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Anjani9

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Posted: 11 years ago

#291

Chapter 13:

Like Ashu-CV meeting...Ashu has come direct to the point and you have shown CV's emotions well...

He suspected that guy rejected her but not someone like Ashu??

Interns & Nidhi... She is Lady Heartstone or Ashu holds the Fort??? People are afraid more of Ashu or Nidhi???

What gossip??? Can't he see they are discussing subject???

Like Armaan's dialogue and Ashu's response to Nidhi...good scenes...

she can ask him to come to her Apt building and ask him to wait while she get dressed up...😉

Nidhi with his shirt in study...very romantic...why did Ashu call on her mobile and disturbed???

Of all the scenes...I like this dialogue of Ashu Once this madam becomes busy in her profession, we won't get this chance that often anyway...

If Mallika has any doubts, they would have wiped off with this one stat...

Have you added 'I'm..not very good with words' to give that cliffhanger???

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Anjani9

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Posted: 11 years ago

#292

Originally posted by: -deepali17-
Packing stopped .. Not well ..

You need to take a good break, don't do it non-stop..where in US Deepa?

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rayafan17

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Posted: 11 years ago

#293

Anjani in NYC area .. See u later taking a nap now .just like my akka

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Suvika.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#294

Originally posted by: rajanigandha26

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Suvika.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#295

Originally posted by: bawaswift
Many many many Congrats Suvi di,, for the completion and the Super success of Destiny's play !!! 👏👏 👏👏 👏
Its been a lovely journey to know one more couple so parted away n Destiny made them one once again ! Loved every scene n the dialogues of every character you made them speak... And loved your narration n every bit of making us understood the new phase of them..so beautiful n full of love n its realization !!! Thanks a lot !
You took Shari's story which was a very strong beginning.. and the way you have progressed n give us a fabulous end with a beautiful moves n happiness spreading joy all over... Its mind boggling and very very Cute !
Loved it n cherished it... Thanks a million ! ⭐️ ⭐️⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️
Looking for more to come n make landmarks of your writing skills.. so Awesome and Superb !
😃 😃 🤗

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Suvika.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#296

Originally posted by: Anjani9

She must have gone for cycling...why there are no rains in her apartment area??? 😲

I cycle in the basement if it rains Anjani. 😆

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Suvika.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#297

Originally posted by: Anjani9

Why do you come here once in a month??? 😡

Even I want an answer to that😡 😡 😡

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Suvika.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#298

Originally posted by: Diksha_1991

🤣 ask Akka woh prakat kab hone wali hai 😈

my laptop net was down for a long time yesterday Diksha... was watching your interactions through phone but was too lazy to type my responses. It takes a long time to type.😆

thanks Chelli for conveying my message word by word. 😉