FF- Destiny's Play Chap 4 Pg 127 June 16 - Page 40

Originally posted by: Anjani9

Hello ... Hello... Hello...😊

Originally posted by: Vidishaa

Hi

Very sorry for a no review for the first chapter and a very late review for the second one.I hope this will compensate for it.

Awesome update. Waiting to see Ashni work together after 2 long years. Two hearts which are with soo much of emotional backlog facing each other on a daily basis will be fun reading.

I love the way you write each person's pov. Your writing stands out because of this.

Love this one..

Did she hear him right? He had all but thrown her out of his life and now he wanted her to stay? What should she do? Going would mean closing the door to seeing him again but staying would mean the possibility of being hurt again. Could she take the risk?

This is really awesome... This dialogue gives her a ray of hope, a tinge of anxiety and a full bag of fear. Just love it

The news of Dr Heartstone has entered the premises sent everyone in a flurry of activity. They knew should he find something awry they would be in deep trouble.

I really like seeing the Hardstone version of Dr. Ashu. It actually suited the character in the daily. Imagining him like that after a year gives me the same excitement which I used to have whist watching the show.

You really know how to catch hold of your readers mind.👏👏⭐️

Armaan's character stands out. I don't know but he seems to be my all time favorite.

"Yup. Yup." And mentally hummed, aaja aaja mein hu pyaar tera..allah allah..inkaar tera..aaja ooo aaja..aa aa aaja..aa aa aa.

Love u for this. Seriously can imagine Armaan do this.😆

"Head honko back on base. Already met the lady. Now coming your way."

He got an immediate reply - "Should I duck or hide or run?"

"I think we should get together and plan our next step."

"Whoa! Air is crackling already? That was fast! Will meet soon for all the juicy details."

This is the best part of this chapter. It actually made me laugh as if I had gone mad.😆

Waiting too see ranga and Armaan blast 10000 wala patakas😆😆

These two characters are going to be the heroes of this Story for sure.😃

Wonderful update as usual sorry for the late review was held up as i had got my results and I have got a seat in BDS 😃

Originally posted by: Suvika.

Hi Anjani...how is your day so far??

Chapter 2 Review:

Ashutosh has left the country! Once again trying to run away from his emotions, but however hard he tries and wherever he goes Nidhi and her thoughts follow and make him restless.

Well Destiny is certainly playing a part by playing with the minds of these two... he goes away and she comes to KGH, just when she is settling down he returns with a bang! But of course in that one week Nidhi has made a terrific impression with all the other doctors. Good, very good!

It looks like Nidhi has been avoiding even hearing his name to the extent of keeping away from even Anji! And it also seems there is some discontent with her own family? That's clear from her thoughts in the end, "She's moving on, except not in the way they wanted..." Hmmm, what happened there?

Ranganath tempts her to return to the scene of crime and she accepts knowing the other players are out of sight! Especially her biggest tormentor besides HIM' Mallika! She's even surprised Mallika has left AShutosh alone! Very telling there, goes to show where Mallika and Ashutosh are concerned even Nidhi doubts her if she can make a dent there... looks like she honestly believes Mallika is more important to him! They also describe her naivet when she first fell in love and tried her best to get his attention... and now curses herself for that!

But wait! What is this? Even he is restless... wants to return... he tried running away but has realized he would rather live with those painful memories in the place where it was created than in some alien place... musings of a restless heart! And ARmaan, nice introduction.. lying by omission! Loved his little self thought and song when he finds out Ashu's decision!

It's great to have Armaan on the scene along with Ranga! The Elves I guess! Loved that little planning and plotting, the SMS, so they are firmly in line willing to give the love birds a push... Destiny brought Nidhi in their vicinity and these two are making sure they don't lose sight of her!

Again, entry of AShutosh, perfect! And drawn to playful voices, something that he has not heard in two years, something he had banned because it reminded him of his loss! But lo and behold, he is face to face with the exact same situation! And that zing.. wow! Even I felt it go over me!

So he gets greedy, wants to get a glimpse of her everyday... loved his thoughts when he is standing at the door, imagining a happy, laughing Nidhi once more in his vicinity. But the reality is the exact opposite and he soon realizes it when he sees her properly, gaunt, listless, a far cry from the Nidhi of his imagination!

And wow, she is also a Neurologist... he is proud of that! Wants to express his joy to her, hope he does it one day! But she is wary of him, totally unresponsive, she seems on the defensive as if expecting him to berate her any moment! Yet she agreed to stay, after all he has taught her duty comes first, so how can she let the hospital suffer when it is short staffed? But is that her only reason? I think she;s as greedy as him!

Waiting to see the sparks fly now!

Originally posted by: sss97

Very sorry for a no review for the first chapter and a very late review for the second one.I hope this will compensate for it.

No apology required Swathi. Glad to know that you read it though.

Awesome update. Waiting to see Ashni work together after 2 long years. Two hearts which are with soo much of emotional backlog facing each other on a daily basis will be fun reading.

😆 Fun reading huh!! I tell you lady..the she devil effect is sure rubbing off on now. You are beginning to enjoy reading their torment and pain 😈

I love the way you write each person's pov. Your writing stands out because of this.

Love this one..

Did she hear him right? He had all but thrown her out of his life and now he wanted her to stay? What should she do? Going would mean closing the door to seeing him again but staying would mean the possibility of being hurt again. Could she take the risk?

