FF- Destiny's Play (2) Chap 7 Pg 76 Siggy pg 105

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bc123456

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Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#571

What a lovely story u weave , everyone was at their scheming best , Ashni were of course the highlight , reminded me of Celine Dion , It's all Coming Back , thank u Suvi for a beautiful update 🤗

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Aardhan

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Chapter 7 Review:

Starting with the flip side of the story. The DB-CV conversation throws some more light into the circumstances leading to Nidhi's self exile. At the same time there is mild respect and even admiration from her Baba at what she has made herself into, and all by herself. But DB as usual does not see the full picture. From CVs words can we hope that after two years of waiting he will accept the Ashni relationship faster than DB? He's already curious about the guy and his suspicions about Nidhi, her silence, her change are almost bang on!

The meddlesome twosome doing their best to give Destiny a helping hand! What a conversation and Armaan completely going berserk! What an imagination and what songs! But this conversation is so real, I could see it come alive! Armaan is a livewire and a true friend indeed! And Ranga's emotional tactic with Anji never seem to desert him! "How can she? Anji is shorter..."... seriously Sujatha I laughed out loud here! And even at "Clothes are under-rated mere bhai...!! OMG!! That conversations was hilarious too... Ashu faking his anger but all the time enjoying being teased... almost welcoming it. after all he has allowed himself to feel now!

Lovely car ride. And the first part about the dress, her anticipation and nervousness. And violet and lavender!! Again! Anyway, once again her insecurity comes through at his lack of response in the past. So once again she steels her heart, but is left defenseless and awkward when he praises her! But their subject becomes the ice breaker, followed by the children! But why did he not touch her face?? Just kidding!

Everything happens smoothly but it the calm before the storm which arrived soon in the form of Mallika!!! Whoa!! And what an arrival... "Koi laut ke aaya hai!" Indeed!!! Will this renewed AShni stand a chance now? Will Ashut apply all his thoughts and theories about the past in his actions? nidhi has already bolted.. will she be willing to face the litmus test again, even if he is?? And especially when neither are sure where they are headed?? Very interesting. Cannot wait for the next one now...

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vshenoy

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Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#573

Good morning Suvika Wonderful chapter

Hmmm so here CV don't know the person so his reaction is still to be seen, But now he is proud of his daughter and accepts her as adult and mature😃.

Ashutosh had so much of love but was not able to convey it to Nidhi due to his reserved nature, and she took it as lack of interest. Her disappointment was described in Nidhi's thoughts from past.👏

Kids dance scene was good ,as I said he regretted his decision of not going to orphanage.Here he was building hope and making decision and .

😲 now we have to bear the effect of explosion made by you and handle for next 4 days,but I am sure you will sooth it with next chapter.

Have a nice day.

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ssss97

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Posted: 11 years ago

#574

Love the chapter very much excluding the last para. I just hate Mallika. I thaught that Nidhi started melting but now everything is gone for a toss. Now toh i am very eagerly waiting for the next chat. Jaldi post karo pl