DESTINY'S COURSE chap 8 parts 1&2 updtd 1/6 page 130 - Page 3

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Posted: 12 years ago
#21

Originally posted by: SSA777

Anu, what a concept!!! Ashu proposing marriage to have a baby. And Nidhi agreeing. 👏


Can't wait to see the love blossoming ... maybe Ashu pampering a pregnant Nidhi 😉

Please continue soon...


Thanx Sha,
glad u liked it.😃

Love will blossom, and pampering will also
be done along with a whole lot more.😉
thank you so much for the compliments
they encourage me a lot.😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
#22
Superb di...i think it is one of the best concepts so far...
absolutely loved it👏
great going...plzz update soon...pleaseee
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Posted: 12 years ago
#23

Originally posted by: ZedZee92

Superb di...i think it is one of the best concepts so far...

absolutely loved it👏
great going...plzz update soon...pleaseee



Thank you Zara.
I am happy that you liked it so much.😳

So I guess you don't want me to update SFL😕😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
#24

Originally posted by: Libra

Thank you Doc.
And I gave credit where credit is due. Agar aap idea nahin dete toh main likh bhi nahin paati.😳

I am glad that you liked it.
glad that I was able to do justice to your idea.😳

Anu, it would be wonderful if you show Ashutosh originally as a khadoos no-nonsense fellow, devoid of all pity to a fellow human being...and then turns into a caring husband...that transition should form the crux of the story. Even their bedroom interaction which is initially a pure physical process turns into a romantic one...at the end of Nidhi's preg track, he cares for her so much that he is not willing to let her go out of sight...fulfills all her pregnancy demands etc etc...
I will rest assured, now that you can do enough justice to the story line.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#25
story sounds interesting...pyaar to ho hi jayega...waiting to see the process of falling in love...go ahead anu...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#26

Originally posted by: Malvika_rajeev

Anu, it would be wonderful if you show Ashutosh originally as a khadoos no-nonsense fellow, devoid of all pity to a fellow human being...and then turns into a caring husband...that transition should form the crux of the story. Even their bedroom interaction which is initially a pure physical process turns into a romantic one...at the end of Nidhi's preg track, he cares for her so much that he is not willing to let her go out of sight...fulfills all her pregnancy demands etc etc...
I will rest assured, now that you can do enough justice to the story line.

I have started out that way Doc. I will try and continue, it the way u have suggested.
I hope I can do it. Although making him khadoos should not be too much of a problem
I seem to be getting the hang of it. Although I need to ask u a few questions, will pm soon regarding those.
thanx once again Doc.😃

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: niniborn2rule

story sounds interesting...pyaar to ho hi jayega...waiting to see the process of falling in love...go ahead anu...


Thanx Nini

dheere dheere pyar ko badhana hai😳

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Libra


Thanx Nini

dheere dheere pyar ko badhana hai😳

sk's dialogue...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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👏 fantastic start...i am sure you will do perfect justice to this lovely story...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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