This is really awesome... This dialogue gives her a ray of hope, a tinge of anxiety and a full bag of fear. Just love it

Yes. you got that right. Her emotions are all tangled up. Foremost being fear of getting hurt again.

The news of Dr Heartstone has entered the premises sent everyone in a flurry of activity. They knew should he find something awry they would be in deep trouble.

I really like seeing the Hardstone version of Dr. Ashu. It actually suited the character in the daily. Imagining him like that after a year gives me the same excitement which I used to have whist watching the show.

You really know how to catch hold of your readers mind.👏👏⭐️

Armaan's character stands out. I don't know but he seems to be my all time favorite.

"Yup. Yup." And mentally hummed, aaja aaja mein hu pyaar tera..allah allah..inkaar tera..aaja ooo aaja..aa aa aaja..aa aa aa.

Love u for this. Seriously can imagine Armaan do this.😆

😆 Me too actually. His character in the serial had never been utilized properly.😡 So kind of making up for that with my FFs

"Head honko back on base. Already met the lady. Now coming your way."

He got an immediate reply - "Should I duck or hide or run?"

"I think we should get together and plan our next step."

"Whoa! Air is crackling already? That was fast! Will meet soon for all the juicy details."

This is the best part of this chapter. It actually made me laugh as if I had gone mad.😆

😆

Waiting too see ranga and Armaan blast 10000 wala patakas😆😆

These two characters are going to be the heroes of this Story for sure.😃

I hope so. Would really love that. Lets see how it shapes up. Most of the time and despite my editor's repeated threats and warnings, the story tends to run away from me.. 😆

Wonderful update as usual sorry for the late review was held up as i had got my results and I have got a seat in BDS 😃

WOW!! BDS!! Where? At Hyderabad itself?? Party banta hain boss!!

Originally posted by: aardhan

Chapter 2 Review:

Ashutosh has left the country! Once again trying to run away from his emotions, but however hard he tries and wherever he goes Nidhi and her thoughts follow and make him restless.

Yeah...actually while writing this scene...it reminded me of the song in your FF - Soona..soona mann ka aangan..

Well Destiny is certainly playing a part by playing with the minds of these two... he goes away and she comes to KGH, just when she is settling down he returns with a bang! But of course in that one week Nidhi has made a terrific impression with all the other doctors. Good, very good!

Yes. She was an intern in training the last time she was there. Now a full fledged doctor..a neurologist no less

It looks like Nidhi has been avoiding even hearing his name to the extent of keeping away from even Anji! And it also seems there is some discontent with her own family? That's clear from her thoughts in the end, "She's moving on, except not in the way they wanted..." Hmmm, what happened there?

Should I tell you now?? Nah...I think I'll wait 😆

Ranganath tempts her to return to the scene of crime and she accepts knowing the other players are out of sight! Especially her biggest tormentor besides HIM' Mallika! She's even surprised Mallika has left AShutosh alone! Very telling there, goes to show where Mallika and Ashutosh are concerned even Nidhi doubts her if she can make a dent there... looks like she honestly believes Mallika is more important to him! They also describe her naivet when she first fell in love and tried her best to get his attention... and now curses herself for that!

Wasn't that what we believed too while watching the show??😡 And fact is...thats what happened. He DID trust Mallika more. For whatever reasons..

But wait! What is this? Even he is restless... wants to return... he tried running away but has realized he would rather live with those painful memories in the place where it was created than in some alien place... musings of a restless heart! And ARmaan, nice introduction.. lying by omission! Loved his little self thought and song when he finds out Ashu's decision!

😆 Yeah...couldn't resist that. Goes with that character, doesn't it?? 😉

It's great to have Armaan on the scene along with Ranga! The Elves I guess! Loved that little planning and plotting, the SMS, so they are firmly in line willing to give the love birds a push... Destiny brought Nidhi in their vicinity and these two are making sure they don't lose sight of her!

Again, entry of AShutosh, perfect! And drawn to playful voices, something that he has not heard in two years, something he had banned because it reminded him of his loss! But lo and behold, he is face to face with the exact same situation! And that zing.. wow! Even I felt it go over me!

really?? 😆

So he gets greedy, wants to get a glimpse of her everyday... loved his thoughts when he is standing at the door, imagining a happy, laughing Nidhi once more in his vicinity. But the reality is the exact opposite and he soon realizes it when he sees her properly, gaunt, listless, a far cry from the Nidhi of his imagination!

Yeah. He really thought he will send her out of his life and that would have zero impact on her. That she would be exactly like she was before.

And wow, she is also a Neurologist... he is proud of that! Wants to express his joy to her, hope he does it one day! But she is wary of him, totally unresponsive, she seems on the defensive as if expecting him to berate her any moment! Yet she agreed to stay, after all he has taught her duty comes first, so how can she let the hospital suffer when it is short staffed? But is that her only reason? I think she;s as greedy as him!

She feels a lot of things but yes, greed is also one of them. A kind of temptation that she knows that she should resist but unable to do so.

Waiting to see the sparks fly now!

You're sure they will fly, huh 😉😆

Thanks a bunch Aarti. 🤗❤️

Originally posted by: Anjani9

Good morning...😊

When is the book out????