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.khaleesi.

@.khaleesi.

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Posted: 10 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: Swatishubh
Nice and full of AshNi's love! Purely magical beauty of their feelings and all doubts cleared. Liked the way you have expressed how Ashu needs time to gradually feel all the feelings of love and it's awesome phase.❤️
Thanks Amreen, for sharing this story with us. Going to the other forum and start finding a good story becomes so difficult.😳 Glad that you have written this Ashni version here. Loved it to the core!🤗

Thanks dear... Ashu is an introvert and a person with baggage of a painful past so it is not so easy for him to come out of his shell. Nidhi will help him to come out of the past and discover the feeling of love by being at his side. I had felt th a this would become an amazing Ashni story if it is modified a bit so here I presented this for u all..

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Babita

@babita..

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Posted: 10 years ago

#12

Lovely OS Amreen 👏👏

For first, i just loved Ashu and Nidhi's friendship that's taking a lovely turn and they both have acknowleged that 😊 The most beautiful part is when Ashu confessed his attraction or infatuation and told her about the doubts of he had. But the cute moments occur and they both have forward a step to their lovely journey ahead.

Ashu has a sad past, but Nidhi will deffo take him out. And this has given a boost to Ashu and he is all set to give this relation a chance. Loved to see him wishing new and surprising things from Nidhi in the form of her love to him.

I wish to see more chapters here, but if U are holding it here it's fine. Amreen, i love your way of narrating the scenes. Dildaara -- Ashni and Ashni and their love !!!! 🤗

Thanks for sharing this fab phase with us ❤️

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Ana

@..oneOone..

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+ 6

Posted: 10 years ago

#13

Hey dear...

Sorry, I didn't want to comment but then I had to because this story to me looked like an inspired version of Mish aka sharmishtha's story dhoop kinare(adaptation)

https://mishfiction.wordpress.com/2013/01/09/dhoop-kinare-adaptation-part-25/

the whole scene of nidhi calling ashu over to his home for surprize bday party was just like that...also ashu warning about her safety...the kiss...

I m not saying that you shouldnt be inspired but do give credit to original writer...

tc n all the best for your coming stories.

Ana

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Babita

@babita..

Sparkler

Posted: 10 years ago

#14

Hi Amreen, where are U ??

Please reply to my review 😊 missing you 🤗

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.khaleesi.

@.khaleesi.

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: ..oneOone..
Hey dear...
Sorry, I didn't want to comment but then I had to because this story to me looked like an inspired version of Mish aka sharmishtha's story dhoop kinare(adaptation)

https://mishfiction.wordpress.com/2013/01/09/dhoop-kinare-adaptation-part-25/

the whole scene of nidhi calling ashu over to his home for surprize bday party was just like that...also ashu warning about r safety...the kiss...

I m not saying that you shouldnt be inspired but do give credit to original writer...

tc n all the best for your coming stories.

Ana

It's just a coincidence that my story is like yours. I had not even read that story. Infact I read that after I read your comment and believe me or not this is purely my own creation. The idea popped up in my head and I penned it down. Plz don't think that I stole your story or your idea. Your story was a very nice one but see the story after the kiss is different. In your story they were in love and in mine it's just that they have realised their liking for each other and want to explore the feeling of love together. Our themes are completely different so plz I don't think that the credit of my OS goes to you.
I hope you have understood...
Thanks

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.khaleesi.

@.khaleesi.

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: babita..
Lovely OS Amreen👏👏
For first, i just loved Ashu and Nidhi's friendship that's taking a lovely turn and they both have acknowleged that😊The most beautiful part is when Ashu confessed his attraction or infatuation and told her about the doubts of he had. But the cute moments occur and they both have forward a step to their lovely journey ahead.
Ashu has a sad past, but Nidhi will deffo take him out. And this has given a boost to Ashu and he is all set to give this relation a chance. Loved to see him wishing new and surprising things from Nidhi in the form of her love to him.
I wish to see more chapters here, but if U are holding it here it's fine. Amreen, i love your way of narrating the scenes. Dildaara -- Ashni and Ashni and their love !!!!🤗
Thanks for sharing this fab phase with us❤️

Thanks dear for the review... It's too good... Yes as Ashu is a very reserved person... so letting someone into his heart so easily is difficult. He would surely discover love with his companion by his side... Thanks for loving my narration... Thank u so much... I am planning to write a new os also and I m sure you will like it too... Thanks again
Hugs and love
Amreen

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Babita

@babita..

Sparkler

Posted: 10 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: amreen_ashni

Thanks dear for the review... It's too good... Yes as Ashu is a very reserved person... so letting someone into his heart so easily is difficult. He would surely discover love with his companion by his side... Thanks for loving my narration... Thank u so much... I am planning to write a new os also and I m sure you will like it too... Thanks again
Hugs and love
Amreen

Wow, will wait for the new OS dear

Love U too 🤗