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Posted: 12 years ago
#31

Originally posted by: sss97

Wow seriously its very nice.

Thanks for the refreshing short and sweet OS
Loved the way you had ended the house track.
And kyaa beginning tha yaar I actually want to see Ashu and Nidhi play pakada pakadi in the show it has been a dream since they had got married.Happy ki you have written it kya pata ki if suddenly KP visits this site and gets this idea?? Nobody knows aaj kal aap ki har kwaaish poori horahi hai .


😃 hey you too?? even i wanted to see a pakada pakadi scene so much...yaar i don't know why they equate romance with explicit intimate scenes...romance takes different forms...and this one is one of the most romantic according to me..esp the way he catches her from behnd and lifts her...both their laughter heard all over the garden...

and if KPji implements this idea i tell you..i would be the happiest...

thank you SS..
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Posted: 12 years ago
#32

Originally posted by: pansy123

Sooo Sweet! Nidhi knowing about pregnancy and so much running...
Loved house part. Thatz really a loose end-there are many actually. If only they can tie up all, the way you did. Fantastic


Oye Pansy...samjha kar yaar...she herself is a doctor...she is taking a self test matlab its still in early stages probably 6 weeks or so...thoda running chalega...😛😆

thank you...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#33

Originally posted by: ChitaRK

wow. would have loved to see this


ab se leke 28th tak mere saare OS wahi honge...wish fulfilments...serial mein nahi..OS mein hi sahi...😉

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Posted: 12 years ago
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thank you Vidya.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#35

Originally posted by: arpitajaan

Suja nice OS, read it, will review later...thanks


waiting...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#36

Originally posted by: syedzoya

Wowww sujha di what a beautiful OS...Completely amazing...Ashu pampering nidhi trying to fulfill her every wish and u brought a house issue in a totally different which i enjoyed very much...Thanks fr this beautiful OS di...


you are most welcome Zoya...glad you are happy with this Ashu pampering Nidhi...😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
#37

Originally posted by: aardhan

Very nice Sujatha. Thank you forfulfillingthe long-standing desire of the fans and finishing this track and of course for adding the pregnancy bit as well. That will most probably be another loose end!😃


thank you for the review Aarti..the way you analyse and explain is almost as big as my OS and I love and wait for your reviews...🤗

Hai! so many times I have written the same scenario of Baghi being brought in as an accident victim and Ashni finally finding out the truth. It could have been such an emotional scene but alas, CVs never understood these small little touches could lift the show!

i know..i remember you discussing this during that Mallika entry, re entry and re re entry tracks...in fact Bagchi accident thing..i remembered your comment and took it from there only..😳

Loved the part where Ashu discovers the pregnancy truth and true to his thought these days he was worried about Nidhi's career.. that will probably be his exact reaction if this scene is shown in the show now!

yeah..and its not only that...he is also worried about whether SHE is really happy with the news..

And loved the bedroom part where Ashu finally understands the depth of Nidhi's pain because her dream was broken. In fact stolen by Mallika, as they bothdiscoveredin the end. And the last part, the last nail in the Ashu-Mallu friendship coffin per se... the only connection between the two now is the house and AShu is gong to breakthatbond as well...👏

thank you...and yes, i could not envision them moving into the house...
Honestly Sujatha, I have mentioned the exact same thing that I got tired in the end...🤢.and you really do not even need to show the house. All they needed to do was cook up a situation for Bagchi and Ashni to meet and the rest could have been handled!

exactly my point...they can show the house separately and shoot AShNi standing on the road separately and join the scenes...we would have been happy with that...😡

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Posted: 12 years ago
#38

Originally posted by: Mithalee

Extremely sorry for being so late...
But excellent yaar u r just Awesome and thanx a ton for that pregnancy thing, i was so so so happy reading it u cant even imagine and at the same time i was just blushing thank u so much for it ...
...the way u showed Ashu pampering Nidhi it was like Awww i was literally dancing with joy
too good yaar...u dont know meri kitni badi wish aapne poori ki hain😳 😳
And that house thing kitni aasaani se aapne uska solution nikala i was like😲 kyu yaar kyu ye cvs apna dimaak nahi chalaate? 😭😭
It was just wonderfull👏 to be frank now i am not even bothered what will be the end in the show u gave answers to all my questions in this os...

Waise toh main aapki kitni bhi taarif karu kam hain sach main it was excellent...and there is something very stupid but i will PM u☺️ ☺️ ☺️


Mithalee...and yes, if one wants to provide closure, there is always a way to bring it about in a simple sensible manner...chalo koi baat nahi...as i said...serial mein nahi toh OS mein hi sahi...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#39

Originally posted by: jyothi_cool

amazing os ji lovrd it


thank you Jyothi...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#40

Originally posted by: lee_Ashni

Wow Suja ji what an OS! The most wanted one - the baby track and unfolding of BB's house track. Very cutely written. Beautiful words, beautiful situation, dialogues. Loved it.👏 Kaash ye sub hum serial me dekh paate? Hope season 2 comes.


thank you Dr Lee..we have lots of hanging tracks in the serial...hope they close at least some of them...

and yes, waiting for season 2...

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