Jab Koi Baat Bigad Jaaye ch10 p94, epi-p99 - Page 13

Originally posted by: turags

shirley madam sogayi kya??? 😡

Originally posted by: saibanu

OMG ☺️☺️☺️

I am still blushing , I missed reading prev chapter but now read everything in one go ...superb chapter dear , wow enjoyed reading it ...👏👏

Even I m blushing. Thank you so much dear.

Ashu is so bold , did not expected Nidhi's presence can make him like this 😆,,<Chalo SR ho gaya now what next ??? eagerly waiting for more ... Continue Ji 😃

Abhi toh ek itna exhausting chapter post kiya hai...pl. gimme atleast 2 days.

Originally posted by: ssktlk

Wow, Shirley, that was some SR. Though you said you are not comfortable in writing all this, you have done a wonderful job. Without going into raw details, you have presented it very very aesthetically, I got goosebumps reading it😉. It was very very hot, and effective, loved the bold Ashu that Nidhi's love has turned him into. And now, I presume, Mallika will take the story forward? Eagerly awaiting the next.👏

Originally posted by: turags

wwwooohhhooo...kya update tha shirley...zoombastic...am in dreamland...and it was not that explicit yaaar...its truly lovely and sensitive...i loved it...

Thanks a lot sujata... i m glad it is not that explicit...but i m still blushing hard

@bold, thank you so much u donno what it means to me, when u say that.

loved both of them hesitant yet bold...shy yet passionate...impatient yet considerate...so many feelings and emotions on that one night...really done very very well...i really wish i had seen this in the serial...

@bold - me too

my best moments of this chapter:

1. Ashutosh wasn't so sure of whether she was comfortable. They had known each other for long, they were in love and all that but the fact was they had never ventured much into the physical terrain. Firstly, his own self imposed restraint was the reason. His reserve over being much older then her, the propriety of such a relationship had weighed so heavily on his mind that he had dared not make any physical moves for a long time. And then, everything had happened in such a hurry thereafter.

All these words are penned by Sujata Rao so the credit goes to her, not me.

2. "Nidhi jaise aaj ka din hamare liye yaadgaar raha hai, kya hum is raat ko bhi utna hi yaadgaar bana sakte hain?" and Nidhi's reaction following this dialogue...loved this shy yet teasing Ashu...

Thank you. This is how i visualize Ashu...hesitant yet bold, shy yet teasing

3. when i read the phone ringing and Ashu leaving, i was like 😡 but you followed it up very well...that blending of the serial and your own version was done in an awesome way boss...kudos to you...really!! i mean it...

I believe this is wat should have happened on the show too...it was so frustrating to see jab ek jaag raha hai toh doosra so raha hai.

4. "ji..woh..aap ke lips" was hilarious...i was like ROFL...super cute scene of the whole chapter that was..

That idea just came out of the blue...i hope it didnt look forced.

5. Nidhi wearing AShu's kurta is yummy yummy...wish AShu had scene her too instead of being a good boy and closing his eyes...but i guess thats Ashu for you...a thorough gentleman through and through...

Yes, thats ashu for us.

6. Ashu back hugging Nidhi is my all time favourite...

Mera bhi, mera bhi

7. "Nidhi, I am all yours too!" am in dreamland after this dialogue i tell you...

I was just wondering if that portion was too bold.

8. the next day morning scene was done so well...the awkwardness and hesitancy came out beautifully...it takes time for a couple to shed those things irrespective of what happens in the cloak of darkness...

Thats right...i was so frustrated when they behaved as if nothing had happened on the morning after on the show...i mean pahle ringa ringa roses for SR and then that frustrating morning after scene.

9. I loved that you showed DB and Solanki still off...in reality, thats what happens...and you brought in Mallika in between all this very nicely...and explained her absence at AshNi wedding..

@bold - There is a reason behind that.

I m glad people are not irritated with her very name.

10. Finally, Ashu ka balancing act shuru hogaya...as Nidhi's lover and husband Vs Mallika's friend...I wish him all the luck in the world...

@bold, I thank on my AShu's behalf...he truly needs it.

you are awesome...truly...this is from me to you...👏🤗

wow...it was a very nice update!!!

Originally posted by: sshirley