Kashmakash S2 Th 4 Chap 10 Pg 101 July 01 - Page 50

Originally posted by: sshirley

Hi Deepali, ab mood kaisa hai?

Originally posted by: Suvika.

😕Deepali ke mood ko kya hua??😕

dimaag pe zyaada zor mat daalo..vo purani baat ho gyi..😆

Originally posted by: Suvika.

Hey shirley, mood thik hai..i m fine now..bt busy ho gyi bahut zyaada..

Sorry for being late😕

It was a heartwarming chapter that managed to grasp my attention from the moment I started reading it You touched a simple plot, and by ur magic of narration, emotions and feel, u hv turned it into the greatest love story

Their love is profound, their connection powerful ,from heartbreak to unbreakable love even thou they know they have huge barriers to break .

Dr K: She doesn't come to the canteen any more Dr Ashutosh.
Nidhi's love was plain n simple for anyone to see, loved how Dr K was considerate towards her.

Nidhi nods and goes towards the ward. ……

I miss you sir. Jab bhi mein yahaa iss childrens' ward ……

Nidhi's entire body jerks a little. ……

Aap sach mein yahaa hain? …….

I really loved how u managed to describe all the emotions Nidhi went through, so well. Her belief that she was hallucinating was put accross beautifully!It was an interesting process to see her blossom from a young, playful girl into a well developed grown woman who knew exactly what she wanted, even if the path was difficult.

Nidhi..see..I have come back! ...

Ashu knows what he wants...a life with Nidhi and he will do anything to protect what's his.Getting in their head n shaping up the self thots was spectacular. Watching their story go full circle was one hell of a ride. Both at the parking lot way ahead of time just shows their longevity for each other.

Ashu gets down on his knees in front of her ...

Beautifully woven emotions and wonderful situations, heartfelt dialogues ,all the aspects have been enormously carved...infact lines are such smoothly penned that it gave me illussion of visualizing the entire sequence...such engrossing n smooth wordings used.

Nidhi interrupts firmly: I REFUSE to believe that you are ANYTHING like your father Dr Ashutosh

I really liked Nidhi's support for Ashu even thou she knows abt his painful past,her support for Ashu is really flawless...its the strength of her character. Really wen 2 people r in luv then who cares for one'self .They come to realize unconditional love is not an act of being loved, rather one of loving… unconditionally.Through these two characters u make us feel and live the depth of emotion and chemistry between the two. Best of all, we watch the evolution of two individuals--one youthful, sheltered and naive, the other older, insecure and afraid of commitment.

An endearing chapter...well written!

Originally posted by: deepali.rock

Hey shirley, mood thik hai..i m fine now..bt busy ho gyi bahut zyaada..

Originally posted by: sshirley

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Busy hona toh achcha hai. I m glad aapka mood theek hai and u r fine. I wanted to pm you to ask what happened. but then thought maybe you would not like to share with me.

arre aisa kuch nhi hai..relax..mujhse se zyaada to aap aur suku pareshaan ho gaye..bt believe me i am ok..and i gave it back to him by a solid thapad..
And busy accha bhi hai..bura bhi..dnt get time to come here..aapsabke review bhi latak gaye😆

These days i am doing shaadi shopping😆

Originally posted by: deepali.rock

Life is certainly not fair..

Kya hua Deepali??

Originally posted by: Suvika.

then its time i taught you otherwise and send you and Arpita out for some serious shopping of PATIENCE..😆

Its your writing which is making us restless otherwise we are not some stalkers 😆