Kashmakash S2 Th 9 Ch 19 pg 101 July 29th

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deepali.rock

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Posted: 12 years ago

#971

Originally posted by: sshirley

hey Suja, now even my 2 reviews have piled up.. aap bhool gaye?

🤣 aap bhi kataar mein hain😆

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deepali.rock

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Posted: 12 years ago

#972

did you enjoy the party??

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saibanu

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Posted: 12 years ago

#973

Yetserday I asked for chapter and dissapeared , actuallly papa called me for urgent work thats i could not come back to IF ...Late night read your chapter once again you managed to pull me in ASHNi world ...Amazingly written 👏👏👏

He stands away from everyone near the window looking out into the night with his fists stuffed into the pockets of his trousers. Anji is the only one who dares to approach him. She goes and puts a hand on his shoulder: Jeej, it won't be long now. Don't worry. Ok?

I like this Saali -Jeeju bond , Anjie is rocking pillar not only for nidhi but Ashu also 😊

Personal experience says girls wrap their dads around their little fingers...

This is such a beutiful line and very true ...it came out very well 👏

Once again I loved reading Ashu turmoil which you described , one side he is happy , full of joy with the arrival of his little girl but same time he just cant get away from his demons ...very nicely written!⭐️

He just needed someone push out of his thoughts and Arman's call did just that ...I liked their convo so much 😊

And As expected Nidhi was waiting for him and this line "I stop breathing when you smile..I start living when you smile! " is so beutiful, apt ..it describe how much her happines measn to him 😳

As if unable to stop himself, he touches his forefinger to her soft velvety cheek. The tiny starfish hands wave in the air and one of it bumps his finger and latches on to it with a strong grip...

His hesitancy and his confusion very nicely portayed...and this little cutie pie just like her mother know all magic to pull her father towards her ..😉

But then again next time when nidhi ask him he walked away from them .. but i am glad to read that Ashu once again succeded in pushing his deoms backstage ...His talk with his babay is very touchy ...and convo between Nidhi and Ashu came so nice , i love this couple 😊

Ab tho lagta hai Asha is going be total ladli of her papa ...the way he came back runing home when he heard her cry is so nice ...and Asha ne apne papa ke upar susu kar diya ..😆😆

Loved loved loved it the core ...so nicely written ❤️

waiting for next sujatha di ..thank you 😃

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deepali.rock

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Posted: 12 years ago

#974

Originally posted by: deepa17
That's the dum of the pop stars.. Only one is enough..

well said😳😆

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Suvika.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#975

party was great...

Deepali..forget about your pending reviews..aap ke result aane ki khushi mein aapko baksh diya...give me the review for this chapter 19.

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deepali.rock

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Posted: 12 years ago

#976

Originally posted by: Suvika.
party was great...

Deepali..forget about your pending reviews..aap ke result aane ki khushi mein aapko baksh diya...give me the review for this chapter 19.

ok..thank you..😳 it will be there when you come back in the evening

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sshirley

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Posted: 12 years ago

#977

Originally posted by: Suvika.

oh..but you are going to post them right now, aren't you?? 😛😆

going out now..will be back around 4 in the evening...i want the reviews here by the time i return...😡

whoa whoa.. when did I say that?

ye acha - pahle mera naam na lena, aur ulta mujhpe hi gussa dikhana

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Suvika.

@Suvika.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#978

Originally posted by: sshirley

oh..but you are going to post them right now, aren't you?? 😛😆

going out now..will be back around 4 in the evening...i want the reviews here by the time i return...😡

whoa whoa.. when did I say that?

ye acha - pahle mera naam na lena, aur ulta mujhpe hi gussa dikhana

you forgot..teek se yaad karo..you told me Suja..kal subah dono reviews miljaayenge..yeh mera wada hain tumse 🤣