KTLK FF:[TH:1] Mere Jeewan Saathi- Chp-6 Pg-117 - Page 91

Originally posted by: Pardeshi.Mithu

Review chap 6:

Good 😛 😆

Originally posted by: Aazeen02

Isey kehte hain, ghar ki murgi daal baraabar... 😡 College se wapas aao... Tumhari khair nahi Mithee..😆 😆 😆

Originally posted by: deepaligupta197

Another remarkable chap !I felt as if I was about to open a box of treasure...a fascinating story.

Thank you so much Deepali di...😃

So the stage is set for the broader scope of this story: it's not only about dysfunctional relationships within families and how these relationships inevitably collide'...but how tenderly they r dealt with.

So true... That is what is happens in families... Ek ki pareshaani kayi baar dusre parivaar par bhi pareshaani laati hai...😊

"Na main khud doobungi aur na aapko doobne doongi... Aur kabhi agar aapko lagey ke main bhi doob rahi hoon, toh please Ashuji, mujhe apni baahon mein le lijiyega... Chaahe jo ho, hum saath rahenge... Jeeyenge, toh saath mein, aur agar doob bhi gaye, toh wo bhi saath mein... Aakhir Jeewan saathi hain hum".

This was the highlight of the chapter for me'.

Actually, these were my own words... Only starting, Na main doobungi, aur na tumko doobne doongi... I used to say it to my friend, when we studied together for a competitive exam...

Aagey ke words to Ashni ko dekh ke apne aap mere dil se nikal aaye...😆😆.. But, why to lie, I too loved these words... I sometimes, myself wonder," Ye maine likha hai?"😆😆 Well, in short it was a gist of their relationship...😃

Nidhi has been portrayed as a loving wife , responsible bhabhi , sister n all shades of a women's character! The diligence , love n righteousness with which she cares for her husband n family is beyond measure!She is sensitive to each n every family members feelings!

You remember, when, u gave the review for my last chap, praising Ashu's "We" factor, I had said, you'll soon see, Nidhi's too? See, this is where, she is all a praiseworthy lady...😃

Ashu's charater has been written with obvious tenderness . Because of his considerate nature he emerges from these pages as effervescent being an exemplary version of a of a dutiful son , brother , husband '..

I don't know why, I'm so biased with this character, Ashutosh... I don't want him to make any wrong impression... And seriously, I'm very happy with his character potrayal... He is indeed, worth a man...😃

He tries to steer a foolish Rohan to the right path, taking it on him to look after the kid, and make attempts to curb the other sibling's behavior. This seldom works, however, at least not until the end when the foolish sibling gets their comeuppance or realizes the error of their ways

Rohan is foolish, acting melodramatically and prone to doing irresponsible and impulsive things. Surely he has no outright bad intentions, but just doesn't understand that anything they do can have consequences for themselves or other people.

@blue... No Deepali di... Rohan is not foolish... He's just immature... When you are in a very-very protective environment, you lack exposure... And that is what, Rohan is going to get... Sometimes, when, we take a decision on our own, specially when that is taken alone for the first time, you feel that, what I'm thinking is correct... and that is what Rohan is in...

For me, the toughest of time, a person faces emotionally is, when a girl and a boy cross an age of 18 and 21 respectively... One gets the legal license for lots of things, including marriage... You are officially an adult then... Ek teenager, ko aap bhale hi daant ke, pyaar se, aur kabhi shayad maar se, aap ek baat samjha sakte ho, lekin, ek newly adult ko samjhana bohot mushkil hai... one can say- "I'm officially an adult to do so" And you cannot bring them with compulsions... Let me clear, although, he is not a 21... he is somewhere around 24, yet I say, he's a newly adult...

I'm giving you an insight into Rohan's thinking... He had always been protected by his parents and brothers... Till then, he would not have taken any such big decision in his life, and when he had taken it, when he has already fallen in love, come what may, wo apne pyar ki buraayi nahi sunn sakta... He is having a tug of war in his mind... Ek taraf usko apne bhai ki baatein ghalat lag rahi hain, and he wants to defend his love, aur doosri taraf, he loves and foremost respects his elder brother to the core... wo chaah kar bhi unko koi jawaab nahi de sakta, and that is why, he is retorting to his brother, that he'll prove his love for mallu to him...

He just needs to learn the lesson that, what your family and elders say to u are most of the times for ur benefit... They are not your enemy... and kayi baar, jo hum, apne bado ke kehne se nahi seekhte, wo hum zindagi ki maari thokaron se seekhte hai... You'll see these kind of dialogues in the coming chaps...😃

Ashu's encounter with old friend Mallika suddenly casts doubt over his typically resilient self-control. Mallika thou claims to love Rohan, but she begins to show up consistently at wrong places that compels us to view her with varying degrees of contempt

You'll get to know, a little about their past, and how, he had considered her, only a friend... But, his main problems will arise, when he'll feel her presence, in his privacy with his wife... The manner it was in the last scene... Who will like, that he's romancing with his wife in private, and someone delibrately comes and watch them, all jealous n kind of... He's bound to get angry then...

