*GoodBye_AshNi*Epilogue*p114*Jaane Kya Baat Hui - Page 11

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Anjani9

Are you planning marriage next or any other story line in between?

dear.. u r so impatient.. wats the fun if story is revealed beforehand.. and u know how i luv the suspense element..😆
the only thing tht prompted me to chng the story line a bit was my time in hand.. and my management of it.. which is going disorderly due to my writing blocks!😆 I realized how important it is to have rite set of mind to write rite sort of thing.. eh.. my moody nature.. i wonder how Libra and Turags manage these things.. 🤔
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Pooja_0910

Wow what a beautiful chapter it was...just loved it...Your description about preparation of wedding bed is so perfect like all this happening infront of my eyes just beautiful and Ashu Nidhi made it more beautiful with their efforts...Oh my Ashu all the time he was just staring at beautiful creature of god and other side Nidhi's heart just beating n beating !!! AshNi romance was so romantic, passionate, sizzling and bold...These two share such sparkling chemistry...:):):)
Ashu gonna stay at sasural wow it seems u kept something intresting for us ha looking forward to read it:):)

the wedding bed... .. it looked so beautiful.. laden in rose petals.. it surely mst've been site to behold.. no dbt Ashu had hard time controlling himself.. i had scrapped a dialogue of his which suited this scene perfectly.. while answering to her question of how the room looked? earlier he had answered.. let me make u feel how it looks rthr thn tell in mere words !😛.. now i think i shud've kept tht dialouge!😳
agree.. thr chemistry is sparkling.. effervescent and very spontaneous.. i luved the way Ashu was so careful abt her braid later on.. as much he hated it.. he cudnt help bt luv it!😛
Ashu at his sasural.. now some intersting games begin!😉
thnk u sooo very much for ur lovely lovely reply.. keep rocking this thrd..😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
aaah.. jst wrote a very alluring enticing little part.. oh i luv thr banters, which lead to very romantic little encounters☺️
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Posted: 12 years ago
wats up ppl.. i m getting B. O. R. E. D.. bored..
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Posted: 12 years ago

Twists and turns in story will make the FF more interesting😛

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Anjani9

Twists and turns in story will make the FF more interesting😛

its on the way!😳
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: achiever

thnks soo much.. i was a bit apprehensive in taking this fwd..😆 bt AshNi have thr way to express thr feelings.. i luved it!😳

Nidhi has tears.. hmm... y y y girl!!! even ashu is confused

Please tell us soon. If u want you can keep ashu confused but tell me na.😆
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: rajanigandha26

Please tell us soon. If u want you can keep ashu confused but tell me na.😆

ashu is not going to stay in confusion.. v know Ashu na.. vo to seedhi ungli se bhi ghee nikal sakta hai..😆 its a very sweet scene..
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Posted: 12 years ago
Next chap kab hai ji? hum intejaar kar rahe hai.
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: alkaparmart

Next chap kab hai ji? hum intejaar kar rahe hai.

still need to pen a little bit.. tomorrow is busy day.. so will only b able to upload on thursday!😳

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