OS: On the Cusp of Paradise..Ch. 3 on P-28.please see p-41 - Page 3

Originally posted by: Swatishubh

Hi Shirls 🤗

Read the magnificent start to the OS 👏 New idea commenced with much to debate and more to elaborate! Liked the idea of implementing a law that can create controversies.

Will give my review tomorrow. 😳

Originally posted by: Ashni1234

A wonderful story Shirley ji .loved it a lot .

Loved Ashni's relationship in your os

love mallika in your os. Wish she was the same In the show

a lovely os

waiting for the next update

Originally posted by: Tasha1994

Lovely update Shirley .

Thank u Tasha.

Liked the story a lot . thanks for posting this story

I m glad.. u r welcome.

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Loved mallika and Nidhi's relationship in this os.

hmm.. its a different thing I m ttrying here.. but is it easy for anyone to change?

hope it was the same in the show.

hmmm..

Liked the concept of the story a lot

I m really happy u liked the concept.. did u understand whats the concept from the first part itself..?😛

Waiting for the next update. Waiting to see what is there in the reports

will try asap

Originally posted by: amreen_ashni

Wow! Mind blowing story Shirley... Even you write so well... Stopped the story at such a cliffhanger OMG... can't wait to read the next update... Your AshNi are so sweet and understanding... Mallika is such a changed personality... unbelievable... She is so supportive and loving towards Nidhi... I like this new Mallika very much. The theme u chose is so different and good. Using Aruna shaunbag's case as an example was a great point... Nidhi is ready to start a family... can imagine Ashutosh's expressions at that revelation and his enthusiasm to become a dad as well as Nidhi's anticipation to experience motherhood. She will be an excellent mom. In all this was an amazing story with a superb theme... looking forward to read more... continue soon...
Love
Amreen

Originally posted by: sss97

Shirley its just amazing.. loved reading mallika being that positive here.

Thank u Swathi.. I m glad u liked Mallika

Loved the conversation about euthanasia..

Thanks

all their views are right in their own way.

what do u think abt it?

Its was an icing on the cake after Nidhi had joined them.. and the khadoos n the later dialogs were just so perfect. That's the way these two are chalk n cheese but at the end they are one.
Waiting for the next one.

hmn.. I was just trying to show how Ashu n nidhi have same views but express differently.. moreover its easy to be positive n preach to others na?

So the lone tear that had escaped from mallika's eye proves that Nidhi is pregnant... So waiting to see Ashutosh's reaction n.
nidhi's too

hmm wait n watch.. also pl. tk part in discussions
And please continue sooonnn...