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Posted: 13 years ago
Sujatha di, I salute u... M not wid my lappy rite now, or else I wud have surely added on that bowing down wala emoti 4 u... Just imagine it to be here...No doubt this is the best chapter u have written so far... Stupendofabulously fantastic... This is the second time in ur ff that I'm so overwhelmed reading it, dat I'm getting into a situation jahan aisa lag raha h k main kya-kya likh doon aapki tareef mein... No seriously... The first time dat happened was when anu di wrote the chap in which nidhi's pregnancy was revealed to the couple, to ashni...
Just dont ask me what not I loved in this update... Nidhi fixing Ashu's parents pic in the frame...Ashu's convo wid his parents pic as to they sent nidhi in his life (oh this was very heart whelming)... Ashu's back massage to nidhi, that lullaby to his babies... The oath taking ceremony... That pride in his eyes... That usual care he takes of her pregnancy... That orange juice part was really cute... The teacher in him to make sure wid her studies... N the pre exam scenario n even the post exam scene, what I saw in Ashu was not a husband, a senior, or a teacher, but more than that I saw a father's instint in him... May b its not wat u wanted to convey, but the scenes were jus the same as my dad still asks me before n after the exams like ashu was asking nidhi... Rohan teasing part was also nice... N oh! It was Dr. Uday who was passing on the msgs to mallika (gud closure to that part)... N the delhi trip... Oh God!!! I too was on the edge... But what a thappad!!! Bechara didnt realised k what hurriacane was on his wife's mind... U know wat , y'day wen u gave the spoiler abt the thappad, I had n impression in my mind as to ver.2... Bt subah dimag ki batti jali k aap toh ver.1 likh rahi thi na... Then I got the significance of ur spoiler...Arrey! I 4got 2 mention, I really loved nidhi's refusal to go to her maiyka... Actually it was sumwhere at the back of my mind to ask u both abt dat... But it just slipped off my mind... Very good haan!!! See telepathy karke bhi koi cheez hoti h...
Over all sujatha di... It was more than marvellous than I can ever describe... Sachchi batau, agar aap kal spoiler b na deti toh bhi aapke iss update ko padh ke saari ghustakhiyan maaf ho jaati... Kudos!!!

Now anu di, plz plz plz... I beg before u, plz update agley hafte tak de dijiyega... I have never waited 4 any update like m waiting 4 chap 37... Aap soch rahi hongi k ajeeb pagal h... Par main kya karoon... M jus helpless... I'm so lovesick wid the ff that I dont know wat 2 do...
Sorry doston... I guess kuch zyada ki lamba comment de diya... Bear wid me...
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Posted: 13 years ago
That was brilliant Sujatha ji...just loved the entire chapter...each and every emotion was just so palpable ...really hav no words to explain wat I'm feeling ryt now...hav u really never thought of proffessional writing?? I'd be the first one in line to buy your books ...nidhi's pessism (which in my interpretation is just pure love ) and tension was so natural...much more because I could truly relate to it...👏
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Posted: 13 years ago
Oye... Wats goin on haan??? 😡 😡 😡 ... Anu di, I have almost never pestered u regarding ur delayed updates... But this is too much...😡 U r testing my patience??? 4 weeks?? U got to be kidding me... Yahaan hum mare jaa rahe hain, n aap hain k keh rahi h,'beta tumhara ilaaj 4 weeks baad hoga'...😡 Dr. Turags! Emergency... Emergency!!! Plz mujhe bacha lo aur else u'll lose a loyal fan of urs... Itni door se toh meri shok sabha mein b nahi aaoge... Mujhe agar agley week tak ver.1 ka naya update nahi mila na, toh By God ki kasam, comments dena band kar doongi... Main kuch nahi jaanti, mujhe ek haftey mein iska naya update chaiye... Fir chahe aap dono mein se koi b likhe... Quality toh kisi b haalat mein detoriate hone se rahi update ki, coz both of u r fine writers... Bas ab mujhe aapka reply chaiye... Kaun kar raha h update?
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: turags

no comments?? 😭kisi ko pasand nahin aaya?? 🤔itna bura hai kya?? 😲


Arre... subaha se my son and dad have boloed... halla on the laptop... I steer one away the other comes along... My comments will come later... Hubby also back from tour today... Will hardly get any time before the computer...

I loved it.. But will post details sometime... hopefully soon..

