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Aazeen02

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Posted: 13 years ago

#241

Haaye!!! The last part!!! But my dear u very well tied up all the threads... Sach poocho toh aaj aisa lag raha hai jaise koi film dekh rahi hu... Ek khuli kitaab thi usme... Har ek panne mein kuch likha tha... Camera unn panno par focus hua... Kitaab ke cover par bana ek photograph jisme sharad kelkar aur kritika kamra ki tasweer thi... Dono ek dooje ke baaho mein baahe daale... Uske neeche likha tha... 'Lets make our own KTLK... By Turags and Libra...' Pehla panna padha toh pati-patni kisi dusri aurat se pareshan apne aap ke maamle suljha rahe thhey... Main Panney palat ti gayi kahani badhti gayi... Har panney k baad uss kitaab ki kahani aur ussko likhne walon k chaahne waalon k pyar bhare sandesh thhey... Koi awesome keh raha tha, koi stupendous keh raha tha... Koi 'plz continue' k naare laga raha tha, koi ye pooch raha tha k 'next update kab karoge?', koi apne chote-bade reviews de raha tha, aur kisi k badle unke emoticons unke dil ki baat ko bayaan kar rahe thhey... Main muskurati gayi... Kahani padhti gayi... Aksar weekends par ya jis bhi din ka waada ho, kareeb dopahar k 2 baje login karti India Forums mein toh mera Private Messages ka inbox buzz karne lagta... Khol k dekhti hu toh dekha Turags h... Subject- Our Own KTLK updated... Mere chehre par fir se muskaan aaa jati... Main jaldi se link kholti, aur ghar k sabse sunsaan koney mein baith jati... Padhti jaati-padhti jaati... Pata hi nahi chalta kab 40 min,kabhi 1 ghanta, kabhi aur bhi zyada waqt ho jaata... Jab padhna khatam hota... Main ek lambi saans bharti aur likhna shuru karti taareef k silsile... June k ek din padhna shuru ki iss kahani ki jaise aadat padd gayi... Aisa lagta, k jaane kab aayega update, kab humara weekend safal hoga... Phir ek shaam maine IF mein phir se login kiya... Mera pm fir se buzz karne laga... Phir se turags thi... Link jaldi se kholi, toh ek announcement tha... Jo unhone apne aur anu di k behalf par as politely as she could, apni baat rakhi... K its time to wrap up... Main baukhla gayi... Bohot uttejit ho uthi... Kitna saara gussa uss announcement karne wali par ugal daala... Phir bhi bechari mujhe manati rahi... Mere gusse k thande hone ka intezaar karti rahi... Aur jab finally main kuch thandi hui, tab bhi muskura k wo mujhe apnaane lagi...2 aur panne baaki they uss kitaab k... Dono lekhikaaon ne jaan phoonk daali unn dono panno mein... Aisa lag hi nahi raha tha jaise hum kisi kahaani ko padh rahe h.. Aisa laga jaise hum khud wahi kahi khade h ashutosh aur nidhi k saath, unki family ka hissa ban kar...
Aaj main uss aakhri panne ko bhi padh k palat rahi hu... Iss band kitaab ko ghaur se dekh rahi hu... Isme sirf kahani nahi hai... Balki un anek logon k jazbaat h jo iss kahani k sath jude hue hain... Aaj taqdeer ko shukriya kehne ko jee chah raha hai 3 oct 2011 ka... Kis din shuru hua wo kaarwaan kisne mila daala jaane kitne logon se online, jinhe aaj tak kabhi dekha tak nahi h... Phir bhi unke hone ka ehsaas hota h dil ko... Shukriya un sabhi logon ka jinhone humein majboor kiya iss show se judne ko, jiski badaulat aaj hum apne IF k kuch behtareen writers k anmol writings ka lutf utha paaye...
Thank you all guys who came along on this ff n made it a milestone in the history of ff for ktlk... Both u writers rocked it... I know... This wasnt a review... But this contains all...

**** Sujatha di... Plz aaj reading between the lines ka use kar lijiyega... Jitni shiddat se aaj tak aap dono k updates padhe h... Utni hi shiddat se apni bhaawnaon ko likhne ki koshish ki h...****

abke bichde toh shayad kahyaalon mei mile,
jaise sookhe hue phool kitaabon mein mile...

Heheha... Yuhi shayari kar di... Janab ver.2 mein milenge... N aagey k ff/os/ss mein bhi INSHALLAH!!!

(sorry guys... I guess kuch zyada hi bore kar diya...) thoda filmy bhi lag raha hoga...I know...

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Suvika.

@Suvika.

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Posted: 13 years ago

#242

Originally posted by: vidyasabde
lovely story. all angles covered.👍🏼

thank you vidya...

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Suvika.

@Suvika.

