Our KTLK-Version - 1 CH 35(pg 144)Ashu's Legacy

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Anu

@Libra

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Posted: 13 years ago

#51

Originally posted by: SSA777
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fanktlk

@fanktlk

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Posted: 13 years ago

#52

Libra

Awesome... now we can conclude why Ashu send Mallu to the asylum. Makes so much sense. Libra it is just a talent to take 2 incidents

1. Ashu screaming

2. Sending Mallu away

and weaving such a beautiful love story in the real sense. Thanks for sharing with us.

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Anu

@Libra

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Posted: 13 years ago

#53

Originally posted by: fanktlk
Libra

Awesome... now we can conclude why Ashu send Mallu to the asylum. Makes so much sense. Libra it is just a talent to take 2 incidents

1. Ashu screaming
2. Sending Mallu away

and weaving such a beautiful love story in the real sense. Thanks for sharing with us.

Thank you.

I had been wracking my brains to see the reason behind why ashu would let Mallika be committed. This was the only way I could justify it. But then, again I do not have KP ka mature brain, so I can't predict what reason he will show.

I have a few more thoughts to put down in writing, that hopefully, will make sense. I think that maybe, by the end of my next two posts, I'll catch up to the asylum Mallika scene.

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deepa

@jayanti_dj

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Posted: 13 years ago

#54

Originally posted by: Libra
KTLK(our story contd)
Sorry guys, I tried, but the story got away from me, couldn't stop writing. I hope I did not make it too long.

Chapter 6

Nidhi helped ashu to finish getting dressed, and then helped Him into the wheel chair. All the while Mallika was getting more and more hysterical. Nidhi noted that ashu was very quiet and had not responded to mallika's shouts. Nidhi asked,"whats the matter, Dr. Ashutosh, why are you so quiet, is everything OK?"

very very beautiful anu... loved d way ashu realised that he was hurtin nidhi and understood that no wife can see another woman touchin her husband.. it reminded me of d sponge bath scene...

also the way ashu couldnt wait 2 go back to nidhi... earlier he used 2 take her actions for granted .. now every action of nidhi's gonna be analysed by ashu.. and make him wanna love her more ...

the ending was simply superb. just what we all wanna see..

when i was readin d post,i was thinkin ,how nice could it be if this was d way show proceeded.. but no.. we gonna see somethin else all together..

me so wanna see more and more ashu nidhi scenes yaar!

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Anu

@Libra

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Posted: 13 years ago

#55

Originally posted by: deepa_jd
very very beautiful anu... loved d way ashu realised that he was hurtin nidhi and understood that no wife can see another woman touchin her husband.. it reminded me of d sponge bath scene...
also the way ashu couldnt wait 2 go back to nidhi... earlier he used 2 take her actions for granted .. now every action of nidhi's gonna be analysed by ashu.. and make him wanna love her more ...

the ending was simply superb. just what we all wanna see..

when i was readin d post,i was thinkin ,how nice could it be if this was d way show proceeded.. but no.. we gonna see somethin else all together..

me so wanna see more and more ashu nidhi scenes yaar!

Thanks deepa.

I also want to see more ashni scenes. But we are not going to get that. Hence my version of current track. It's not the same as actually getting to see it, but it's the next best thing. Reality is always better.

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Atharva Dev

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Posted: 13 years ago

#56

Omg very nyc post! U opened a Open FF where all can add their story! Yay! Thnx

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Anu

@Libra

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Posted: 13 years ago

#57

Originally posted by: DevvivekAshNI
Omg very nyc post! U opened a Open FF where all can add their story! Yay! Thnx

It was supposed to be for everyone, no one else seemed to want to pitch in so @turag and I decided to carry on, but if you would like to join us that would be great.

Glad you liked the post.

Edited by Libra - 13 years ago

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RoDee

@RoDee

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Posted: 13 years ago

#58

Turags, Libra.. brilliant...Loved it. I got soo lost in the story. could totally imagine each scene...
Plz continue...

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Atharva Dev

@*Dev.*

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Posted: 13 years ago

#59

Originally posted by: Libra
It was supposed to be for everyone, no one else seemed to want to pitch in so @turag and I decided to carry on, but if you would like to join us that would be great.
Glad you liked the post.

my pleasure ji,wil join u in short a while!