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Posted: 11 years ago
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Dear friends sorry have been of the forum with only an occasional peep , but have been busy with work , IT returns , and thanks to u all have finally had the courage to publish my poems , a very new field for a novice like me , so going crazy trying to write , get things in order , look at everything , when it comes out will let u know ,at present am posting a new poem for u all , hope u like it and will let me know how it goes


Beautiful day

As I look at life , myriad of colors ,
A visual feast,
The beauty of the sunrise ,
Touching the clouds ,
And setting them alight ,
The birds , all eager in daylight,
To fly , play , and romance,
Flowers turning their faces to the sun,
Purple ,pink, yellow , white ,
They are such a delight .
Yet we as humans fret ,
Worry , cry , and grumble ,
Why don't we just let go ,
And live each day ,
As it comes ,
Glorious in every way ,
Change what we can ,
And let destiny do the rest ,
Maybe by letting go ,
We can forgo,
All the pain , and sorrow
And just be happy in the morrow


Waiting for your thoughts
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Beautiful poem Dr Babs!!! 👏👏👏


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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hello Docji!! GM & have a wonderful week ahead!! 🤗

Very inspirational & beautiful poem as always!! 👏 All the verses you have posted here are so nice, so motivating & fill the readers with new hopes. Great to know u r going to publish ur poems. All the best!! 👍🏼
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Brilliant poem Doc - you have truly mastered the art. It is a blessing to read your works early in the morning - so inspiring and stimulating. Wishing you all the very best in your new endeavor. Reading you has been a great pleasure - no you are not a novice but seem like a veteran. Hats off !!!





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Posted: 11 years ago
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Lovely Doc Babs ..

Great to hear that you are publishing your stories keep us posted
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: hkp11

Beautiful poem Dr Babs!!! 👏👏👏




Thank u Thank you graphics
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: ttrocks

Hello Docji!! GM & have a wonderful week ahead!! 🤗

Very inspirational & beautiful poem as always!! 👏 All the verses you have posted here are so nice, so motivating & fill the readers with new hopes. Great to know u r going to publish ur poems. All the best!! 👍🏼



Thank u for your sweet words , I am just trying Thank you graphics
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Veenaper

Brilliant poem Doc - you have truly mastered the art. It is a blessing to read your works early in the morning - so inspiring and stimulating. Wishing you all the very best in your new endeavor. Reading you has been a great pleasure - no you are not a novice but seem like a veteran. Hats off !!!






Thank u Veena for liking what I write Thank you graphics
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: -deepali17-

Lovely Doc Babs ..

Great to hear that you are publishing your stories keep us posted


Thanks Deeps Thank you graphics
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Glad u liked it Thank you graphics

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