A repost from 16th Feb 2012

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Here is my two liner one shot

Scene 1@Ashutosh's place

Ashutosh enters in a dreamy state...not noticing any thing around...

Armaan: Hey bay...Valentine boy...I am dying here to have your first hand valentine date. howwwazzat?
Dreamy Ashutosh still engrossed in the loving exclusive moments he had shared at his in-laws' place. This new and matured version of Ashutosh doesnt want to reveal everything even to Armaan...he felt them as private lamhe..only to be shared between him and Nidhi...

Armaan worried about this silence...'Meri jaan...us ladki nahi aayi kya...didnt Nidhi like your valentines day plan...?'

Ashutosh raising his voice slightly, 'Armaan give respect...stop calling her ladki or with her name Armaan...it is high time you address her Bhabhi'.

Armaan shown dancing around the house.

Scene 2 @ Kotnis, Ashutosh's cabin

Mallika entered inside hoping to see furious Ashutosh from valentine's flop show.

'Ashutosh.. I am very scared to enter into your cabin..if at all you vent out your anger on someone else'
'Not any more Mallika..I am loving each bit of my life with this new responsibility of being a hubby to my beloved... a person deeply in love cannot be angry'...said beaming Ashutosh.

There is a depressed Mallika making hush-hush call Sue to inform about 'jaroor kuch hua at the Valentine's'

All Dr.H's Bhaktajan mandal, BT's reporters witnessed Sue leaving the KTKP permanently for all the goodness with packed bags.

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Posted: 11 years ago
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😛 I guess...was not active during this period...not noticed this...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Anjani9

😛 I guess...was not active during this period...not noticed this...



😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hey Anjani, you are first this time! 😛
And I am second 😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Wow Mudra, another cute scenario. You know, I never realized that you even wrote such scenes. Guess even at this point Mallika was tolerable and Ashu did snub her some but not enough. Slowly she got on our nerves when Ashu steadily started divulging every small detail to her and she started taking advantage of them.
But I do not remember this post.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Me third .. Consolation prize ..
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Teacherji .. That's was great .. I was not even silent reader of any posts at that time.. I only came here to read written updates..
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: aardhan

Wow Mudra, another cute scenario. You know, I never realized that you even wrote such scenes. Guess even at this point Mallika was tolerable and Ashu did snub her some but not enough. Slowly she got on our nerves when Ashu steadily started divulging every small detail to her and she started taking advantage of them.

But I do not remember this post.



you never guessed na.. 😆😆

that I write such scenes😆😆😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: deepa17

Teacherji .. That's was great .. I was not even silent reader of any posts at that time.. I only came here to read written updates..



😃.. You never read other posts?😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Nice scene Mudra di.. ⭐️ Very well written 👏
I am realising that how much n how wonderful posts n updates i have missed so far..
But better late than never.. n now as you are reposting your updates n posts.. i am thinking to go to the past to relive that era at IF..
Reading a scene out of any updates, makes me feel more enthu over the whole writes by you .. Liked it n enjoyed too.. 😃

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