FF-TohseNainalaage piya Sa-Chapter 9-Pg 55 - Page 17

Nice Update Sai! I'm sorry for late response.

I think I needn't repeat I'm just loving the narration, now coming to the chap

Loved the way you expressed Nidhi's pain, the myriad of emotions she is going through, her uncertainty, scepticism, and the joy she feels when she recalls:

"Don't you know by now Ms Verma that I am falling for you, I cannot lose you ...Ever"

And the very next moment flips back to her despair feeling lacking herself to match the perfect partner Ashutosh deserves. I can feel the turbulence in her.

I find Anjie a great friend and support for her...the bond they share is so amazing.

Loved Nidhi's self-thoughts.

Loved Baba Nidhi scene and the lines:

Shaking her head, she replied "I like him …baba"

"Then why are you holding back …."

" I am not …." She mumbled unsurely to find her baba extending his hand to straighten her curled up fingers which were clutching the side of the stand "Release the clutches …will you? He asked curtly.

"Release these clutches which is holding you back and then see the magic ….." he gave her reassuring smile...

" I can't " she replied sullenly

"You have to" he was stern in his voice …" trust me, you can …" he added when she sat still.

Glad she finally opened up before Ashutosh... What was his reaction??

Their bond is gradually blossoming... liked their dinner date and the sms conversation was bang on!

And dear I'd like to point out something if you don't mind...do let me know I'll Pm that to you.

Originally posted by: pansy123

Nice Update Sai! I'm sorry for late response.

Thank you so much dear ...No need to apologize, you liked it that is more than enough 🤗

I think I needn't repeat I'm just loving the narration, now coming to the chap

Thanks once again 😳

Loved the way you expressed Nidhi's pain, the myriad of emotions she is going through, her uncertainty, scepticism, and the joy she feels when she recalls:

"Don't you know by now Ms Verma that I am falling for you, I cannot lose you ...Ever"

Aww thanks a ton for telling this ...i wrote that part zillion times to get picture of what i was trying to portray 😳

And the very next moment flips back to her despair feeling lacking herself to match the perfect partner Ashutosh deserves. I can feel the turbulence in her.

yes she is bundle of complexes

I find Anjie a great friend and support for her...the bond they share is so amazing.

yes ..Anjie is great support ...i enjoyed writing their convo 😳

Loved Nidhi's self-thoughts.

wow , you liked it ...i thought this time it came out bit messy ...thanks 😳

Loved Baba Nidhi scene and the lines:

Shaking her head, she replied "I like him 'baba"

"Then why are you holding back '."

" I am not '." She mumbled unsurely to find her baba extending his hand to straighten her curled up fingers which were clutching the side of the stand "Release the clutches 'will you? He asked curtly.

"Release these clutches which is holding you back and then see the magic '.." he gave her reassuring smile...

" I can't " she replied sullenly

"You have to" he was stern in his voice '" trust me, you can '" he added when she sat still.

you bet !! i just to love write convo b/w Nidhi and baba ...😳

Glad she finally opened up before Ashutosh... What was his reaction??

yes she did but it was more like "spur of the moment' thats why she regretted later...Ashu is noticing it his reaction will come very soon when he get clear picture of what Nidhi is dealing with 😳

Their bond is gradually blossoming... liked their dinner date and the sms conversation was bang on!

thank you jee so so much 😃

And dear I'd like to point out something if you don't mind...do let me know I'll Pm that to you.

No, No i don't mind ...please feel free to Pm me , Will be waiting for your PM now😳

Thanks once again for such wonderful review 😃

Originally posted by: Anjani9

Sai, When will you gift us next update??? 😳

Originally posted by: saibanu

Not even started writing ..I had to submit one of my project by today, so I was busy with that ...tomorrow i will start 😳

Originally posted by: Anjani9

All the best for your project, don't worry about update...pl give it when you are free...

Originally posted by: Anjani9

Sai, How was your project?