FF - Piya ka Ghar - Pt 6 Pg 33 - Page 16

Originally posted by: sshirley

Hey Uma, how u doing

I read both chapter 3 &4 and absolutely loved both. I will give u a review for both separately in 2-3 days sorry I need the right mood to pen a review.

When is the next? Are u planning weekly updates?

Originally posted by: bawaswift

Very nice n thoughtful update Uma,,, ⭐️👏

Got the feeling of how things are so worse in sum cases,, when it comes to alliances of one family with the other.. ! The class apart,, the middle class to the high class.. The difference of opinions n their impact upon the two families straightly hurting the lives of the two ppl in love.. n whose marriage is gonna take place..

Armaan is a gift to Ktlk and to Ashni.. !! 😃 He is so understanding n his friendship with Ashu is remarkable.. ! I get so touched whenever he said.. " Meri jaan " to Ashu.🤗. As if a bond is shown with knowing each other fully.. ! Loved him cos he loves Ashu n his decision.. His caring nature n he wanted to spoil the teenager Ashu,, 😛😛😉 Quite interesting,, But Haaah !!! Ashu became a sanyasi by then..😛

Vidya... Uff ye vidya... 😕 Why ?? 😕 Just why she is not understanding her bro's emotions,, ??/ Sad,, Her love for Ashu is so different.. n she thinks that she can change his mind so engrossed in love for Nidhi.. ? No ways .. But i so wish that she wud kinda understand their love n will change her mind.. ! This is my dream.. Hope it becomes a reality.. 😳

Nidhi n her mother are so helpless.. n going thru the same.. ! Nidhi's asking silently to her mother abt any news.. n her mother wanna try every bit to ask Mathurs.. but even she has limitations.. ! A fear of the Gents at her n Anji's home.. ! 70's period is described so finely.. Loved to read this part.. !!! The inner thoughts are very precise.. !!!

When Nidhi's father came n talked abt the new alliance.. I just was imagining Nidhi bursting into tears n later a line told me the same.. Uma this was very sad part n cud relate Nidhi's pains n her pleadings are for none..

Mallika,,, umm,, Vidya at the door.. Nahiii,, what she is here for.. ??/ 😕

Ashu ji all set not to marry.. Nidhi in all her shocks n tears waiting for his call who promised a life ahead with her.. Yog Sir is so feeling insulted that the new boy's family's same status means every thing to him,,, n now Vidya at their home.,

Kya kahun... Just waiting .. !

Uma.. your written work is smashing.. ⭐️👏It looks so simple to read n the progression is very nice.. ! 👏

Originally posted by: Chitrathan

Superb FF.

Originally posted by: Anjani9

Uma, The story is progressing well...👏

Originally posted by: Tasha1994

wonderful update

Originally posted by: shobha21

Very nice update Uma 👏.

Nice to see Armaan was there to support Ashu. Armaan ke bina Ashu adhura hai.

Aapne phir se Nidhi ka heart break kiya 😭poor girl, felt bad for Nidhi and Ashu.

I had a feeling that Armaan also had a painful past because of Vidya. What happened between them?? Is he married now??

Nidhi's father has come up with a new alliance. It was very shocking.

Now Vidya is there at the door, what is she up to??

Can't wait to read the next part please continue soon.

Thank you so much for the update Uma.