AshNi FF-TUM HI HO Note-pg 3 and 4

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<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" color="#0066ff" size="4">Hi! i m here with a FF, Hope u like it. Likes ncriticisms all are welcome<font color="#990066">...</font>


<div align="center"><font color="#990066"> TUM HI HO...</font></div>
<div align="left"><font color="#0033ff">"Chal naa Nidhi, kitni der aur hum late ho jayenge" Anji cried as Nidhi was getting ready.</font></div>
<div align="left"><font color="#0033ff">"Ha bas 2 min aur"</font></div>
<div align="left"><font color="#0033ff">"Tere vo toh tujhe dekh ke behosh hi ho jayenge" Nidhi blushed.</font></div>
<div align="left"><font color="#0033ff">"Chup kar, achha bata mai theek leg rahi hu naa"</font></div>
<div align="left"><font color="#0033ff">"Haan baba, ab chal tere vocafe me wait kar kar ke thak gaye honge. Waise bata do mahino mein frndship k aage baat badhi kya"</font></div>
<div align="left"><font color="#0033ff">"Nahi yaar vo toh kabhi kabhi theek se baay bhi nahi karte hai. Shayad thode nervous ho jate hai meri tarah"</font></div>
<div align="left"><font color="#0033ff">Anji started the car as they moves towards CAFE COFFEE MANIA.</font></div>
<div align="left"><font color="#0033ff">"Tere vo aur tu kabhi date vate pe bhi jaaoge yaa sirf 60s ke couple ki tarah sharmate hi rahoge"</font></div>
<div align="left"><font color="#0033ff">"Kya Anji, vo vo laba rakha hai seedhe seedhe ROHANJI bol naa" Nidhi cried as Anji stopped the car near the cafe...😲😲😲</font></div>
<div align="left"><font color="#000000">PLZ PLZ TELL ME IF U LIKED IT OR NOT N SHOULD I CONTINUE...???</font></div></font>

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KASHMAKASH- pg 3
Edited by amreen_ashni - 12 years ago

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Anjani9 thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Of course yes but in English please...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#3
Its nice, please continue and make it longer.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Go ahead dear happy to see a newbie is starting her journey in IF with a super sixer .

love to see ur ff too but long updated needed dear 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
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please continue dear..would love to read it dear..
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Posted: 12 years ago
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longer updates please. It was a small sample but I liked it
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Nice update but very short ...please continue 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Nice pls continue it soon 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Thanks for starting an FF..

It counts for forum's activity in a big way!😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Thanks all of u for ur valuable response. It means a lot 2 me. This was just a teaser or say prologue. i wil give long updates luv u all amreen


. Here i have a question. Whenever i try 2 post from moby it shows 'IN ORDER 2 PROTECT OUR WEBSITE FROM SPAMMERS N MIDs WE DON'T ALLOW POSTS FROM KNOWN ANONYMOUS PROXY SERVERS' but then when i post from desktop or laptop thr is NO problem. So plz plz tell me what shud i do so that my moby/server gets recognised by india forums. Will wait for ur response
Edited by amreen_ashni - 12 years ago

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