FF - Pati, Patni Aur Woh!- chapter 17 on page 150 - Page 41

Ji, I have a doubt...

Go ahead ... eagerly waiting for ur update

Originally posted by: Libra

Sujatha

U r a superb writer. So have u have done justice to the whole scenario,

without coming across as crass or obscene. All the chapters are beautiful, and tastefully written.

Don't worry about it. I for one am loving this FF. it has all the right ingredients,

for an adult story. Don't think, or hesitate. The more u do that, the ore doubts u will have.

Plz just write from the heart.

Look forward to the update😃

Thanks Anu...I am just going to write it the way I like...hope you guys like it too 😳

Originally posted by: Sujatha.rao

Folks, tell me, would you be offended by reference to body parts..I am seriously worried here...I don't know what to write and what not to write...so please help me out here!

Originally posted by: Anjani9

Ji, I have a doubt...

In KTLK, Mallika was Ashu's junior, not married to him, does not have any backing and could do lot to torture to Ashni.

Here Mallika is equal to Ashu in profession, lot of financial and social status backing and strong family who has hold in KGH also...

Are you planning to create trouble in this size?

Anjani...if I answer this question, I will give away the story...so thoda patience please 😳

Originally posted by: Vidishaa

Go ahead...you are doing fine. Don't worry about offending prudes😊

Vidhishaa...till now, I have not made any reference to body parts...named them you know...but to keep writing euphemisms is getting tiring...that is why I asked 😳

Originally posted by: Sujatha.rao

Vidhishaa...till now, I have not made any reference to body parts...named them you know...but to keep writing euphemisms is getting tiring...that is why I asked 😳

Originally posted by: Vidishaa

you can make the reference. It won't be crass. One can't keep using euphemisms...too difficult and too indirect.

I know...I felt like an idiot writing like that...what the heck...when we can have a film like Vicky Donor where everyone is always talking of sperms which children and parents watch together, what is the big deal...besides don't they learn the names of body parts by class VII or VIII latest 😳

Originally posted by: Sujatha.rao

Anjani...if I answer this question, I will give away the story...so thoda patience please 😳

Originally posted by: Anjani9

😛 Will there be lot of trouble or bearable?

They will overcome it...don't worry!