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: hilarious44

WOW WOW WOW👏👏👏...what an amazing chap turags...thoroughly enjoyed each n every moment😃...am speechless...superb job👏👏...cant wait for the next chapter...AWESOME👍🏼


thank you so much. and very very glad that you liked it.
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Aazeen02

Oye... Wats goin on haan??? 😡 😡 😡 ... Anu di, I have almost never pestered u regarding ur delayed updates... But this is too much...😡 U r testing my patience??? 4 weeks?? U got to be kidding me... Yahaan hum mare jaa rahe hain, n aap hain k keh rahi h,'beta tumhara ilaaj 4 weeks baad hoga'...😡 Dr. Turags! Emergency... Emergency!!! Plz mujhe bacha lo aur else u'll lose a loyal fan of urs... Itni door se toh meri shok sabha mein b nahi aaoge... Mujhe agar agley week tak ver.1 ka naya update nahi mila na, toh By God ki kasam, comments dena band kar doongi... Main kuch nahi jaanti, mujhe ek haftey mein iska naya update chaiye... Fir chahe aap dono mein se koi b likhe... Quality toh kisi b haalat mein detoriate hone se rahi update ki, coz both of u r fine writers... Bas ab mujhe aapka reply chaiye... Kaun kar raha h update?

ditto ditto...its simply impossible to wait for 4weeks...anu di come what may we want update of version 2 on sat n of version1 next week in any case...otherwise😭😭😭😭😭😭
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Aazeen02

Sujatha di, I salute u... M not wid my lappy rite now, or else I wud have surely added on that bowing down wala emoti 4 u... Just imagine it to be here


imagined...and thank you...

...No doubt this is the best chapter u have written so far... Stupendofabulously fantastic..

N the pre exam scenario n even the post exam scene, what I saw in Ashu was not a husband, a senior, or a teacher, but more than that I saw a father's instint in him... May b its not wat u wanted to convey, but the scenes were jus the same as my dad still asks me before n after the exams like ashu was asking nidhi...

well, i wouldn't say "father" but certainly someone elder to her coz there is no denying that she is younger to him by almost 2 decades.😳

Arrey! I 4got 2 mention, I really loved nidhi's refusal to go to her maiyka... Actually it was sumwhere at the back of my mind to ask u both abt dat... But it just slipped off my mind... Very good haan!!! See telepathy karke bhi koi cheez hoti h...

😆 👍🏼


Over all sujatha di... It was more than marvellous than I can ever describe... Sachchi batau, agar aap kal spoiler b na deti toh bhi aapke iss update ko padh ke saari ghustakhiyan maaf ho jaati... Kudos!!!



Aap soch rahi hongi k ajeeb pagal h... Par main kya karoon... M jus helpless... I'm so lovesick wid the ff that I dont know wat 2 do...
Sorry doston... I guess kuch zyada ki lamba comment de diya... Bear wid me..
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arre i love long reviews...shows that you read and liked every aspect of the chap...😃

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: aru29

That was brilliant Sujatha ji...just loved the entire chapter...each and every emotion was just so palpable ...really hav no words to explain wat I'm feeling ryt now...hav u really never thought of proffessional writing?? I'd be the first one in line to buy your books ...nidhi's pessism (which in my interpretation is just pure love ) and tension was so natural...much more because I could truly relate to it...👏


thank you aru...
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Aazeen02

Oye... Wats goin on haan??? 😡 😡 😡 ... Anu di, I have almost never pestered u regarding ur delayed updates... But this is too much...😡 U r testing my patience??? 4 weeks?? U got to be kidding me... Yahaan hum mare jaa rahe hain, n aap hain k keh rahi h,'beta tumhara ilaaj 4 weeks baad hoga'...😡 Dr. Turags! Emergency... Emergency!!! Plz mujhe bacha lo aur else u'll lose a loyal fan of urs... Itni door se toh meri shok sabha mein b nahi aaoge... Mujhe agar agley week tak ver.1 ka naya update nahi mila na, toh By God ki kasam, comments dena band kar doongi... Main kuch nahi jaanti, mujhe ek haftey mein iska naya update chaiye... Fir chahe aap dono mein se koi b likhe... Quality toh kisi b haalat mein detoriate hone se rahi update ki, coz both of u r fine writers... Bas ab mujhe aapka reply chaiye... Kaun kar raha h update?


Aazeen shaanthi shaanthi...Anu aap sab ki taang kheench rahi hain...next friday tak update miljayega...don't worry...guarantee meri...👍🏼
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: fanktlk


Arre... subaha se my son and dad have boloed... halla on the laptop... I steer one away the other comes along... My comments will come later... Hubby also back from tour today... Will hardly get any time before the computer...

I loved it.. But will post details sometime... hopefully soon..


Humne ek extra din ka time maanga toh aap ne humse katti karli...aur yahaan aap ke liye poora night out karke chapter likha toh aap ko padne ka time nahin...ab jaaiye hum aap se katti karte hain...baat nahi karenge...

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