Kashmakash S2 Th 3 Chap 8 Pg 129 June 26 - Page 19

Originally posted by: deepali.rock

Did u see, i became green??

Originally posted by: rajanigandha26

I reached office and first thing I did was to login and open K2 T3 and in front of my eyes I saw Chap6 getting updated to my pleasant surprise.😊Thank u for making this weekend so beautiful.
The 2 dialogues I loved are:❤️
❤️1. "The year you were born marks only your entry into the world. Other years where you prove your worth, they are the ones worth celebrating. " 👏
Never thought about Birthday with this angle

2. Whether we are 2 or 20 or 40, we still miss our mom..we need her irrespective of our age.👍🏼

I was expecting more at medical camp. Little disappointment there but overall very nice update.🤗
Medical related aspects have been kept to a minimum this time around Rajani. I took Doc's help the first time around but now..!! not that i don't know any other doctors..but still..and at the same time don't want to make any medical errors either.

Originally posted by: vidyasabde

{ My mom always used to say "The year you were born marks only your entry into the world. Other years where you prove your worth, they are the ones worth celebrating.}

this i liked very much...how true it is.

i used to think celebrating B"day is only for children...but this sentence has changed my view...

liked the chapter 6...when are you going to post totally diff chaptr from kashmkash1 ?

Originally posted by: sshirley

Hey Suja, main hamesha sochti hoon ke ek din aaram se baithoongi, will reread u chapters and give u good detailed reviews, lekin vo din na jaane kab aayega so, here I m trying to write whatever comes to my mind for ch-1 to 4. and trying to give u detailed reviews for ch-5 & 6.

CH-1-4:

I probably said this before but I like the finesse and a more.. polished touch that u have given to these chapters. I am so glad that I read ksmk so long ago that I don't remember word to word.

And yes the small changes give a fresh look to it.

Liked the way u used that song 'banno ki saheli" and loved Ashu's self thought : God why did I even come! Silly and ridiculous and juvenile of me to let Nidhi provoke me with her challenge. And she knew what she was doing too. I should have just ignored the whole thing

lolzz he realizes too late what nidhi did.

😆 yeah..

And poor guy - he is total goner when he sees nidhi dressed up in a saree with her hair open and the works.

ye raaten is my fav. song and as far as I remember it was also there in ksmk 1. (I am so glad that I read it long ago and dont remember it word to word.)

And liked the last scene of the ch4 esp, these words :

(Her face tilts up as she looks at the star studded sky and her lips form the most beautiful smile on her face.) Dr Ashutosh Mathur..what are you up to?!

i loved writing that scene..it was similar to the first one but the dialogues were new..i wanted them to be more personal..😃

Ch-5:

I really love the way u introduced the log factor here - the gossips behind their backs, etc.

So, is chapter se roses ka silsila shuru!! good good - I liked this roz rose ke dastan in this ff- subtle romance, exactly my taste. I think u added his noticing her antics outside his cabin in this one - it was not there in the original right?

right. it was not there.

And u also added this scene na, where she gives him the address of the orphanage. it was a cute scene. And he visits the place the very next day? kya baat hai?

Liked the change in the way u have presented anji-nids scene where she tells anji abt being in love...

I also like the way this time she buys two gifts for him - one for now, one to be kept in reserve 😉

frankly, i didn't want to let go of the grape wine kurta..and neither could i make her give that one for the bday. so made her get both...😛😆

SO this time, it is medical camp not paper submission. good change - that way they can be together more.

Like the way their eyes rest only on each other. Loved ashu's self thought while looking at nidhi.

ranga's predicament well brought out - Na boss se kuch kehsakta hoon na Nidhi se. I neither want to be skinned alive by my boss nor by Anji.

Ch-6:

Loved the first scene - beautifully written. florist and detective dialogue was too good as was nidhi's retort - that kabhi time milne pe internship...

The entire scene with both their expressions, reactions etc. v. well done.

liked the way nidhi helps him get a memory of his mom smiling.

Kya baat hai - his completely opposite reaction from his usual one in return from camp - love changes one completely na?

true...now he not only enjoyed the camp but can't wait to get back to KGH the next day..

his reaction when bb makes him realize that he is in love - v. v. well written buddy.

his cold aloofness to nidhi - v natural given his state of mind..

and then the scene where the man has hit his child and ashu ka gussa towards him - I liked the polished way u presented that scene as compared to original version.

you got those minute changes i made in that scene?? cool!! thanks a bunch 🤗

Very well written chapter.

chalo, done finally...phew!

and yes, a big sorry for the delay

😡 ab yeh sorry beech mein kahaa se aagaya??

Originally posted by: arpitajaan

Awesome...awesome...awesome...

Originally posted by: AISHUMA

Thanks 4 d update...koi hai????

hello...

Originally posted by: ChitaRK

Haaye! What a way to end the chapter. I have fallen in love with U

Originally posted by: Amu_05

Great chapter. Waiting for next.. as wants to know what dr hardstone's reaction after Nidhi's 'I love you'..!

Originally posted by: aksuji

umh m quite late in commenting...could not comment in last update either...sorry college work...I hope u can ignore my late latifi...

read both the chapters just now...

amazing updates as usual

and direct confession in this update...wowww

can't wait to see dr. ashutosh's reaction...definitely nidhi's presence in his life is bringing a pleasant change in his life

plz continue soon

Originally posted by: Suvika.

I hardly see you these day Aishwarya..