KTLK FF:[TH:1] Mere Jeewan Saathi- Chp-6 Pg-117 - Page 9

Originally posted by: bc123456

Very sweet , very family , liked allthe character , waiting to see how the story progresses, will their be shades of grey , or a loving , caring family , but really enjoyed the first part , great going

Originally posted by: vidyasabde

Aazeen...you did a fantastic job...loved the new family of Ashu with Ranga and Rohan as bro and Anu mata (😉)...it was like seeing a movie...maja a gaya.

next kab doge update?

Originally posted by: rrdsu

Lovely first chapter aazeen..ashu-ranga-rohan brothers interesting .loved the plot..enjoyed the chap.very much ..thanks ..
Will wait for next chap..

Originally posted by: rajanigandha26

Are muze pata hi nahi chala you have posted chap 1. Is this purely arranged marriage? This is perfectly Rajashri production FF. I am sure we all are going to enjoy it without much tension. Please continue and keep updating regularly.

Originally posted by: swati62

Ashutosh is definetly SK would never want to visualise any other. But this was one of MBs better roles.

Originally posted by: lee_Ashni

Wow Aazeen, turned a fabulous writer, bahut khoob. wonderful imagination and writing dear. Loved the firstchapter. Waiting for the next soon.😃

Originally posted by: Ena292

comented!!

Originally posted by: Suvika.

a very very good start Aazeen..Thank u di...😃and lots of relations changed too..Hmmm... Tried my hand on Family drama...😆really like that. will read chapters 2 and 3 also and then post my full comments in one shot. Ok! U wait for chap-3 n 4, n I'll wait for ur comments...

for now, i will only say that you have improved by leaps and bounds from your previous FF. Oh! That is a huge compliment...😃 Improvement is the best thing, one can have... U know, when I had written this 1st chap, it was much before JHUBJ... now when I re-read it, I found somethings so immature, that, i had re-written the entire chap again...😆😆😆

just one question..whats Nidhi's age in this one?? i understood that Ashu is 36..but didn't get a clear pic of Nidhi..Sab kuch 1st chap mein thode hi bata doongi... kuch 2nd chap ke liye bhi toh hoga na... U'll get to know everything... Nidhi's age, how Ashni's relation got arranged, Nidhi's family, ect-ect...😳😳😳

Originally posted by: mudraswathi

Hi Azeen,

Sorry dear!! phil haal kaafi busy ho gayi... I will return to normalcy by 25th hopefully...

Thank you for the pm.😊