OS : Ashni Part 5 pg 18 - Page 13

Originally posted by: Tasha1994

waiting

Originally posted by: snehatanu

very nice and interesting story. Thanks .

Originally posted by: bawaswift

Very nice ending Swathi... ⭐️👏

Dubey ji as usual had no time to listen to any of them,, this was funny,, 😛

Scolding Ashu n Baba n then getting the reality from Ashu was much terrible a scene..,. But at last Dubey ji ne kasht kar hi liya sunne ka.. 😆

Loved Ashu's response to him over his doubts of this marriage.. Loved Baba's reply as well 😊

And seriously with time even Dubey got to know that this relationship is so smooth n very loving which went n got 100% n not only 50 50..

Nice to know once again the family n Ashu supporting Nidhi n Nidhi also made them proud..

Thanks Swathi,, n once again thanks for sharing your ideas n improvising track of this phase.. !!! 👏👏

Originally posted by: Swatishubh

Hi Swathi, thanks for this fine way of Ashu telling the truth to Dd and all misunderstandings cleared. 👏 Your way simplifies why Ashu and Nidhi are AshNi and how they are so compatible with their love is superior to all the doubts! ❤️

DD's intentions are genuine but all this went into the hilarious direction, yet the message that Ashu has given to him is awesome part of this story. ⭐️⭐️

I loved Baba's words to see Nidhi from his eyes -- she do what no one can do for the home and family. And there is nothing as a demerit in her. How true, she has taken up the charge of home and work so brilliantly and her love and care makes her know Ashu better than anyone in the world!!! Loved it!!!👏

Their relationship needs no proofs to prove how far they will go, it's just the matter of time that people will come to know what AshNi are and their love is!

Fabulous piece of work Swathi, loved the OS😊 Pls do come with more stories as you have taken a scene from the show. Keep writing dearie, loved your work! 👏⭐️👏

Originally posted by: babita..

Thanks Swathi, for this very nice story with your thoughts sharing with us. 👏👏

Dr. Dubey had to stop somewhere and he did for getting to know the truth. Loved Ashu telling him and clarify every thing.

On Dubey's doubts, i just loved how Ashu told him that Mallika is not his love and it's the true love and Nidhi's naughtiness that made him closer to her. 😳

Loved more when Baba told him Nidhi and her being a very good daughter in law who knows Ashu much than anyone else. Baba has rightly said that waqt ke saath in dono ke pyar per naaz hoga.

Very sweet OS and lovely way to have the pardafash. ⭐️⭐️ Loved every part and every scene, enjoyed it very very much. Loves ❤️

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( sorry, i read it in the evening buy had to study for my tomorrow morning's exam, so could not post the review. Glad that i could post it now 😊 )