The tinge of humour with Ranji was beautifully bought out '.another sneak into the bounteous relationship the family shares

That was kind of necessary... Didn't it? Becoz, when a girl comes into a new home, specially when her elder sis is there right beside u, and u know, how loving a family they are, it feels all rosy.. But then, when she encounters all that drama, and distressed faces, she's bound to get upset... And definitely for Ranga... he is as tensed as others of the family...

And AshNi understanding their problem, and to make the environment, a little lighter for them, they acted in a manner, that Mallika's presence has not made any difference... And then that convo, made them forget for sometime, that there was some tension around, and they can proceed with their married life in a better fashion...

This twist of ending brought it all together for me.

An all in all wonderful chap!

Thank u so much di... keep tuned in to the next chaps... You'll surely enjoy them...😃

Originally posted by: deepa17

Aazeen I am little busy so was out of IF am not going anywhere ok.

Originally posted by: Pardeshi.Mithu

Hey Babes...Awesome update😊
Thank you hai ji...😃
Bechari Neeti yaar😭 Yeh Rohan ne kya kiya! And can imagine the silence u know as soon as Mallu-jhallu enters...par acha hua Neeti vaha se chali gayi it was good for her varna her breakdown there uske liye bohot odd ho jaata

Actually, she has never told anyone officially, that she somewhere liked Rohan... Its only their guesses that they know all...

But, if she cried out there, Rohan would have come to know actually... And she won't let him know, ke uske dil mein kya hai... This Neeti has my heart... Uske dil mein kya hai, wo saamne jataana nahi chaahti, specially, Rona toh bilkul nahi chahti...Kisi ko uske aansu nahi dikhne chahiye... And since they do not cry infront of others, they are known as bubbly...😃

but u know Nidhi's turmoil at that moment ki kya karu touched me alot...actually situations do come and a girl has to decide ki kaha jaau yaha ya waha...but good thing she called up to Baba...and at the same time Anji's helplessnes was clear with that one moment u wrote when she looks @ Nidhi haaye dono beheno ko kitna bura laga hoga!😭
Yeah! This chap somewhere revolved around Nidhi... But, the phase of worries, will make her come out more polished... Heera taraasha hua niklega... Anji knows, what Nidhi must b feeling, n so, she also is equally helpless... But, they say so, when there is a will, there is a way... Nidhi had made her presence at both the homes... She informed baba, and he made it on her behalf... And hence, she came out in a better situation...

Ashu Rohan convo bang on...bada bhai ho toh aisa jo bhi vo sochta hain clearly Rohan ko keh diya par dekho ab yeh Rohan baba kitni der lagata hain apne bhai ki baat samajhne😊
Next few chaps mein sab samajh aayega...

I liked ki Ashu ne mahol ko sambhal liya😳 and that whole scene Ashu in front of their marriage pic and his thoughts was beautiful Aazeen Excellent and i am loving this mature Nidhi bohot cute hain yaar!
It was quite necessary for him n Nidhi to make it a little normal for the newly weds... And what better to deviate their mind, than making them blush...😉😆

Nidhi ke baare mein toh maine pehle hi kaha tha... Bohot hi suljhi, samjhi seedhi ladki hai... But a very understanding and loving-caring wife, DIL and sister... Finally cahlo tumko meri Nidhi pasand aa gayi..

Neeti ke liye perfect song...i just loved it😳 and Beti-papa talk was good...
Ab tumne songs daalne ki ijaazat de di hai, toh dil khol ke daal diya...😆

On a serious note, they suit the situation...

The papa-beti daughter convo, mujhe bhi achha laga...😃

Again Nidhi as badi bahu is so adorable😳 feels so good about this Nidhi mujhe yeh Ashu se zyaada pasant aayi...pyaar ke churaye hue pal between Ashni was cho cho chweet😳
Thank u yaar Mithee... This is an honour for me, that u r liking my Nidhi more than Ashu... Although, for me both are equally adorable... Like, the way, in Hum saath-saath hain, You cannot decide, whether, Vivek was more adorable or Sadhna... Although there, Tabu's role was not that ellaborate, yet, she was equally supportive to the family n her hubby...

Par 😲 ye Mallu-jhallu😲 vaha kar kya rahi thi? Gandi bachi!...iske iraade mujhe theek nahi lagte..so jaldi se next update ki taiyaari kar aur Mallu-Jhallu ke irrade bata kya hain.

You'll deffo see that in the next update...😃

Originally posted by: Pardeshi.Mithu

Aazuu tera jaadu! 🤣 get lost, agli baar nahi dungi😡 i know i give the worst review in this forum😭

Originally posted by: Aazeen02

Zyada hansne ki zarurat nahi hai... maanna hai toh maano, nahi toh phut lo...😆😛

ok then bye😡

And zyada itraane ki bhi zarurat nahi hai... Review nahi diya na toh soch lena, aise aise mgs bhejungi, ke tumhara college tumko certified mad announce kar dega...😆

😲 zara ek bhej ke toh dikha then i'll decide ki itraana hain ya nahi...challenge

And no babes, tumhare reviews are not at all bad... har insaan ka apna style hota hai...

kam se kam u try to write something, beyond, nice update, and when the next chap is, or continue soon...😳