the profession u have chosen for Ashu.. So true.. No one will get their daughter mrd to a writer, much less a budding one... U know there is a sentence I often hear - writers bhookhe marte hain

-- Qismat achhi ho toh aaj kal writers bhi bhookhe nahi marte...😆

But yeah! I am just horror struck with the regressive thinking of the society...

I don't remember where I read or heard, but truely said- Parents aren't giving birth to kids, but marksheets... Everyone wants to transform their kids to high profile professionals... No matter where their happiness lies... And the wishlist doesn't end there... they would marry them to those high professionals only... Because, Writers, painters, struggling musicians, budding business man, are just meant to ghisofy their chappals on road according to the "HIGH THINKING" society we have...

But thank you for liking the concept of my story...😳

I do have a title for the concept as far as I have understood it - Bin phere hum tere

-- Phere toh ji hum karwa ke hi rahenge...😆 Lekin kab, wo ghaur-talab hoga...😉

Jokes apart, thank you very much di for your help...

I really respect them...

I couldn't use it, for the story wouldn't move that way...

My mistake... I probably haven't put the prologue that properly...

Circumstances you see...😆

Any way, thank you very much di for coming here, reading it, and commenting... I really am honoured...😃

Originally posted by: Tasha1994

thanks for this new story aazeen. of to read it a get back with a review

Originally posted by: Tasha1994

wonderful update aazeen. liked it a lot .a very wonderful concept. ashutosh is a struggling writer and nidhis family is not ready to get them married because of that .really such a wonderful concept really liked the idea of ashu being a writer .thanks a lot for a new story. really liked it