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Anu

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Posted: 12 years ago

#721

Originally posted by: aru29

Wow Arushi
that was quick.
Thank you so much.😳
AMAZING AMAZING AMAZING Chapter Anu ji!!!!! sooo sooo sooo worth the wait
loved it!!!

Thank you so much Aarushi, I am so glad that you liked the chapter😃

-the wedding was done brilliantly and the gradual progression in their relationship was beautifully depicted...

Thanks I did not feel like prolonging the wedding. It wasn't a big part of this story. So I made is short and sweet.😃

- u have done an amazing job in the depiction of nidhi's dilemma ,her feelings, doubts and fears along with the guilt
,regret and ashu's patience and respect for nidhi's feelings
-their mutual love and longing has been described very well along with their respective constraints⭐️⭐️⭐️

Yes, Nidhi was angry with him. But she loves him a lot, and mostly forgiveness does come with true love. Plus she is also very fair. So that had to kick in sometime. She had to realize her own mistakes also. Nahin toh story aage kaise badhti.😃
their love is very much palpable in every action
-your khushi is sooo much a loveable kid ...so adorable and special credits to her for making her parents not being able to resist each other any longer😳😳
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Yes, she is a doll. She will be the major catalyst in all the major events of this FF.
and then them becoming one , so passionate

Yes, Well... It was needed here. I was blushing through the whole writing process also.😳

-and here comes our wonder kids new demand of a baby sis/bro and on wat timing😉😆
- anji expecting??WOW!!😳😃

Yes Khushi does have impeccable timing ! Huh.😆
Lekin abhi toh Ashu ki khair nahin. bina soche samjhe promise jo kar diya.😉
all in all it was a great chapter
Thank you for this chapter

you are welcome.

Thanks Arushi. for the awesome review and the lovely

compliments.

I am glad the chap appealed to you.

Anyway thank you for these comments, they

help me a lot and encourage me to write.

Next update HHGA

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Anu

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Posted: 12 years ago

#722

Originally posted by: wizardofoz
Continue please. I love this one and the season for love the most out of all the FFs.

Thanks. I am glad you liked it.😃

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Anu

@Libra

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Posted: 12 years ago

#723

Originally posted by: swati62
It was so worth the wait. Loved it. Waiting anxiously for the next chapter.

Hi Swati

Thanks. I am glad you like it.

Next HHGA

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Anu

@Libra

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Posted: 12 years ago

#724

Originally posted by: oaz30
Haaaila what to say... The bestest of all your updates...a visual treat reading it could b equated to watching it. Loved the intensity yet looking forward to see how things unfold... I bet Mallu will come soon. Proper review to follow

Shari

Thanks Shari.

I am glad you liked it.

And yes Mallu ke entry will also be there. Maybe by the end of the next chap.

I dont know yet. Lets see.😃

Will be waiting for your detailed review.

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Anu

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Posted: 12 years ago

#725

Originally posted by: harsha6
👏
lolz..Nishi nd Khushi r very mch clever...heehehehe...
Khushi wants so so mchh...phle shaadi,then same bed for three of dem,then a trip to goa nd NOW a Bro/sis.. 😃
reaaly a smrt grliee..ahaa??
hehe..
it was an mnd boggling chap..eagerly waitng for d nxt one..
ciaoo!!

Hi Harsha

I am glad you liked the chapter.

Thank you so much for for comments, I really appreciate them.

Next update is HHGA

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Binat

@Binat

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Posted: 12 years ago

#726

What an amazing chapter. Totally worth the wait...pls don't take that to mean we want you to take a long break between chapters😉

Really enjoyed the wedding and the lovely relationship between Ashu and Khushi. She is truly adorable. Could give her a few hugs and kissi myself😊

Glad Nidhi is trying to let go the last, but I really feel that Ashu needs to prove himself to her. Guess Malik'a will make an entrance soon😭 hope he proves himself really well and she regains the trust she used to have in him.

