This Time Forever: Chap10 parts 1&2 updtd 11/14 pg144 - Page 51

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Posted: 12 years ago
Diwali khatam . when is the next chap?waiting
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: vidyasabde

Diwali khatam . when is the next chap?waiting

When I made similar comment yesterday, thought she will hit me with bricks...now you are also there...i can roam without fear 😈
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Posted: 12 years ago
Thank you for that beautiful piece really I have run out of adjectives to describe your writing maybe I should borrow Capt Haddocks words and say billions of blistering barncles what an update, but get so lost on the chapter that I want to keep on reading luv Nids and her concern and loved the ashu took charge please can we have the next update don't murder us for being so greedy but take ot as a compliment to your writing that we can't wait for the next chapter
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Anjani9

When I made similar comment yesterday, thought she will hit me with bricks...now you are also there...i can roam without fear 😈

no she wont hit us. it's a compliment to her writing skill ,her ff...we love it. its a mock anger.

hai na Anu !!😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: vidyasabde

no she wont hit us. it's a compliment to her writing skill ,her ff...we love it. its a mock anger.

hai na Anu !!😊

When are you giving the update?Day Dreaming
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: turags

Thank God Khushi is safe...love her nakhraas while taking the medicine..reminded me of my younger one...


Nidhi is a great mom buddy...really great going there...if someone reads just chap 5 they probably wouldn't guess that Nidhi is not the biological mom...her reactions soon after the accident were bang on..

yaar Ashu loves these 2, Nidhi loves AShu like crazy...even DB has agreed...ok not agreed exactly but she has bowed down to the inevitable...ab zyaada der mat laga yaar...we want band baaja baraat and suhaag raat...


HI Turags
Thanks for the comments, sorry about the late reply,
Was really busy due to diwali. Still busy. Wont be able to be really active till Monday
I have lots going on.
Anyway, I am glad u like Khushi, she is a doll. And Nidhi has had her since she was about a month old, so I think the bond I between the two in an incredibly strong one.
Phir maa toh maa hoti hai, does not matter that Nidhi an adopted one, the maternal feelings
Are all there.

Aur yaar shaadi tak toh theek hai, Lekin suhaag raat ke liye abhi thoda waqt lagega.😆
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: niniborn2rule

So anu it seems ur idea f khushi being hit by a vehicle and nihi running after her cvs ko pasand aaya hai...😛

But Nini she fell into a ditch, she didn't get hit y a car😕
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: ssktlk

very nice Anu, sorry for the late comment . DB's strong and clear stance is too good. She places Nidhi's well being above everything else. This little joy(Khushi) will now pull ashni's strings bringing them closer. What power our kids have😛


Hi Sanya
I am so glad u like Dadi Bua's character.
To me no matter what she does or says, she has always wanted Nidhi happiness
Above everything. I just love her. And abhi she will have an even more of
A positive and no nonsense roll.
U are absolutely right, our kids have tremendous power, and sometimes the bad part is,
That they know very what, how to use it.😆
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: hilarious44

Extremly sorry for the delay anu..😔..

U cant imagine how desperate i was to read the update once posted and not getting any time to do so made me really irritable😡...finally i dont know how i got some time to enjoy it today😃...feel so good n relieved now..😆😆.
Hi Fatimah
Plz dont worry about late replies. I am pretty late with my reply too.😳
Sorry I was very busy.😳
Hats off to you sweety for giving us amazing updates one after the other👏👏...Am truely impressed
😳...U r awesome😃...simply awesome....

😳Thanks Fatimah, for these lovely lovely compliments.😃
It means a lot that my writing appeals that much to you.

Will begin by thanking a very imporatnt person😃...thanku Driver ji for ur quick reflexes👏👏...aap nay hamari khushi ko bacha liya....

Khushi had to be saved. Nahin toh meri story kaise aage badti.😆
But yes driver ji ka Thans toh banta hai, she did not get too badly hurt due to his quick thinking.👏

Nidhi's reaction to her daughters accident😭...OMG...so true n so painful😭...Mothers are awesome..😭.

Yes moms are always awesome. There no greater love than maternal love


Nidhi calling ashu as the first thing😳...This one gesture said it all👏👏👏...I loved loved loved that part.👏👏..
Ashu trying to calm down nidhi was so so sweet...😳
The whole scene of their arrival in hopsital was so very touching...very well written anu..👏👏.