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Posted: 13 years ago

#243

Originally posted by: Aazeen02
Haaye!!! The last part!!! But my dear u very well tied up all the threads... Sach poocho toh aaj aisa lag raha hai jaise koi film dekh rahi hu... Ek khuli kitaab thi usme... Har ek panne mein kuch likha tha... Camera unn panno par focus hua... Kitaab ke cover par bana ek photograph jisme sharad kelkar aur kritika kamra ki tasweer thi... Dono ek dooje ke baaho mein baahe daale... Uske neeche likha tha... 'Lets make our own KTLK... By Turags and Libra...' Pehla panna padha toh pati-patni kisi dusri aurat se pareshan apne aap ke maamle suljha rahe thhey... Main Panney palat ti gayi kahani badhti gayi... Har panney k baad uss kitaab ki kahani aur ussko likhne walon k chaahne waalon k pyar bhare sandesh thhey... Koi awesome keh raha tha, koi stupendous keh raha tha... Koi 'plz continue' k naare laga raha tha, koi ye pooch raha tha k 'next update kab karoge?', koi apne chote-bade reviews de raha tha, aur kisi k badle unke emoticons unke dil ki baat ko bayaan kar rahe thhey... Main muskurati gayi... Kahani padhti gayi... Aksar weekends par ya jis bhi din ka waada ho, kareeb dopahar k 2 baje login karti India Forums mein toh mera Private Messages ka inbox buzz karne lagta... Khol k dekhti hu toh dekha Turags h... Subject- Our Own KTLK updated... Mere chehre par fir se muskaan aaa jati... Main jaldi se link kholti, aur ghar k sabse sunsaan koney mein baith jati... Padhti jaati-padhti jaati... Pata hi nahi chalta kab 40 min,kabhi 1 ghanta, kabhi aur bhi zyada waqt ho jaata... Jab padhna khatam hota... Main ek lambi saans bharti aur likhna shuru karti taareef k silsile... June k ek din padhna shuru ki iss kahani ki jaise aadat padd gayi... Aisa lagta, k jaane kab aayega update, kab humara weekend safal hoga... Phir ek shaam maine IF mein phir se login kiya... Mera pm fir se buzz karne laga... Phir se turags thi... Link jaldi se kholi, toh ek announcement tha... Jo unhone apne aur anu di k behalf par as politely as she could, apni baat rakhi... K its time to wrap up... Main baukhla gayi... Bohot uttejit ho uthi... Kitna saara gussa uss announcement karne wali par ugal daala... Phir bhi bechari mujhe manati rahi... Mere gusse k thande hone ka intezaar karti rahi... Aur jab finally main kuch thandi hui, tab bhi muskura k wo mujhe apnaane lagi...2 aur panne baaki they uss kitaab k... Dono lekhikaaon ne jaan phoonk daali unn dono panno mein... Aisa lag hi nahi raha tha jaise hum kisi kahaani ko padh rahe h.. Aisa laga jaise hum khud wahi kahi khade h ashutosh aur nidhi k saath, unki family ka hissa ban kar...
Aaj main uss aakhri panne ko bhi padh k palat rahi hu... Iss band kitaab ko ghaur se dekh rahi hu... Isme sirf kahani nahi hai... Balki un anek logon k jazbaat h jo iss kahani k sath jude hue hain... Aaj taqdeer ko shukriya kehne ko jee chah raha hai 3 oct 2011 ka... Kis din shuru hua wo kaarwaan kisne mila daala jaane kitne logon se online, jinhe aaj tak kabhi dekha tak nahi h... Phir bhi unke hone ka ehsaas hota h dil ko... Shukriya un sabhi logon ka jinhone humein majboor kiya iss show se judne ko, jiski badaulat aaj hum apne IF k kuch behtareen writers k anmol writings ka lutf utha paaye...
Thank you all guys who came along on this ff n made it a milestone in the history of ff for ktlk... Both u writers rocked it... I know... This wasnt a review... But this contains all...

**** Sujatha di... Plz aaj reading between the lines ka use kar lijiyega... Jitni shiddat se aaj tak aap dono k updates padhe h... Utni hi shiddat se apni bhaawnaon ko likhne ki koshish ki h...****

abke bichde toh shayad kahyaalon mei mile,
jaise sookhe hue phool kitaabon mein mile...

Heheha... Yuhi shayari kar di... Janab ver.2 mein milenge... N aagey k ff/os/ss mein bhi INSHALLAH!!!

(sorry guys... I guess kuch zyada hi bore kar diya...) thoda filmy bhi lag raha hoga...I know...

wow Aazeen, thank you so much and i am speechless. you still have the version 2 and my new FF from the next week. so we will be meeting there too. and all said and done Anu and me also got quite attached to this ff so writing the last chap is tough for us too.

