Kashmakash -thread 2-Epilogue(pg 99) - Page 46

Originally posted by: hilarious44

OMG😃...it just cant get any better than this...👏👏👏.

It was emotional n it was beautiful...👏

Am touched...am really very touched...😳.

Could imagine each scene infront of my eyes...AWESOME...

Ashu's reaction to baby news was expected...playing squash to vent out his anger👏..nidhi praying for his safety👏...ashu asking for termination n then nidhi's reaction that she wants BOTH of them😳...OMG that was mindblowing...👏👏👏

The shower scene was hot n yet very very sweet😳😆...

Loved nidhi😛...she proved to be a very very strong pillar of support👏...the way she convinceed ashu for counselling was awesome👏...the way she dint express her desires n discomforts of first trinester just for ashu's sake was so sweet👏...she gave him all the time in the world to overcome his insecurities instead of demanding anything from him...👏...

Scene where nidhi gives a peck on ashu cheek b4 leaving the doctors cabin was adorable..😳

i love strong women and i guess it shows...😉

Ashu😳😳😳...He is a sweetheart...Awww i love him so so much☺️...he agreed for sessions👏...was willing to overcome his fears👏...not letting nidhi to accompany him for her own safety as she wud be hurt seeing him falling apart was really nice👏...it was great to see him trying to fight out the demons of his past...the mixture of emotions of fear,rage, guilt, concern n love were portrayed beautifully👍🏼...WOW...👏👏👏

this concept of child abuse..i don't know why but its very close to my heart...i wanted to write about this for a long time and finally found the characters in our AshNi..

DB-CV part was brilliant too👏...the way CV talked about ashu n told DB about ashu defending nidhi was superb..👏👏.

aahh...you caught that scene that everyone missed out on...again...🤗 that thought was given to be by Divya in the previous review..

Ashu holding nidhi's hand n having the first looking at their baby was so emotional...could imagine his expressions...👏

Last scene👏👏👏...all i want to say about it that It made me cry😭...it was out of this world...touched to core..👏.

you liked that one?? cool...am really glad... 😊

You are one heck of a brilliant writer suja👏...u know that??😆😆

All in all it was a MINDBLOWING update...👏👏.'

Beautifully written...😳

And thanx for keeping the pace slow😆...gave me enough time to absorb n enjoy each moment..😃.

A big big THANKU for making my day so beautiful...🤗

⭐️

you are most welcome and the pleasure is all mine!!

Originally posted by: fanktlk

Then comes a time when the chela thinks he knows more than the guru!!...

After the previous chapter... I wanted to msg you... I think most logical reaction would be Ashu accusing Nidhi of purposely forgetting the pill or willingly getting pregnant...

And I read the first 20 lines... I went.. that is exactly how I thought he'd react...

👏👏

Great minds think alike!!!😉😆

You excel in pain!! Every word you used to describe his conflict, his guilt and him accepting Nidhi's sacrifice in spite of knowing that she loved kids.. must have torn him. No wonder he felt like a heel...

he didn't feel like a heel..he felt like a "low life bas***d" Ms.Proper!! 😛😆

The why you portray Nidhi's unconditional love and blind faith in Ashu ...

thats the one constant factor in this FF..their love for each other..😊

Jr Dr Ashutosh soon to make the debut huh!! ...

For a second I actually visualized ... SK... with all the works...

Even if this is an FF you... maintained the pace perfectly this time.. (I feel) ... Showing Ashu take a step back when Nidhi started talking about her morning sickness...

Rome wasn't built in a Day After All!!

yup u got that right...true that its an FF and i speed up a few issues...but there are some things which can't be fast fwded...and this is one of them...

Beautiful song.. and am so happy to see DB back!!...

Nidhi: idli. I want to eat idli DB.

At this point I thought I was thinking of a very bright idea... I was gonna tell you to please let Ashu surprise her with idlis...

Oh you are such a mind reader... it is already in the chapter!! Maybe I should have thought of a couple of more romantic scenes... waiting for you to incorporate them!!

CV mentioning the "Log" and how his apprehensions were laid to rest (Okay I know only that many adjectives... I have already used awesome..., bang on, amazing, very nice, great to see, Loved to see , thumbs up.. Now pick a new one that you like and paste it here please) was __________. how about "real cool" 😉

This Ashu doesn't like baingan !! Doesn't Like baingan ...

Some body is over compensating for all the bharva baingan we saw on TV!! 😆😆

😛 yup...i even typed bindi first then remembered the nightmarish baingan and Mallika...😆

As I was reading.. I was wondering... If you were goning to deliver the baby in this chapter.. and then there is something called trying to train the trainer!! I will not jump the gun again!!...

Loved where you took a logic break!!

A beautiful chapter... Thank You!!

you are very welcome and glad you loved it all through...

Originally posted by: hilarious44

Why do u want to end this FF Turags??😭

Originally posted by: Ena292

Oh di! U have created d character nidhi amazingly! I just loved her...nd d last word of ashu to his unborn child was so touching! I don't know how i can praise u! Really awsome!! 👏