Ek Soch (OS.). - Page 2

rabzonedge- very well written !! 👍🏼

really liked your depiction of mallika... she seemed deeply hurt in love yet a human being with a heart ..
and Rohan's part was also emotional and so honest !
aapki hindi bhi bahut acchi hai !!

thanks rabz for this heartwarming os
loved the way rohna told mallu about love
hope mallu will also understand what is love



sonali

Wah..wah...Meri sherni...👏👏 kahaan chupaaya is kala ko aaj tak?

I like this forum for this... Forum is like a stage, brought out the hidden talents...

I liked this redeemed Mallu so much... every other (esp Rohan) character was so beautiful...

Thank you for sharing it with us.

Superb one my darling...😊

Keep writing...Best wishes...😳

Originally posted by: aardhan

What a beautiful thought Div! 👏 And you have expressed it so nicely! 😳

I wish even in the show Mallu realizes the true meaning of love, and repents for all the bad deeds she has done. There is nothing more effective than self-realization. 👏 Wish someone showed her the mirror soon and the mistake of her ways!

Thanks Aardhan...For such lovely words...You are such a Great Writer and getting compliment from you is a best Feeling..😳

I wanted This sort of Realization for Mallu...Both Mallu and rohan are in one Sided love...But their approach is Different...Wanted to bring This out...🤗

Originally posted by: Libra

Wow, simply beautiful. My eyes had tears after reading Rohan's part. Wow.👏

Thanks libra...I have Read your FFs they are brilliant...Yup I sympathesize With Rohan...Dont want him to becum obsessive lover like Mallu..but now as Rohan is coming back ..We dont know where is story Heading??

Originally posted by: Armu4eva

Wow.. rabz... good one... !

Congrats on ur first OS 🤗

Thanks Tanu...Your words are great encouragement for Me...🤗

Originally posted by: sun29

rabzyyy kya baat hai 🤗

aap shayar ke saath saath writer bhi hai...👏

and i have yet to read it...uske baad comments karthi hooon

Sun 😳...pehla Try hai...Thanks ..Plzz plzz give your comments..Waiting eagerly...🤗

Originally posted by: debaparna77

wow!! Rabz...wonderful imaginations 👏

subha subha mazaa aa gaya 😃

keep writing...(in hindi only)

Thanks Deba...😳..You got Maza Wow..i am thrilled...I will Write more Sweetheart...🤗

Originally posted by: heydoc27

wow congo on ur first OS👏👏
pehle toh itni shudh hindi dekh kar bada mazaa aaya😃
n actually its my first readin a OS😛😉
it was really gud n a very very wishful one😊
pls do continu😊

Thanks Doc...I am the Lucky OS writer yaar..You read first OS and that was mine..But please dont stop reading OS after reading this one..😆...Hindi is the language i am most comfortable with...So i write in that...😊