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Posted: 12 years ago
#11

Originally posted by: Malvika_rajeev

NIce post Sai...awaiting for more now.


Thank you , I will update next part soon 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
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PART 2:-
Ashuthosh was enjoying looking at nidhi anxious face; he chuckled to himself remembering their conversation…No one ever spoke to him as nidhi did few minutes back, he thought "that girl have some nerve seriously!" once they reached party hall, nidhi disappeared in crowd and before ashu could stop she was gone ….Anjie who was searching for nidhi whole evening and sighed in happiness after seeing nidhi running towards her..Before anjie could ask what's wrong? Nidhi blurted ..." oh god anjie ! I did such a blunder today "

Anjie: what?? What you did now …and where were you, you know I was searching for you !

Nidhi: yaar , I was sitting In open terrace and she explained everything to anjie .

Anjie banged her head in frustration and shout back "if I get sacked because of the blunder you just did , nidhi ..I am soo gonna kill you "

Nidhi: haddh hai ..Why he will sack you ! Galti maine kiya hai ..agar tere saath kuch ulta seedha kiya tho …tho,,tho main

Anjie : tho main kyaa ?? You cannot do anything.You just leave it , let me handle this now …now come one we should be gong ..It's late and tomorrow I have to go early to meet Mr ashuthosh ..tune jo kaand kiya hai uske liye maafi jo mangni hai

Nidhi: yaaar sorry ..

Anjie: nidhi, just leave it, I will handle. Let's go from here and soon both of them left.

Next day, anjie came to his cabin and apologized for nidhi's behavior..Ashu just shrugged it off and asked her to forget about it , anjie smiled and gave him Sorry card given by nidhi ..Ashu looked pink colored card , inside nidhi has written "Sorry" in black pencil and sticked sad smily next to it ..Ashu just smiled and kept the card in his drawer.

Whole week passed and nothing much happened. Ashuthosh got busy with new project which needed his attention that barely he got time to himself. One evening ashu was on his way to club, it was raining heavily and he was driving alone.at one point he lost balance and his car rushed towards footpath , he tried to control and ended up splashing mud water on people who were walking on foot path ..Before he know what is happening someone started banging window and asked him to come out.ashu rolled down his window to find nidhi standing in front of him covered in mud from head to toe ..Drenching in rain.

Nidhi just started at him with irritation.Ashu got out and apologized to nidhi , seems like everyone escaped and nidhi alone got full splashing of mudd! nidhi was furious , she was super irritated and more importantly she was on her way to some important work..But now she is stuck all because of this and now she has to go back and change to attend her important work..Nidhi looked at him with so much hatred that for a second ashu thought nidhi will slap him

Finally nidhi broke the silence and spat "you!! Do you know, you spoiled my whole dress and now how you expect me to go like this "

Ashu : I am sorry nidhi , here let me help you ..common get inside my car..I will drop you , where you want to go ?

Nidhi..No thanks !i will manage and she tripped just then ashu catched her from falling

Ashu : oh common Nidhi , I said am sorry !! other day you only said mistakes happens ..Now give me chance to fix this ..please get inside

Nidhi huffed and then got inside. For a while ashu did not dared look at her direction, he know she is angry, irritated, after some time ashu picked up his cell and asked nidhi "Nidhi..what is your size "

Nidhi looked at him from head to toe .." what ? What are you talking about?

Ashu sensed what mistake he did and he immediately spoke to correct "I mean nidhi , we have to buy some fresh clothes for you ..you are all wet , so I just ask my secretary to get you some clothes ..mean time you can freshen up at my place , we are just around the corner ..well if you are fine with this plan"

Nidhi nodded her head in approval as her place is far and getting back their looked too tiresome in this rain .

Ashu opened the door for nidhi and welcomed her to his place..nidhi mouth fell open looking at his magnificent house ..she was still looking around when ashu came and gave her some clothes which neha sent .."hope this fit you !! And you can use bathroom upstairs ..Well if you need anything just call me "

Nidhi left to change and soon joined him in dining table where he served tea. She felt really well after drinking some tea ..Ashuthosh was looking at her with amused expression when nidhi spoke "So you still alive huh ? I thought you must be dead by now " ashu just stared at her with shock as nidhi continued " well you seem to be dangerously rich ..You alone live in this big house?"

