FF: Intehaa Pyaar Ki: Chapter 4 Page 98, June 16. - Page 37

Originally posted by: AISHUMA

Last one 4 u

A typical conversation between a husband who return late from work and work as a computer programmer and a house wife.

Husband :"Good Evening Dear, I'm now logged in."
Wife : Have you brought the ring ?
Husband : Bad command or filename.
Wife : But I told you in the morn...
Husband : Erroneous syntax.
Wife : What about my new blouse ?
Husband : Variable not found ...
Wife : At least, give me your Credit Card, I want to do some shopping.
Husband : Sharing Violation. Access denied ...
Wife : Do you love me or do you only love computers or are you just being funny ?
Husband : Too many parameters. Abort!...
Wife : It was a grave mistake that I married an idiot like you.
Husband : Data type mismatch.
Wife : You are a useless nut.
Husband : Default Parameter.
Wife : What about your Salary ?
Husband : Access denied. File in use...
Wife : Who was in the car this morning ?
Husband : System unstable. Press CTRL + ALT + DEL to Reboot

Originally posted by: AISHUMA

Bye Shirley I am off to study...c u on Friday...2morow has exam...thanks for d refreshing banter though my mission was unsuccessful😭

OK as promised , here is the review! Read n decide whether i hv managed to compel u to update ASAP or not😊

This was soo worth the wait and to get it earlier then it was planned is so awesome in itself . The flow and pace is perfect, you are literally hanging on every word.

Basically a chap of magic(saints), love with some interesting twisted plots.

Deep breath, and I cudn't wipe that big goofy grin off my face. I cudn't guess you were mocking with this Rohan Nidhi proposal issue.

These teenagers party hard and live rich. Nidhi's wish to transform from high class girl to high society princess shows she's smart, beautiful, and strong headed.

"Love? What is love Anji? Wohi jo filmo me dekhte hain? Come on Anji, grow up" she chided.

She knows exactly what she wants n how to get it! Obstinate n endeavoring Nidhi!

Anji , another adorable character of ur story who is concerned about her friend nd her stand abt life.

She didn't understand life at all. For her, life was all about enjoyment and indulgence. Indeed I don't even know how I managed to keep my friendship intact with such a self-centered person like Nidhi. But the fact is that I genuinely love her and am worried for her future.

The extract clearly shows Anji has all elements of frndship in her : accountabiliy , reliability , honesty n truly cares n loves the selfcentered Nidhi!

Apt use of lyrics , clearly signifies Mallikas state of mind who immensely loves Ashu n expects to b loved by him.

When Ashu tagged along with Mallika to the saints house the last thing he expected was to meet a girl.. But this wasn't just any girl.. Even more surprising Ashu seemed truly mesmerized by her. I love it when characters need to make choices. It is all about making those mistakes and figuring out what directions you want to go in in life. The protagonist is torn between two suitors who personify battling concepts that that the protagonist is wrestling with .

And that girl? My goodness! What was she? An enigma? Bilkul aandhi ki tarah aayi aur toofan ki tarah, mujhe bechain karke chali gayi! Was she actually for real? Or did I hallucinate?

Clearly shows his inner turmoil, a form of what love conquers can all mean!

So how wud Ashu n Nidhi pair up , what abt Mallika .Okay, the anticipation is driving me mad n I have no theories to put forward , so post the next chap.

THanks Deeps. would u mind if I reply tomorrow. rite now m working on a scene - don't want to lose the effect. and after that have some important work to finish before I go to bed. . .

so where are all the spammers.. soy gayee kya...

One more Q - what is Nidhi's father business...

Originally posted by: sshirley

Oh really? that's a difficult record to break... chaliye dekhte hain

Originally posted by: sshirley

THanks Deeps. would u mind if I reply tomorrow. rite now m working on a scene - don't want to lose the effect. and after that have some important work to finish before I go to bed. . .

Chalo -- there is no here... lagta hain sab ki GN ho gayee..

Originally posted by: deepa17

so where are all the spammers.. soy gayee kya...