Gud morning! Wow what a way to start the day. Just read the chap over a cup of coffee. Needless to say my coffee tasted sweeter😊. A beautiful chap Luvd the way Ashu is trying to mend his mistakes taking one step at a time. The "bangles" part was very thoughtful , a perfect way to say sorry. And now the reception an open acceptance for their relation. Each n evry part was beautifully written Ashu n Nidhi at the hospital when he feeds her , waits for her , their trip to manali , their private moments , everything etched so endearingly .
I think that the best indicator of good writing is if it touches us in some way. We might relate to something an author has written or we might be able to completely put ourselves in the shoes of the hero or heroine. I think u hv the way u are developing Ashu's character nd organizing the plot well , at the same time is commendable.
I think I have grown as a reader because I have finally stopped confining myself to books that are only in my life experience, with characters I would like or relate to. Some of my richest reading in the last few days(esp ur stories) have been characters I didn't necessarily like and couldn't relate to, but the glimpse into their souls has expanded my understanding of humanity. I now understand why u asked us to b patient nd I think it payed off well.
Edited by deepaligupta197 - 12 years ago