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Posted: 11 years ago
#91
Vidisha Aunty you better go underground.

Ashutosh is being coaxed into a marriage of convenience: and he has also agreed?

This Lallanji has two wives? nice names. Kaushalya and sumitra. Why not a Kaikeyi?

And what if Radhika declines from this? or maybe Ashutosh will put false teeth or something else like that FF Sujatha Aunty wrote (naam bhool gayi)

Adv Tripathi's thinking is typical of UP lawyer.

Nice development. This Sumitra appears like a rebel.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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A forced relation taking place with everyone content for one thing or the other.
Ashu's dreams, and his inspirations gets cleared though at some point. The co- wives of Lallanji are true mothers to Radhika, hope she is more lke them. But she won't be --- we are quite and reassured by the writerji 😛😉
A marriage of convenience for the groom and for the bride ?
Waiting for the next.. Good continuation Vidisha 👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: s_danger

Vidisha Aunty you better go underground.

Ashutosh is being coaxed into a marriage of convenience: and he has also agreed?

This Lallanji has two wives? nice names. Kaushalya and sumitra. Why not a Kaikeyi?

And what if Radhika declines from this? or maybe Ashutosh will put false teeth or something else like that FF Sujatha Aunty wrote (naam bhool gayi)

Adv Tripathi's thinking is typical of UP lawyer.

Nice development. This Sumitra appears like a rebel.



Thanks for reading dear...I will go underground after posting the last chapter...I would have to go and seek refuge in some bomb shelter...

Kaikeyi nahi ho sakta...koi apni beti ka naam kaikeyi nahi rakhtha na

Ashu won't do anything to scare Radhika off

Yes...Tripathi is a typical UP wala lawyer
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: babita68

A forced relation taking place with everyone content for one thing or the other.

Ashu's dreams, and his inspirations gets cleared though at some point. The co- wives of Lallanji are true mothers to Radhika, hope she is more lke them. But she won't be --- we are quite and reassured by the writerji 😛😉
A marriage of convenience for the groom and for the bride ?
Waiting for the next.. Good continuation Vidisha 👏



Marriage of convenience is more common than we think...not everyone marries for love...

If two people know what they are entering into and have consented to the marriage then things may work out in the end...The famed Jodha-Akbar marriage was a marriage of convenience wasn't it?

Not all people who marry for love are happy in the end...and a majority of marraige of convenience too breed resentment.

The important question is whether Radhika agrees to this marriage whole heartedly? if yes...then it is fine...if no then there is trouble in store for Ashu boy...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Great to have new FF from you Vidishaji!! 👍🏼 But... hope you continue till last chapter this time 😆

Read the intro. and Ch-1. Hasratein... title itself is suggestive 😳 I never watched the TVshow with same name, so no idea of any background as yet but gonna look for it on wikipedia now. 😃

Superb start with first update!! 👏 The political ambiance and chhote-mote politicians are portrayed perfectly. Ashuji hates politics and bureaucracy and not a party animal either... Then this must be a headache thingy for his father Adv. Tripathiji. Lallanji seems to be shrewd and having some personal interest in Dr. Ashutosh.

The handsome hunk Ashutosh has no particular interest in girls ogling at him but he certainly enjoys attention that he receives from them 😃 Both Ashu and Nidhi are grey-shaded in this FF means both will be having their own set of hasratein and flings-stories?? Off to read Ch-2 now.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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I have written the entire story...don't worry about me stopping abruptly😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Went thru the wikipage for Hasratein. The hero-heroine there are married and have children too - from their spouse as well as from this EMA. Wonder what will Ashu and Nidhi do in this FF...

