AshNi OS: Lag Ja Gale (Completed/Page-1)

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rayafan17

@rayafan17

Stunner

Posted: 10 years ago

#71

Thanks for the OS.. nice concept.. Ana liked it very much.. disabilities should not come in the way of life..

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Tasha1994

@Tasha1994

Dazzler

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Posted: 10 years ago

#72

Wonderful update Ana di

So ashu lost his leg in a accident.he thinks that he is responsible for nidhi s parent's death.so he wants to give her a divorce.you conveyed their emotions so nicely.nidhi tried to commit suicide.thank God she was saved.liked nidhi's letter.ashu finally got to know how Much he loves nidhi

Thanks for writing an os on ktlk forum.really was missing your updates

Love all your stories.thanks for completing my request

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Suvika.

@Suvika.

Stunner

+ 7

Posted: 10 years ago

#73

Fabulously written OS Ana. Loved the ending. Although I don't condone attempt of suicide or suicide, I do understand Nidhi's POV. I don't support it though. But yes, I do understand. Maybe he needed that kind of jerk as a wake up call otherwise he wouldn't have asked her to come back into his life.

This OS reminded me of the ending of the old hindi movie Arzoo. Rajendra Kumar and Sadhana. Not the whole OS. Just the ending line where she says me without a hand and you without a leg.

Congratulations on the successful completion and thank you so much for posting it in the forum.

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Babita

@babita..

Sparkler

Posted: 10 years ago

#74

The last part is so beautifully written Ana, have my hugs dearie 🤗

Loved the scenic beauty you have presented. And loved the emotional touch to it. 👏 I am so happy to see them not able to live without each other.

The suicide decision that Nidhi made, it was a total death for Ashu also. I could understand her state of mind, and Ashu came into real senses only when he almost lost her. The life is this --- we can pretend, but reality is very different.

You have brilliantly shown the real world ot your readers. Disability doesn't mean the end of life. The love, support and care can win all the obstacles. Nidhi is there for and with Ashu. This is what Ashu has firmly realised now. Loved the ending and AshNi living together ever, forever.

Thanks for this fabulous OS Ana. I admire your words and feelings you have put in the OS. Stupendous and very charming. ⭐️ ⭐️

Love you. ❤️

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Babita

@babita..

Sparkler

Posted: 10 years ago

#75

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Babita

@babita..

Sparkler

Posted: 10 years ago

#76

"Being disabled should not mean being disqualified from having access to every aspect of life." Emma Thompson

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Anjani9

@Anjani9

Sparkler

Posted: 10 years ago

#77

Thank you Ana for the OS...👏

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ttrocks

@ttrocks

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#78

Ch-3 was very emotional as well as very hot and romantic Ana ☺️ AshNi's pain made me all senti senti 😭 Every moment, Ashu realized how miserable his life would be w/o his Nidhi... Nidhi's extreme step of slitting her wrist made Ashu realize he could have lost her forever... He had driven Nidhi outta his house and had sent her divorce papers but getting separated from the love of your life, is something easier said then done... coz life never remains the same once that love is gone. 😭

So glad to see Nidhi alright and AshNi together in the end. Kumudji's decision Next time if Ashu ever quarels with Nidhi, it'd be he who would have to leave the house and Nidhi's love - she w/o one hand and Ashu w/o one leg would have made them perfect - were the most touching parts for me. 👏 ⭐️ Thanks for this superb OS Ana. Keep coming with more AshNi stories.

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ssss97

@ssss97

Inactive

Posted: 10 years ago

#79

Originally posted by: ..oneOone..

No from childhood...He was perfect...
you will know about consequences in next chap.
next will be a last part and surly will be a long one...
Great to see you liking this story :)

Very nice ending loved it. 👏