This Time Forever: Chap10 parts 1&2 updtd 11/14 pg144 - Page 74

Originally posted by: Libra

Wow Arushi

that was quick. Hai naa...am super fast😉😆

Yes, Nidhi was angry with him. But she loves him a lot, and mostly forgiveness does come with true love. Plus she is also very fair. So that had to kick in sometime. She had to realize her own mistakes also. Nahin toh story aage kaise badhti.😃

agree 😃

Yes, Well... It was needed here. I was blushing through the whole writing process also.😳

can imagine that😆😆

Yes Khushi does have impeccable timing ! Huh.😆

Lekin abhi toh Ashu ki khair nahin. bina soche samjhe promise jo kar diya.😉

oh yaa bechara...phir phas gaya😉😆but i doubt nidhi would mind complying to this demand that much??what say?😉😆

Thanks Arushi. for the awesome review and the lovely

compliments.

I am glad the chap appealed to you.

Anyway thank you for these comments, they

help me a lot and encourage me to write.

u are most welcome anuji!!!! am very glad if i wud have been able to contribute and do even 1% of that...🤗and sumwhere ur writing inspires me as well so i thank you for that😃

Next update HHGA

eagerly waiting!!!!wen would that be ??

Originally posted by: sss97

👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼

it was an absolute out of the world chapter really very wonderful and also the worth the looong wait . 😃

Hey. 😃

Thanks. and you are very welcome.

I am so glad you liked it. And I made the chap super long to make up for the delay

from my side.

Sorry really really sorry that it took me so long to reply. I was caught in some personal stuff.

And finally, mera Review.😃

to begin with the review

loved the way Angi had handled Nidhi in their conversation before the marriage night that is by scolding n also understanding her POV ( kuch khatti aur kuch meeti daant) n also making her raazi for wearing the shaadi ka jooda which she had designed for her five years ago.

I have always loved Anji and Nidhi's friendship. I wish that they would show more interaction between them in the show.

And I wanted to add a bit of nostalgia to this wedding scene, with the lehenga, and also the jewelry. also the different feelings and reactions of the two main characters.😃

Then i also loved khushi n nishi conversations a lot as they were simply awesome. They are like the angels of this story.

n this dialogue stands out

--Haan, par picture mein toh yeh bhi dikhate hain, ke Mamma aur Papa ek doosre ko Kissi aur Hugs bhi dete hain. Papa, kya aap aur Mamma bhi hugs aur Kissi karoge?

ohh these children are like devils for ashni.😉

Yes, they are precious. I wanted to make Khushi play a very important role here.

And I wanted to show the start of another friendship with these two little girls. Basically their mother's childhood revisited.

and i also liked the way rangu has become a support not only in nidhi's life but also in DB's life.

He is super cute.😃

I even liked the description of the mangalsutra n the engagement ring.

Thanks.😃

The way khushi mad ashni sleep in the same room intentionally or unintentionally was very nice.

She knows how to get what she wants. Plus she knows that both Ashutosh and Nidhi love her very much.😉

Later the holiday plan was great n the idea of a single bedroom stands out.

Ab kissi na kissi tarha, inn dono ko HM par toh bhejna tha...Hain na?😉

The beach scene was well set n the longing of nidhi's for ashutosh was very well written.

Thanks. I tried to show that after five years of forced separation, their longing for each other had also increased.😉

the hotel room scene was the ultimate it was actually like the finale. It was very well executed. And I also loved the conversation between ashu n nidhi where her answer for this dialogue was very apt and beautiful

--Nidhi tumne mujhe maaf...

Thanks. that was probably the hardest part of the whole chapter.😳

So i loved the update and also i am waiting for malika's entry n want to see the way ashu n nidhi tide over all the difficulties.

Haan Mallika ki entry toh honi hi hai. Usske bina meri kahani poori kaise hogi.

Lekin she will not make an entry till may the end of the next update, or the beginning of the one after that.

😃

so coming to the next update when is it coming eagerly waiting.

