FF: Tu Hi Tu..Th 3 Chapter 9 Pg 102 Apr 30 - Page 30

Originally posted by: ssktlk

Another cool update Turags. Loving Ashu's gradual warming up to Nidhi, and their getting close. Can't wait for their HM now😉

Originally posted by: pansy123

You didn't miss me and didn't know I've not given review for the chapter 6 as well...anyways coming to the chapter 6

😡 Pansy...now thats being unfair...i asked in your thread if you had read my chapter 6...you said how could i resist, i read in on my phone...and then i read that you are not well and didn't want to hound you for a review since you already told me "how can i resist your chapter"...looks like my consideration is being taken as being absent minded

I accept that I was a bad girl, a bad daughter and a bad friend. But does that make me a bad wife too by default?

The line was aptly phrased to describe the buried pain in Nidhi...that put across all the pain that was hidden beneath.

Loved the way Anji answered/revealed to him Nidhi's torment. Though she is very talkative but I found her careful in disclosing things. She didn't disclose Nidhi's intense feelings for him I think Anji knows and in a way she kept the facade intact.

The pang of guilt in Ashutosh was well portrayed. And loved Ashutosh's contrite before yog in his cabin.

The thought that she is probably afraid of starting a conversation or worse that she is probably waiting for him to pounce on her like a rutting bull is like an arrow piercing his insides. Finally in a soft almost tentative voice, she asks: tired?

Nidhi forgetting her pain and initiating the conversation shows clearly how she has mastered in dealing the pain and the abrasions of love. As they say:

Of all pains, the greatest pain, Is to love, and to love in vain.

Till now her love was in vain but she didn't give up that shows the depth of her love.

@ red... thank you Pansy..

Chapter-7

Ashutosh is trying to restore and revive his old relationship with her. He is missing her chulbuli. Ashutosh's mending of the damage done is 👏 . But I still feel he has taken her for granted he'd have at least regretted before her what he said that night? Atleast before going to bed ...☺️

his is regretting but like 95% of the men, words of apology don't come out of his mouth easily..

Nidhi's joy at his care and at his sudden change is well portrayed and yes her apprehensions as well.

The way you brought Arman in was fabulous.

Hope Arman- Ashutosh's relationship gets restored and would love to see Ashutosh's reaction or remorse on getting acquainted with Nidhi's true love.

all in good time...😳

Originally posted by: Anjani9

Why the thread is silent?

Originally posted by: deepa17

Been busy - one question popped up right now - whose call was Ashu expecting and did recieve on a Sunday night ?

And also why did he have to go to the study and put on headset ?

call was official...and when VM is in the process of picking itself from the ground, he can't afford to take a complete off and switch off his phone because its a Sunday. and before you ask, yes, he is going to get that phone to his HM too..😆

@Anjani see my reply to your question on prev page.

Originally posted by: Suvika.

readers are missing the sadistic Ashu and don't want this redeemed Ashu any more...

Originally posted by: mudraswathi

Let me start with the high light points first...

The ability to write lengthy updates... updates after updates... (I am unable to type two paragraph review here...) and put things together.. connecting them all... A big feat!!!👏


Definitely, the warming up of Ashutosh. As, Achiever said, good that he is redeemed quickly... otherwise, what all the names we would have given to him...😆
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The sheer delight of Nidhi's parents at their daughter's slightest happiness... They have visited Mathurs at the first opportunity they got!!! poor fellows!!!! When Nidhi had told them not to visit her, there would have been the pain of sharpest knives running through their souls!!! and, I am right.. HK was indeed planted by Nandini...

oh yeah..you were bang on in that..thats why i kept quiet and didn't comment on that questionnaire...most of the readers also chose that option...

Obviously the romance is a high light... But, alas!!! I am no good reviewer of romance... so, it just occurred to me as, Ashutosh put his sticky fingers into Nidhi's hair... OR... all ten fingers in her head..must have pulled the hair unpleasantly... OR... the expensive saree is torn and she must give it for darning immediately... OR...she had to pull on his sweat smelling T shirt ... (Romance mongers!!! Please do not come behind me with...!!!!)😆
🤣 i have trained myself to put these thoughts away from my mind while i am typing these scenes...

Gripping update with sudden turn of events... towards the end. It was so sudden... the cruel death of the child put me off for a long time than enjoying the dramatic appearance of Armaan...

it was not the child..it was the driver of the bus...

I am in a kind of dilemma here...about what to put...

When Ashutosh was acting all that villain, I was not quite convinced with him...and gave him all my blessings ...because, otherwise he was a very good fellow... . now, he has turned into a good boy... I am not convinced again... Now, I find him over acting... yes... he is doing a bit more unconvincingly... No wonder Nidhi is taking her own time to come to him...

He fitted perfectly to the description of a wounded lion then .. if it was connected to Aditi case... but it turned out to be.. he was acting to get to know why his wife is no more chulbuli... strange...very strange...in the first two weeks of their marriage, he has given Nidhi a horrible picture of him... now suddenly his life aim has changed to spend a good life with his wife... (one may argue, that Aditi is an old news now... .and slowly anybody would forget...if so, why has he acted like mad dog then towards Nidhi??? )...
I am not convinced ... this change has come when he came to know the demons Nidhi has faced... not with his maturity, all those years have given him... I am finding him self-centred and egoistic... and ... and...🤬

he IS a self centred egoistic guy...no two ways about it Mudra...thats why i said you all won't find him completely changed overnight...he is not going to suddenly start thinking from others' POV.. and as for the rest, hope the upcoming chapters answer at least a few of your questions...and he was not acting...and no, he did not do everything just to know why his wife is chulbuli no more...
I know.. Ashutosh ki deewaniyon are ready with .. for me...

I find a very minute problem here... which we notice in movies and everywhere... unless, one has planned to give importance to many (multiple heroes), always hero stands out with his intelligence, quick thinking, sheer command on whatever mission he is on or passion... This fact has to be reiterated every now and then... otherwise, readers like me with negligible memory, would forget his greatness and pounce upon on whatever he is lacking...

Though, the bank has given them the crucial loan or very brilliantly he had sorted out problems at VM... as a fool, I have attributed investors positive nod to marriage with Nidhi and ... as there is no way of knowing how Ashutosh has chalked out the success with bankers, I simply thought...OK ..problems are solved on their own...
Suddenly, His concern, his physical features or seduction capabilities are less impressive now...
Actually, no need of intricate details... that anyway,I dont understand a bit... but, a simple logical problem solving would have put me back in place of hero worshipping committee...

there is no hero worshipping committee here Mudra...whatever is happening in VM is going on at a slow pace. AshNi got married and the bank meeting was about a month AFTER that...during that month, whatever happened in the official front, i left for reader assumption. a company at the brink of shut down to come out is not going to happen in a month or two or even 6. its a long process. and i did not go into details deliberately because then i would have to give all the details which would mostly go over the head of the readers..this one is at the end of the day a love story with a touch of murder mystery added to spice it up...didn't want to deviate from that...

I know .. I am always harsh and rude...and sorry.. if I have given more negative review... (I simply lost count.. how many times, I utter this sorry..)... But, I sincerely wish..you should get published your next novel onwards... I will be very much delighted, if a bit of harsh truth in the form of negative feedback helps you in getting there.

no apology required and you were neither harsh nor rude. and thank you.

Originally posted by: deepa17

Good morning Sujathaji

We Ashu lovers love him in any form.

Today was busy, tomorrow even more so and I am actually not going to be on the forum on Friday during the day. Hope that the spammers come alive and we have page 150 by Friday nightIST.