I know you have your hands full, but pls next update soon please😳

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Anu

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Posted: 12 years ago

#727

Originally posted by: Binat

What an amazing chapter. Totally worth the wait...pls don't take that to mean we want you to take a long break between chapters😉

Really enjoyed the wedding and the lovely relationship between Ashu and Khushi. She is truly adorable. Could give her a few hugs and kissi myself😊

Glad Nidhi is trying to let go the last, but I really feel that Ashu needs to prove himself to her. Guess Malik'a will make an entrance soon😭 hope he proves himself really well and she regains the trust she used to have in him.

I know you have your hands full, but pls next update soon please😳

Hi Bina

Thanks for such a positive review.

I really appreciate it. It means a lot when everyone writes such nice comments.

I gives me so much encouragement, and motivates me to keep

going. I am so glad that you liked the chap.

And in reply to your comments. Yes Nidhi has proven her love and her

generosity of spirit. and now it is Ashutosh's turn to prove that her trust was not misplaced.

Mallu will come. soon. Bu he will prove it in other ways also, not just in regards to Mallika.😆

Thans so mush Bina. and I will post next FF in a few days. Will start writing tomorrow.

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ssss97

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Posted: 12 years ago

#728

👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼

it was an absolute out of the world chapter really very wonderful and also the worth the looong wait . 😃

to begin with the review

loved the way Angi had handled Nidhi in their conversation before the marriage night that is by scolding n also understanding her POV ( kuch khatti aur kuch meeti daant) n also making her raazi for wearing the shaadi ka jooda which she had designed for her five years ago.

Then i also loved khushi n nishi conversations a lot as they were simply awesome. They are like the angels of this story.

n this dialogue stands out

--Haan, par picture mein toh yeh bhi dikhate hain, ke Mamma aur Papa ek doosre ko Kissi aur Hugs bhi dete hain. Papa, kya aap aur Mamma bhi hugs aur Kissi karoge?

ohh these children are like devils for ashni.😉

and i also liked the way rangu has become a support not only in nidhi's life but also in DB's life.

I even liked the description of the mangalsutra n the engagement ring.

The way khushi mad ashni sleep in the same room intentionally or unintentionally was very nice.

Later the holiday plan was great n the idea of a single bedroom stands out.

The beach scene was well set n the longing of nidhi's for ashutosh was very well written.

the hotel room scene was the ultimate it was actually like the finale. It was very well executed. And I also loved the conversation between ashu n nidhi where her answer for this dialogue was very apt and beautiful

--Nidhi tumne mujhe maaf...

So i loved the update and also i am waiting for malika's entry n want to see the way ashu n nidhi tide over all the difficulties.

so coming to the next update when is it coming eagerly waiting.

👏

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saibanu

@saibanu

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#729

Anu di , its beautiful chapter ... everything is wonderfully explained 👏

Good to see that Nidhi finally decided to give one more chance to Ashu , yes ...as you said mistakes happen and even ashu did hurt her ...But he himself suffered a lot for wrong choices he made but I am happy that now they are getting their share of happiness 😳

Nidhi's turmoil is very well expressed , She want him but she dont want him also ..its quite natural to feel when the person she loved so much can hurt her so badly...its not easy to forgive and move on ...

As Anjie said , yes Nidhi is very strong ...She carefully picked her life .. piece by piece and built is all over again and now Ashu is also back in her life ...Hope her happy days start from here and never end 😊

Khushi and nishi and 2 little devils but they are very adorable ...Just loved their moments 😊

And coming to their "Ahem Ahem" moments 😆😆...wel what can I say, it just took my breath away ..Gosh! that was splendid 😳

But I am just scared what will happen whn mallu come back !! I know ashu will stand by nidhi's side but still ...we all know how Mallu is ...Will wait for your next chapter

This is one of my Favorite FF..I love all characters in this FF ...Will be eagerly waiting for next chapter Anu di ..Thank you so much for this update ...Enjoyed a lot 👏

Edited by saibanu - 12 years ago

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suku_07

@suku_07

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Posted: 12 years ago

#730

Awesome chapter Anu...

Finally Nidhi gave one more chance to Ashu ... yes it was his mistake but he also suffered a lot.. This Khushi is such a cute kid and Nishi too, adorable and naughty... actually they are typical girls non stop chatter box ...

Loved the scene in the mandir when Ashu was waiting Nidhi and kids came and Ashu asked for kiss ... loved their consummation also ;) was nite expecting that so it was real surprise !!

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