She loves him, who else would she think of?
He loves her, he knew that not only does he have to stay calm for her sake, but to keep calm himself.
Hospital scene was one of my favorite. I just didn't want to make it more emotional than that.😳


Anji-nidhi convo again a very nice part👏👏...anji is a true friend😃...really wants nidhi to be happy in her life...loved the convo👏...and it also served its purpose of distracting nidhi so that she gains her calm.👏


Anji and Nidhi are not only friends,they are sisters. Anji wants her to be happy. Her husband loves her too. In my FF Nidhi has an amazing support system.😃


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Nidhi jumped up and ran to Ashutosh, and caught his collar with both fists and cluchted tightly, Trembling all over with fear...could see this happening infront of my eyes👏...great part...
What followed was really so sweet😳...how ashu tried to pacify nidhi with such lovely words n gestures was just too good...👏

That scene was a last minute addition. I remember seeing an American movie, that had that scene.😳

Nidhi sending anji n ranga home to take care of their baby...so understanding n so cute.👏.

Both friends love each other and the children. And besides.that was the right thing to do. Nidhi understands that like she loves Khushi, Anji loves Nishi. Both are very caring moms.
Ashutosh, can you hold me please, just for a few minutes...Indeed one of the best parts anu👏...so emotional n so sweet..👏.


She was relieved and exhausted, and needed him. So for a few minutes she forgot about
Everything except finding comfort in his arms.

U have explained ashu's reaction at seeing khushi in such a state in a wonderful way anu...he must have felt ground slipping under his feet😭😭...still he maintained his composure n took hold of the situation👏...AWESOME..👍🏼

Thanks. Ab if he is going to be her father, he has to start and feeling like it too. Na?
Plus he is the man, and as such has to be the pillar of strength and support for his family

He would also make sure that THIS Time it would be FOREVER...Awww..😳😳😳.

Yep. The title. I have to justify it. Na.
Another favourite part...ashu's words when nidhi tried to thank him.👏👏..
Nidhi, I don't know why you keep having this need to insult me over and over again. You better be thankful to Khushi, because of her and because I know that you are upset right now, I am not loosing my temper. Now just Shut Up. I am not going anywhere. I will be staying right here with you in this room till she gets better, I don't care how long it takes...TOO GOOD..👏👏..

Yes, he does not need her thanks. He wants her love. Besides he already thinks of Khushi as his anyways.
MAMA PAPA part😆😳...OMG...Khushi sweetheart i love u sooo much🤗...dont know what else to say about this...it was adorable..😳😆.

I just could not resist adding that in.
I think Nidhi needs all the push she can get from everywhere, including me.
We have to get AshNi together, nahin toh FF kaise complete hoga.
Ashni must be looking wonderful while sleeping on that sofa...😳😳

I imagine they were looking very sweet.
Ashu-khushi small convo about medicine...sho sho shweet😆😆...then the juics n giggling...Awww..😆😆😳..
So the famous Dr.Ashutosh couldnot succeed in giving medicine to a baby😉...very sad..😆..
Nidhi...u rock..👏👏.
Moms know all the tricks. I had to do that for my elder daughter. She is 20 now and I still have a difficult time getting her to take her medicines. She is still adorable. 😳


Dadi buas entry was a surprise...i expected to hear her screeches but it was a pleasant surprise😃...Loved her love for khushi.😳..
Dadi Bua ke bina , I cannot i Aline KTLK. For me she is one off the best parts of the show. I love her,


Khushi puri dramay baz hai😆...loved her acting infront of dadi bua...😆

Dadi Bua loves, and pampers her a lot. All kids are hams, given the right opportunity.
Last but not the least...DB n Ashu convo👏👏...very very very well written👏...everything discussed n made loud n clear...loved the straightforward attitude👏...she is once again taking the risk of trusting ashu just for her daughters happiness...Each n every line was very pure n very emotional...Awesome part..👏👏.

Yes Dadi Bua and Ashutosh, I am afraid that things are going to get worse before they get better between these two. Dadi Bua cannot forget how much Nidhi has had to suffer because of him.
And the ending...our writers favourite habit of leaving us at a cliffhanger.😉😆..
How to wait for the next part haan????😆😉
Jokes apart...Am in complete awe of ur writing sweety...❤️.
Each update n each FF is very very close to my heart...but this one is my FAVOURITE...😳😳😳.
Thanku so so so much for giving us such beautiful moments n making our days lovely..😃.
Cant wait for it to continue...


You are welcome. Thanks for the lovely words of praise. They encourage me to try and write even better. Thanks Fatimah.
Wishing u n ur family a very very HAPPY DIWALI...🥳.
U ROCK..👏👏👏
..

Thank you for the diwali wishes.
Lots of love Anu.

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: hilarious44

And did i read it correct...NEW FF COMING????


I was thinking about it, had even begun to write, but seeing
Khushi's saga cont. on and maybe becoming permanent, I don't even feel like watching anymore, let alone writing anything new, or even continuing the old Ffs.😕

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