Writing it Ji. Will let you know.😃

👏

Originally posted by: saibanu

Anu di , its beautiful chapter ... everything is wonderfully explained 👏

Thanks Sai.😃

Good to see that Nidhi finally decided to give one more chance to Ashu , yes ...as you said mistakes happen and even ashu did hurt her ...But he himself suffered a lot for wrong choices he made but I am happy that now they are getting their share of happiness 😳

Yes, as least for now. But kitni der last karti hai, kisko pata.😉

Nidhi's turmoil is very well expressed , She want him but she dont want him also ..its quite natural to feel when the person she loved so much can hurt her so badly...its not easy to forgive and move on ...

Yes, poor thing is so afraid of getting hurt again. Forgiveness is very very difficult at times, and it takes a very generous person to be able to forgive as Nidhi has.😃

As Anjie said , yes Nidhi is very strong ...She carefully picked her life .. piece by piece and built is all over again and now Ashu is also back in her life ...Hope her happy days start from here and never end 😊

Happiness is Relative. And what are the ups without the downs.😉

Khushi and nishi and 2 little devils but they are very adorable ...Just loved their moments 😊

😆 yes, Both the girls are adorable angels.

And coming to their "Ahem Ahem" moments 😆😆...wel what can I say, it just took my breath away ..Gosh! that was splendid 😳

Glad you think so. I had trouble breathing when I was writing it too. I was so embarassed, everytime one of my kids or hubby came into the room, i frantically turned off my computer. Nahin toh meri

band baj jaati.

😆

But I am just scared what will happen whn mallu come back !! I know ashu will stand by nidhi's side but still ...we all know how Mallu is ...Will wait for your next chapter

Ab Mallu kya karego and Ahu kaise react karega, yeh toh aapko Chap mein padne ke liye wait karna padega.😆

This is one of my Favorite FF..I love all characters in this FF ...Will be eagerly waiting for next chapter Anu di ..Thank you so much for this update ...Enjoyed a lot 👏

Originally posted by: sukirti

Awesome chapter Anu...

Finally Nidhi gave one more chance to Ashu ... yes it was his mistake but he also suffered a lot.. This Khushi is such a cute kid and Nishi too, adorable and naughty... actually they are typical girls non stop chatter box ...

Loved the scene in the mandir when Ashu was waiting Nidhi and kids came and Ashu asked for kiss ... loved their consummation also ;) was nite expecting that so it was real surprise !!

Originally posted by: aru29

Originally posted by: deepa17

Hi Anuji

Hi Deepaji😃

I am late but very busy with work you year end.

I understand, please don't worry about it.😃

First - thank you made up for the time in the update for this FF.

You are welcome.

I tried to make up for the delay. Glad I was able too.😳

Liked the way Khushi makes Nidhi & Ashu to do as per her wishes. Getting them to spend almost all of their free time actually turned out to be a turning point for Nidhi.

Yes, being together all the time, will soften a person up.

And Khushi, knows exactly what buttons to push. She is a determined little girl.😆

Ranjie are great as ever and with DB with them - they cannot be beat in their efforts to get the couple together.

They all wants what's best for Nidhi. Ashutosh has just come int the picture. Uske saath

bond hone mein thoda waqt lagega. But Ashutosh will manage to bring all of them around.😉

Their plan worked - very nicely written love scenes

Thank you Ji. I am so glad you liked it.😳

And the wish - I don't think Nidhi would have a problem in complying with it but not before Ashu gets an earful of how he should not commit to Khushi's wishes blindly. Maybe the little sibling is already WIP.

Yes, earful to milega hi...and for the complying bit, Well lets see

yeh toh waqt hi bqtqyega.😉

Waiting for the next update in this FF but know that it is now last in the pile again.

👏 Thank you once again - I know that you & your son were sick.

Yes, it is at the bottom of the pile. But I will try and update a bit more frequently so hopefully it wont take so long.😳

You are most welcome.

And I appreciate your concern.

We are both fine now.😃

Originally posted by: Libra

Thank you so much the lovely lovely review, and your

wonderful comments. It really makes my effort while when I get

such super feed backs.

Thank you so much.