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Suvika.

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Posted: 13 years ago

#191

Originally posted by: mudraswathi
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It is such a difficult task to write FF and you people are writing 2 versions...OMG...

ab yeh clapping bhi encouragement hain ya ??? aap ne yeh FF bhi bookmark kar liya hoga na...😈

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mudraswathi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#192

Originally posted by: turags

ab yeh clapping bhi encouragement hain ya ??? aap ne yeh FF bhi bookmark kar liya hoga na...😈

Ek ghante pehle mera zindagi kitna asaan tha... hey bhagwan!!!!

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Aazeen02

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Posted: 13 years ago

#193

Hello hello... Sowie I din comment here since it was started as an os (now a beautiful ff)... M busy wid my studies so don cum so often on forum although it remains online always on my cell phone...
Anyways, anu di, beautiful start... N their patch up was simply awesome... Although the story revolves around ashni n nidhi's pregnancy, yet it is so different from ver.1...
Sujatha di, It felt like a roller coaster ride... Everytime ashni tried making up,mallu wud pop-up 4m nowhere... Towards the end of the update, where ashu pushes the table of the canteen, n then shouts on mallika in his cabin, I was practically yelling my throat out reading it... What the heck... Where has this lady got such a timing??? Actly I felt, as if mallu is indirectly trying to begrudge nidhi 4 takin ashu out of her life... Aisa hai kya???
Chalo, I guess the next update has to take a bit more time... Wish u both all the best 4 ur next updates... U rock my rockstars!!!

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Suvika.

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Posted: 13 years ago

#194

ab yeh clapping bhi encouragement hain ya ??? aap ne yeh FF bhi bookmark kar liya hoga na...😈

Ek ghante pehle mera zindagi kitna asaan tha... hey bhagwan!!!!

its ok mudra...zindagi mein utaar chadav aate rehta hain...buck up!!

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Suvika.

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Posted: 13 years ago

#195

Originally posted by: Aazeen02
Hello hello... Sowie I din comment here since it was started as an os (now a beautiful ff)... M busy wid my studies so don cum so often on forum although it remains online always on my cell phone...
Anyways, anu di, beautiful start... N their patch up was simply awesome... Although the story revolves around ashni n nidhi's pregnancy, yet it is so different from ver.1...
Sujatha di, It felt like a roller coaster ride... Everytime ashni tried making up,mallu wud pop-up 4m nowhere... Towards the end of the update, where ashu pushes the table of the canteen, n then shouts on mallika in his cabin, I was practically yelling my throat out reading it... What the heck... Where has this lady got such a timing??? Actly I felt, as if mallu is indirectly trying to begrudge nidhi 4 takin ashu out of her life... Aisa hai kya???
Chalo, I guess the next update has to take a bit more time... Wish u both all the best 4 ur next updates... U rock my rockstars!!!

no issues Aazeen...better late than never...😉

and nothing is as simple as that...one might want to leave the past behind and move on but sometimes its not easy...people don't disappear from your life just because you want them to disappear...if we put enough effort and determination, we can probably phase them out of our life and not let them matter to you anymore.. am i right? and Mallika is a grey character here...with more black shades than white...she wants to be good but her inherent possessiveness towards Ashu is 12 yrs old so she can't let go...neither me nor Libra can make her white...we don't see her that way...

and i am very happy that you liked this chapter...