Edited by turags - 13 years ago

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aru29

@aru29

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Posted: 13 years ago

#244

awesome chapter sujatha ji...👏 a huge round of applause for this amazingly superb and brilliant chapter...👏 loved how beautifully u have given a closure to all things...😛 u have so brilliantly portrayed nidhi moving ahead in her career and family life both with the constant support of her husband, getting settled in life ...so happy that even rohan and armaan are getting their due happiness ⭐️ you have covered every aspect so beautifully that i dont even know how to express myself...just brilliant👍🏼

A Huge THANKS to U and Anu ji both for giving us this amazing FF...Thanks for this beautiful journey we could embark upon because of u...

PS-sorry for the late reply was caught up with some work and had an on and off access to internet, there's some problem with the internet line

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Suvika.

@Suvika.

Stunner

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Posted: 13 years ago

#245

Originally posted by: aru29
awesome chapter sujatha ji...👏 a huge round of applause for this amazingly superb and brilliant chapter...👏 loved how beautifully u have given a closure to all things...😛 u have so brilliantly portrayed nidhi moving ahead in her career and family life both with the constant support of her husband, getting settled in life ...so happy that even rohan and armaan are getting their due happiness ⭐️ you have covered every aspect so beautifully that i dont even know how to express myself...just brilliant👍🏼
A Huge THANKS to U and Anu ji both for giving us this amazing FF...Thanks for this beautiful journey we could embark upon because of u...

PS-sorry for the late reply was caught up with some work and had an on and off access to internet, there's some problem with the internet line

no problem...even my net was done till almost 3 this afternoon and i got delayed in posting the chap.

and you are most welcome and so glad that you enjoyed it. this FF gave me a lot of friends in this forum and one big sister too (Anu). you won't believe how i pester her with my PMs...every time she starts her chapter, i keep bugging her for a sneak preview or to hurry up or whats taking her so long. 😛

so am really glad you had fun during this FF journey and hope to like all our future experiments too. 😉

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aru29

@aru29

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Posted: 13 years ago

#246

Originally posted by: turags

no problem...even my net was done till almost 3 this afternoon and i got delayed in posting the chap.

and you are most welcome and so glad that you enjoyed it. this FF gave me a lot of friends in this forum and one big sister too (Anu). you won't believe how i pester her with my PMs...every time she starts her chapter, i keep bugging her for a sneak preview or to hurry up or whats taking her so long. 😛

so am really glad you had fun during this FF journey and hope to like all our future experiments too. 😉

@ pink -really 😆

@green -am sure I'll love it because ur experiments turn out to be brilliant⭐️

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ttrocks

@ttrocks

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Posted: 13 years ago

#247

Heyyy dear Sujataji... First of all, thank u so much for sending the link... I was just up on Sat. morning, received the notification of ur PM and checked out the link too!!! Read the full chapter in just 1 go!!! I am yet to read AnuDidi's chapter, so, dont know about babies delivery part and all. But, this as an independent chapter is also perfect!!! loved every word of it!!! 👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏 What a fantabulous writer u make!!!! Hv no words to admire!!! Ur story made my day -- weekend too!!! 😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃

Here we go, summarizing my reading exp. with each paragraph!!!😊😊
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Loved the description of baby's room decoration and Armaan's surprise wala idea and his 4 car-seat and his ideas about his nephew+niece's future professions.😃😃😃😃 Ashu is shown taking all kind of care of Nidhi while her stay at hospital... so sweet!!! And, perfect real scene: New mommy is worn out feeding the kid every 2 hr.s -- with having born twins!!😳😳😳😃😃😃 Lack of sleep for both parents --- so real picture!! 😊😊😊😊😃

Their arrival at home, recalling Nidhi's Grih-pravesh after wedding, Nidhi straightaway heading to Ashu's parents' pic. & asking for their blessings for their grandchildren -- really touched my heart!!! too good!!! 👏👏👏👏👏👏

I could visualize AshNi's delight when Armaan's surprise was revealed... the word picture was so so perfect!!! Loved the way you described the next scene of feeding process with great decency -- in my POV, for Hospital it was okay that Ashu was helping Nidhi with bottle-feeding the other kid, but, in presence of so many ppl at home, if Ashu had stayed with her during that time -- it would hv sounded a little awkward, especially in India.(In US, no one minds, rather appreciates hubby helping out wifey for this!!) So, loved that u took care of it and made Anji help Nidhi. 😊😊😊

Then Rohan's daring and Aanchal's YES was totally surprise packet!!! Honestly, I didnt expect it to take place at that moment in the story!!! I nearly sprang from sofa while reading that!!! Nidhi-DB scene was so cute!!

