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Aazeen02

@Aazeen02

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+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: rabzonedge

😆...filhaal koi twist daal k scene likho..😉

Haal-filhaal toh humara brain hi twisted hai... Kya karein😕

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Debaparna

@debaparna77

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Posted: 12 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: rabzonedge

nhi tum samjhao...😉

tp mat kar 😕

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Cookermaichane

@Cookermaichane

Achiever

+ 9

Posted: 12 years ago

#13

rabzy tu bhi naa yar kya kya sochtee hai 😆

dekh aab abhi mai writter toh nahi baan sakti par phir bhi aaj raat serial mai kuch aisa hogaa dekhnaa😉

soo ashni r in there bed room at end of wednesday epi..right, toh aab serial mai lamp dekhaa kii khataam kar dengee😆uussski baad joo huaa woh aapne aap samaaj jaoo😆😉😉😉

phir subah suraj niklegaa aasmaan mai..aur ashu ki gaadi sethi KHG ki gate par🤣

phir DD ko bataayeegee kisii par gussa kartee huee😆

phir sunset dekhayeegee..aur khusi aaj fullfleged designer baan jaayee gee🤣kaisee baani mujee maat puchho🤣

usski baad raat hojayee gee aur chandaa mama ki darshan karaayeegee phir soo jayee gee ashni🤣

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Debaparna

@debaparna77

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Posted: 12 years ago

#14

@NR, tum aur tumhara yaar..dono hi is duniya ki 8th ajoobe ho 😆

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Vidisha

@Veni-Vidi-Vici

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+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#15

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Dr.Dubey ki tanashahi aur zor pakad leti hai...Ashu apne guru ke har ulte seedhe plan ko praise karne laga...Nidhi ko yeh baat bahut buri lagi aur usne Ashu se jhagda kar liya.

Heeraman Kaka ke family mein koi emergency thi..isliye woh apne gaon chale gaye...BB had already left on a pilgrimage with his jeevan-sandhya pals.

Now Ashu and Nidhi were all alone in MM...the cold war became even more intense...

Nidhi decided against leaving MM as she wanted to assert her right over it...and since BB wasn't around she moved to the guest room.

She exacted revenge for all the praises Ashu had heaped on canteen food...all he got to eat at home was some dry rotis to be eaten along with boiled veggies...Ashu's ego didn't allow him to request Nidhi to prepare something more palatable.

Ashu was a complete dunce when it came to culinary skills...

"Wish Mallika was here...kuch na kuch toh zaroor khilati..mujhe aise bookhe marne nahin deti"

An idea flashed in his head when he thought about Mallu...it was Maxi...her former maid..."Woh ladki bahut baate karti hain...parr khana bhi utna hi accha banati hai"

Ashu rummaged through his stuff for the phone number of her placement agency...Nidhi watched him search with amusement."Maybe he has contracted a new disease from Dubey"

Ashu's search yielded result...he steeled himself "I know that 7K is a huge amount...but then, I can't continue to starve like this...jaan hai toh jahaan hai"

The door bell rang...Nidhi answered it. She was taken aback when Maxi said "Hunk ghar pe nahi hai? Usne mujhe apni dekhbaal ke liye bhulaya hai...waise usne toh bataya tha ki ghar mein khana banane wala koi nahi hai...toh phir..tum toh uski biwi nahi ho sakti..."

"Arrey haan..you are that Mister's sister right?...Maxi is always right"

Nidhi was left speechless...did Ashu really hire her for his dekhbaal??..why such a young girl? he could have employed a man servant...that was a marked departure from his usual behavior...and the girl actually called him a hunk...

Alarm bells rang

Maxi made herself feel at home and started working straightaway...

She went to Ashu's room to change the covers...Ashu was unaware of her presence and came out of the bathroom with only a towel to protect his modesty...he became aware of her presence only when Maxi exclaimed..."Owww...what a body...Maxi finds you s@#y"

Nidhi rushed into the room and shot an angry glance at Maxi..."tumhe dekhbaal ke liye bulaya tha..mere pati ko dekhne ke liye nahin...aur agar kuch dekhna hi chahti ho yeh dekho..."

Nidhi kissed Ashu in the true French way...

Romance returned

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preetal

@preetal

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#16

waah re waah rabzji...kya assignment deh diya.😛

mena zaar romantic mood me wapas aati huh...

filhal toh family ki sewa me haazir huh toh kitchen me lasagna joh paak rahehe unhi ke baare me post banjayega😉

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rayafan17

@rayafan17

Stunner

Posted: 12 years ago

#17

Me no writer. with great difficulty write a few words. I am from the reader world. But loved scenes written here.😃.

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Rabzonedge

@rabzonedge

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: vidyasabde
what an idea sir ji !

😆

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Rabzonedge

@rabzonedge

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: Shee_xaan
GOOD IDEA

story likho..😕

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Rabzonedge

@rabzonedge

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+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#20

Originally posted by: nidhirohan
rabzy tu bhi naa yar kya kya sochtee hai 😆
dekh aab abhi mai writter toh nahi baan sakti par phir bhi aaj raat serial mai kuch aisa hogaa dekhnaa😉

soo ashni r in there bed room at end of wednesday epi..right, toh aab serial mai lamp dekhaa kii khataam kar dengee😆uussski baad joo huaa woh aapne aap samaaj jaoo😉

phir subah suraj niklegaa aasmaan mai..aur ashu ki gaadi sethi KHG ki gate par🤣

phir DD ko bataayeegee kisii par gussa kartee huee😆

phir sunset dekhayeegee..aur khusi aaj fullfleged designer baan jaayee gee🤣kaisee baani mujee maat puchho🤣

usski baad raat hojayee gee aur chandaa mama ki darshan karaayeegee phir soo jayee gee ashni🤣

😃...kya story thi..mazaa aa gaya..aur likha kar tu samjhi..😉

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