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Posted: 12 years ago
#51

Originally posted by: karajekar



chap was nice

but kuch samjha nahi mujhe , dono ka ek saal ka difference gap ,kuch explanation nahi

matlab kuch samaj ,nahi aaya ,aur achanak woh old male person ka accident

pls exp karo

hmm..lagta hain ak aur part likhna padega! or yaar. 😭😭😭 tumhe kuch samajhmehi nayi aayi! meri mehnat bekar! ok will write another part to short out the reason of nidhi's not coming that day!😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
#52
very sweet and romantic story.
but it feels as if picture abhi baki hai.
Nidhi kyo nahi ayi thi?
pl complete the story.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#53
itni jaldi end????? Acche bacche ki tarah next part likho
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Posted: 12 years ago
#54

Originally posted by: vidyasabde

very sweet and romantic story.

but it feels as if picture abhi baki hai.
Nidhi kyo nahi ayi thi?
pl complete the story.

hai meri futi kismaat! 😭😭 sabko ye adhuri lagi! ok next part mein unki shaadi hi karwadete hain...akdam sab pura hojayega!!😆😆😆 thank u, dear! i will write one more part then!😊😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#55

Originally posted by: Vidishaa

itni jaldi end????? Acche bacche ki tarah next part likho

haan!haan! the end ka bord hatah dia!😆😆😆😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
#56
ena very good and romantic os.but you can continue it please think of it.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#57

Originally posted by: alkaparmart

ena very good and romantic os.but you can continue it please think of it.

yah! i will write one more part!😃😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
#58
Oye,end matlab kya haan? Ek do part aur likhna padega. And make sure romantic ho.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#59
Hi Ena you are a romantic story writer. Bahut acchi situation hai "Barish". Good imagination. Apke writing skills ko barkarar rakhte hue hum sub ki demand par aur ek romantic part mangta hai yaar.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#60
Yes. Very lovely update but many doubts to be cleared...how can you seperate them for one year

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