Ashu tried to change the subject as he sensed where it is leading and right now he is not in a mood to explain his complicated family life.Nidhi stared at ashu for a second sensing his silence she kept quite and did not questioned more .She sensed there is something more to his silence as his eyes saddned , his jaws dropped ..he looked like lost kid , innocent and broken ..she felt sudden gush of emotion looking into his sad eyes and there she sat with him sipping tea enveloping in silence and nothing more .looking outside vast sky which seems to be showering whatever it possess ..

let me know if its worth continuing , I am bit apprehensive since this is my first attempt writing FF ..Please do comment 😊

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Posted: 12 years ago
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It is nice..don't get apprehensive
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Its really nice. Great work actually!! You should definitely continue and not keep us waiting long for the next update either! 😛

Looking forward to the next part!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Please continue. Bahut accha situation hai. You have handled it well,
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Posted: 12 years ago
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it was superb update sai

very critical situation you have created ,now they both are in silence mess

pls do continue soon now curiosity increase that what will be the next




sonali
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Posted: 12 years ago
#17

Part 3 :

After a while nidhi broke the silence and spoke "I think I should go now ...it's already late "Ashu nodded his head and accompanied her outside. Ashu took his car keys but nidhi asked him not to take any more trouble that she will take taxi to go home…But ashu refused to listen and asked her to get inside the car, finally nidhi got no other option but to agree …Ashu opened his car door with a smile and nidhi sat inside.

Sitting in his car nidhi looked outside, there is this awkward silence between them sensing this Ashu coughed to get nidhi's attention ..." well Nidhi , do you mind telling your address ?"

Nidhi "ohm, sorry please take a right from next signal and go straight "

Ashu nodded his head and asked "so, can I know any other way to commit suicide?"

Nidhi looked at ashu "what? ohh I was just helping you out" no need to tease me on that

Ashu : ohh no no . I was not teasing you .in fact you gave me full proof idea.It could be helpful

Nidhi smiled looking at him "better you don't use that, else ..."

Ashu else what?

Nidhi pouted at that

Nidhi : ohh common , everyone have problems in life , everyone are just a second away from either to kill themselves or to kill someone else but you should face it not to run away.

Ashu: so what problem do you have?

Nidhi: you know something or the other …well I am hungry can we stop here anywhere to eat something

Ashu: Why didn't you tell me this before? I could have prepared good sandwich for you

Nidhi: so you are chef also..Nice to know that but I was waiting for you to offer me but alaas you never asked..

Ashuthosh chuckled at her statement " so what you want to have nidhi ? chinese , italian , Indian ?"

Nidhi: I want to eat something really spicy , tangy wait , wait here ..Let's eat gol gappe .

Ashu: wat ? no no nidhi ..its dirty out there , can't you see

Nidhi :ohh common ashuthosh and she dragged him to nearby chat stall

Nidhi and ashuthosh waited as chat vendor mashed potatoes, put everything ready to serve them..

Ashuthosh looked at surrounding and then towards nidhi with uneasy expression

Ashu: Nidhi you sure this is hygienic, we can go to some other place

Nidhi: You are so alien.Nothing will happen by eating gol gappe .

Ashu : so how does it taste ?

Nidhi looked at him with shocked expression and uttered: "What? You never ate gol gappe !! What are you? Are you from mars? And shook her head

Ashu : no , I don't like to eat street food , its dirty and un hygienic

Nidhi: well more than hygiene there is something called taste, I bet you, you can never find such tasty gol gappe in any of your fancy hotels and it is not so unhygienic as you think..Ok now, you are eating with me, no more arguments "with that nidhi put one gol gappe into ashu's mouth before he could react.

Nidhi looked his facial expression, he was trying to chew and swallow bit by bit and then he gulped it down looking at nidhi " hmmm..that is something tasty food , nidhi!! " nidhi cried in joy "see I told you" and turned towards chat vendor "bhaiyya ek aur plate inke liye "Ashuthosh suddenly felt happy looking at her joyous face and he gave broad smile to nidhi as she took another gol gappe to put into his mouth …

Please do comment 😊

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Posted: 12 years ago
#18

Originally posted by: karajekar


it was superb update sai

very critical situation you have created ,now they both are in silence mess

pls do continue soon now curiosity increase that what will be the next




sonali


Thank you dear , i just updated part 3😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Thank you ..
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Malvika_rajeev

Please continue. Bahut accha situation hai. You have handled it well,


Thank you so much means a lot 😃

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