But, for me the lullaby scene was awesomest!!! Cant find extra - superlative words to describe the beauty of that scene!!! How Nidhi puts her son to sleep simultaneously while nursing him; how Ashu rues his misfortune as an abandoned child; how Nidhi understands his emotions and indulges that child in him by caressing his head like his mommy; Ashu drifts off to sleep... awww... uber-cute+sweet+superb+senti. senti.+most wonderful scene of the whole chapter!!! It was like "out of the world' kinda scene for me that made me feel that AshNi relationship isnt just lovers turning H-W, but, now they share a one step above, divine relationship in which both play friend, philosopher, guide, mother/father, spouse -- every role for each other as and when the other partner needs... So Elysian!!! ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

Next morning scene was another cherry on the cake: Nidhi's shining results!!!👏👏👏👏 I was like "Khuda jab deta hai toh chhappar faad ke deta hai" saying is becoming reality for AshNi here. Loved how Armaan offered his flat -- how simpatico!!! Nidhi's reluctance on joining AIIMS was perfectly justified and Ashu was mind-blowing as a hubby there...👏👏👏👏 His "planning-ahead" nature and foresightedness showed up full-fledged!!! I was speechless to read, how he left no stone unturned in not only convincing his Nidhi but also in making all arrangements of relocating with entire family; securing his work commitments and above all taking a voluntary seat-back and bringing Nidhi to driving seat!!! I am in awe of this Ashu of ur story!!!! What a wondrous way to thank the wife+life who gave him so much that he cant even count and hold!!!! 👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏 The way Ashu convinced Nidhi and DB too in this whole scene, was magnificent!!! ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️
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Ashu's busy schedule at KGH was perfectly fathomable... And the baby-bathing scene involving AshNi's usual leg-pulling was so cute!!! Ashu has become very smart in giving pat replies now!!! The way he replied with "National park mein HM" and "She should be thankful that he agreed to come" was hilarious!!! If he doesnt consent to go alongwith, how would it be called their HM??? 🤣🤣

And then, Nidhi reverting back with "machaan per baithker thank u bol rahe they" and his another quick and clever answer "Mauke ki nazakat" was like... splendid sixer👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏 Waise, True...naa??? Relenting to demanding circumstances, if that night he hadnt placated her, he probably wouldnt hv been able to hv his first nite even during their HM 😉😉😉😉😃😃

Lastly, Nidhi's beatific prediction about Armaan's lady-love and Armaan having found her in as much as the same time was so lovely!!! Although might be excused for a coincidence, but, to me it was like Nidhi's heartfelt wishes for a brotherly figure, only made it all happening in reality!!! 😊😊😊😊😊😊 The last words from Ashu's conscience are still reverberating in my mind:"Home to his Nidhi", "Home to his angel" 👏😊👏😊👏😊👏😊👏😊👏😊👏😊👏😊👏😊👏

I am really sad that ur FF is concluded today😭😭😭😭😭😭 But, I understand that now there isnt much development in this story; it will be like dragging it unnecessarily and story will risk of becoming boring and banal. Hence I respect urs and Anudi's idea of ending this FF here. Thank u so much for the lovely parallel reads. Thank u for incorporating our suggestions in ur story and coming up every once a week, with a great treasure of emotions running out from the characters of ur story. Thank u for giving a great relief to us with ur positive story which proved like a boon during the horrible Mallu redemption track. U hv amazing writing skills -- absolutely love it!!! So, plz. come back with another FF/OS asap.

woohooo...I wrote a log review. It took me nearly same time(20 min.s) to compose this review as I took for reading today's chapter... !!! 😊 But, I couldnt help myself... all KTLK fans and precisely our forumwaasis are cognizant of effects of AKC... 😉😃😃😃😃😃😃Its a beautiful, sunny Saturday morning here... Just the start of the weekend and m having AKC to start with...so, u can understand how much energy and enthusiasm I should be having at the moment... 😉😃😃😃😃 So, I hope, other members wont consider me over-enthu!!! 😃😃 Hv a great weekend!!!

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Suvika.

@Suvika.

Stunner

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#248

Tupu..i don't know about our FF and my chapter but your review sure rocked my world!!! and this is from me to you...

and i will see you again on Tuesday in my new FF..

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Sujatha.rao

@Sujatha.rao

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Posted: 13 years ago

#249

Thank you, Suja, for a lovely read...and a great finish to the story...and of course, thank you for that small moment of mothering...Ashu is very close to my heart...isliye thoda kam laga but still thank you for making the effort just for me...🤗

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ttrocks

@ttrocks

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#250

Originally posted by: turags
Tupu..i don't know about our FF and my chapter but your review sure rocked my world!!! and this is from me to you...

and i will see you again on Tuesday in my new FF..

Sujataji... thank u for ur kind words. I didnt plan on what to write, but, when I started typing, everything just came out as token of admiration to the marvelous job that you and Anudidi have done with ur FF. I am glad that u liked my narration of what I felt while reading ur chapter. 😃😃😃

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