Repost poem Manasthiti [Nidhi's state of mind]

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Posted: 11 years ago
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dilme chubha nashtar,pyar se jyada hai
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malam bhi kaam nahi aaya,dard kuchh jyada hai.
unn per aitabaar ka koi asar nahi hai.
woh hai,apni duniya me meri jaroorat nahi hai.
jab paas aate hai,to dikhate hai mohabbat.
dooor jaane par bhool jaate hai.
Saawan me chali hawao per,in kaale badaloper.
jor nahi ,kaboo nahi mera mere jajbatoper.
Dil,kaach aur moti ke tutneki aawaaz nahi hoti
yeh to mukkaddar hai,jiski fariyaad nahi hoti.
Pyaar ,ishq ,mohobbat se aitbaar uth gaya hai,
Zindagi dagao se pareh hai,pata chal gaya hai

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesome poem Alka ji... *Claps*
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Wow !!! Lovely Ghazal, beautiful words n cute way of expressing it ! ⭐️⭐️👏
A sad version of what we call.. Pyaar ka dard.. meetha meetha pyaara pyaara.. !!!
Nidhi's state of mind is very thoughtfully shown with awesome compilation of the poem. Loved the way she says all this to her mind n heart n takes the situation as it is. But, love is not only this.. Nidhi.. go ahead n take your love in your arms n your side..Saiyyaan naino ki bhasha samajne lagenege ❤️ Aur pyaar pe phir se aitbaar ho jayega 🤗
Lovley poem Alka Di ! Fabulous repost ! 👏Thank you so much 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
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congrates and thank you suku
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Originally posted by: suku_07

Awesome poem Alka ji... *Claps*

Thank you suku for liking my poem
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: bawaswift

Wow !!! Lovely Ghazal, beautiful words n cute way of expressing it ! ⭐️⭐️👏

A sad version of what we call.. Pyaar ka dard.. meetha meetha pyaara pyaara.. !!!
Nidhi's state of mind is very thoughtfully shown with awesome compilation of the poem. Loved the way she says all this to her mind n heart n takes the situation as it is. But, love is not only this.. Nidhi.. go ahead n take your love in your arms n your side..Saiyyaan naino ki bhasha samajne lagenege ❤️ Aur pyaar pe phir se aitbaar ho jayega 🤗
Lovley poem Alka Di ! Fabulous repost ! 👏Thank you so much 😃

Thank you Bawa for your wonderful reply.
I wrote this poem when Nidhi came to know ki Ashu mallika ko milta hai aur woh dukhi ho jati hai.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Alka please write the English meaning of the followings 😭 cant understand

chubha nashtar


kaale badaloper.


jajbatoper.


fariyaad
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: ariyadasa

Alka please write the English meaning of the followings 😭 cant understand

chubha nashtar : pain of love/prik in heart


kaale badaloper. : On black dusky clouds


jajbatoper.: on emotions


fariyaad :complaint

is it ok dear?
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Lovely poem Alkaben 👏👏👏 So heart-rending... 😭 Reminded me of separation track with pregnant Mallu... 😭
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Posted: 11 years ago
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👏 wow ...
superb poem Alkaji

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