Disclaimer in the beginning and Ashu's character is unfolding in first para itself... Hope the ADs spare you 😆 Ashu has 'enjoyed' a lot in London but this time all arrangements are done within 4 walls of his own house... Daad deni padegi Ashumiya ki himmat ki!! The "demure" maid Kajri become Ashutosh's Rambha at night... Bhola ko sula deneka intezaam bhi AshuSahib khud hi karte hai!! Being a Dr. himself, arranging for prescription soporifics is no big deal for him. Kya hoga jab Alok Tripathi ko iss baare mein pata chalega 😕

Lallan has typical UP bhaiyaji mentality... Get the girl married asap. But he is concerned about his daughter's wellbeing. That's why he has chosen Ashutosh who not only is very handsome but also has promising career and nice family background and he thinks his daughter will be 'safe' in this house as well.

This is so funny but Lallan's helplessness is very well expressed here: 🤣

"Meri beti first year arts mei hai...issi mahine 18 ki ho jayegi...shadi toh mei uski 16 saal ki umr mei hi karna chahatha tha...par aap opposition waalon ko janthe hai na...bakheda khada kar dete...kehthe child marriage hai...kuch delhi ki ngo wali auratein aakar mere upar case bhi thop deti... arrey beti meri hai...main jab chahe uski shadi karvaoon...inhe isse kya matlab?...khair ...yeh lijiye...meri Radhika ka photo...Jamai babu kahin dikhayi nahin de rahe...hospital mein hai kya?"


Adv. Tripathi would never have thought of such a proposal from Lallan even in his wildest dream but Lallan has already chosen Ashu as his JamaiBabu, so let's see if he and Ashutosh accepts this proposal or more drama lies ahead. I guess Ashu may agree to this alliance coz he already has understood value of Guanxi and thru this marriage, he can have strong political influence on others thru Sasurji. 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: ttrocks

Went thru the wikipage for Hasratein. The hero-heroine there are married and have children too - from their spouse as well as from this EMA. Wonder what will Ashu and Nidhi do in this FF...

Disclaimer in the beginning and Ashu's character is unfolding in first para itself... Hope the ADs spare you 😆 Ashu has 'enjoyed' a lot in London but this time all arrangements are done within 4 walls of his own house... Daad deni padegi Ashumiya ki himmat ki!! The "demure" maid Kajri become Ashutosh's Rambha at night... Bhola ko sula deneka intezaam bhi AshuSahib khud hi karte hai!! Being a Dr. himself, arranging for prescription soporifics is no big deal for him. Kya hoga jab Alok Tripathi ko iss baare mein pata chalega 😕

Lallan has typical UP bhaiyaji mentality... Get the girl married asap. But he is concerned about his daughter's wellbeing. That's why he has chosen Ashutosh who not only is very handsome but also has promising career and nice family background and he thinks his daughter will be 'safe' in this house as well.

This is so funny but Lallan's helplessness is very well expressed here: 🤣

"Meri beti first year arts mei hai...issi mahine 18 ki ho jayegi...shadi toh mei uski 16 saal ki umr mei hi karna chahatha tha...par aap opposition waalon ko janthe hai na...bakheda khada kar dete...kehthe child marriage hai...kuch delhi ki ngo wali auratein aakar mere upar case bhi thop deti... arrey beti meri hai...main jab chahe uski shadi karvaoon...inhe isse kya matlab?...khair ...yeh lijiye...meri Radhika ka photo...Jamai babu kahin dikhayi nahin de rahe...hospital mein hai kya?"


Adv. Tripathi would never have thought of such a proposal from Lallan even in his wildest dream but Lallan has already chosen Ashu as his JamaiBabu, so let's see if he and Ashutosh accepts this proposal or more drama lies ahead. I guess Ashu may agree to this alliance coz he already has understood value of Guanxi and thru this marriage, he can have strong political influence on others thru Sasurji. 😃



You are right...Ashu will agree to the alliance..Guanxi...

Both Lallan and Ashu's dad are devious...it is just that Ashu's dad is educated and sophisticated
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Vidishaa



You are right...Ashu will agree to the alliance..Guanxi...

Both Lallan and Ashu's dad are devious...it is just that Ashu's dad is educated and sophisticated



Okay... tripathi is in organized crime and trivedi other way round 😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
Radhika is just to turn 18. How old is Ashutosh and how old will Nidhi be? Is Mallika there? Then what age is she of?

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