FF: Intehaa Pyaar Ki: Th.4.Ch-14p-105, NOTE p-124

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sshirley

@sshirley

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#901

Originally posted by: gargpoo
no pehle aap...

Ok if u like this idea, we can make a new post for this.

We basically have to write a whacky story line by line - one line each person... it has to be whacky and totally funny, sheer non sense will also do.

For example.

1st person - Nidhi got a monkey to the house,

2nd person - monkey ashu ke haath me jo kela tha, jo vo kha raha tha, vo chheen ke kha gaya..

3rd person - ashu nidhi pe gussa hua, tumhara monkey poore 3 rupaye ka kela kha gaya.. pata hai kitna mehenga aata hai?

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sshirley

@sshirley

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#902

Originally posted by: ssktlk
complex one as I want u to deliver the chap as u had planned with no dilution. You will do full justice to it, am sure 😊

thank you Sanya, I m glad everyone is for complexity here

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gargpoo

@gargpoo

Sparkler

Posted: 12 years ago

#903

ok like this...

ashu loves orange candy...

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sshirley

@sshirley

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#904

Originally posted by: gargpoo
ok like this...
ashu loves orange candy...

yeah and then I can say,

nidhi takes away all his orange candies and replaces with karela..

thik haina? u like this game?

the only think is the next person should continue the same theme/idea, which keeps changing

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gargpoo

@gargpoo

Sparkler

Posted: 12 years ago

#905

Originally posted by: sshirley

yeah and then I can say,

nidhi takes away all his orange candies and replaces with karela..

thik haina? u like this game?

the only think is the next person should continue the same theme/idea, which keeps changing

mast hai...but next person nahi hai...😭

mai hi next line likh deti hu...

ashu starts crying for his candies...😆

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gargpoo

@gargpoo

Sparkler

Posted: 12 years ago

#906

now i feel like sleeping..🥱 good night di...kal continue karenge...

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sshirley

@sshirley

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#907

Originally posted by: gargpoo
now i feel like sleeping..🥱 good night di...kal continue karenge...

ok, gn - kal ka main kuch nahi bol sakti...I was free now.. but chalo koi nahi... maybe I too will sleep in a while/

GN SD

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sshirley

@sshirley

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#908

Originally posted by: mudraswathi
Hello Shirley!!

All set??

yes ji,preps going on..

btw, u read my note?

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sshirley

@sshirley

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#909

Originally posted by: pansy123

Gosh! What a fiasco last chaps canoodle turned out to be!!!

thank you Pansy!

Liked the chap...their self thoughts...after the flop...Nidhi's care when he was taken ill.

I am glad u liked it. and the scene came out well.

Nidhi is a reformed character now...and she betraying him even if that would have been a huge sum makes no sense...

you never know this Nidhi.. she may have made a mistake...or she may have found something hard to resist or she may have been innocent...

Liked Arman-Anji Scence...I applaud you for that

thank you

I think Ashutosh had to have better reason for handing over divorce papers to her...otherwise I fail to understand his reaction keeping in view the accomplished and proficient lawyer he is...jumping to the conclusion doesn't go well with his character.

thanks for saying this - why? u will know in next chap..

Waiting the mystery to unfold.