FF- Destiny's Play Chap 4 Pg 127 June 16

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deepali.rock

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Posted: 11 years ago

#41

Originally posted by: suku_07

me too.. just like the one I asked you to right at the time of THT.. 😆

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deepali.rock

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Posted: 11 years ago

#42

Originally posted by: suku_07

me too.. just like the one I asked you to right at the time of THT.. 😆

hamari maange poori karo 😉

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deepali.rock

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Posted: 11 years ago

#43

teddy pta chal gya kaun h🤣

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Shari30

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Posted: 11 years ago

#44

Suvi dearest,

You taking over the story was the right thing, what started as a dabble in story writing , you have taken it to a larger than life level and for that I am super grateful. Just the way you have presented the first chapter is fantastic, you have started delving in deep in the psyche of the characters. As a reader I feel for both of the characters each carrying an emotional burden of his own. One must be heartless not to feel for them .Looking forward to see how you present them as we go along.

That was a superb opening scene.

Shari 😊

PS: I need to add am reading that in class , am trying my best not to drool :P as I re read the story