FF Complete: Closing the Loop (Part 18-21 - Pg 64)

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sharmishtha02

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Posted: 13 years ago

#71

Originally posted by: oaz30
interesting continuity... a rather subdued nids... but lets see how it unfolds... Ashu is MB in my mind... waiting for more... yeh dil definitely mange more

I know - your dil demands too much too quickly. 😆

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ApoorvaFan

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Posted: 13 years ago

#72

Sharmishtha,

I read part 2 and 3... Surprised to see the similarities in tracks in part 2... Like you mentioned this part will surely draw parallels with AshNi and you have decided in a right way to build up as an FF on AshNi...

Part 3 also is good... Your IIT and IIM background will give you ground for natural scenes to portray the acadamic institute atmosphere so I am anticipating better scenes than the hospital setting 😊

Both the characters are too good... Here Nidhi is a professor so though she may be bubbly, she cannot be so childish like the hospital intern... So expecting to see a mature love story

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sharmishtha02

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Posted: 13 years ago

#73

Originally posted by: NeelimaSJ
Just finished reading both the chapters. As usual excellent FF Sharmishtha! You baffle me! How do you manage to write so well every single time?

Thanks for sharing.

Thanks a lot Neelima. 😊

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Sarika

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Posted: 13 years ago

#74

Awesome , but why so small update .next time please want to read a bit longer one
so here Ashu remembers her and tells her that she was a good student. Good going
waiting for the next update.

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sharmishtha02

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Posted: 13 years ago

#75

Originally posted by: aarch
👏 Sharmishtha.. its really interesting. And yes there are lot of similarities. No wonder everyone can easily imagine our beloved AshNi...
Waiting for next one...

Thanks a lot dear. 😊 And next part is right after your post. 😛

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sharmishtha02

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Posted: 13 years ago

#76

Originally posted by: oaz30
Mishhh meri jaaan thanks for the update...

Haila MB would have fitted here to a T. LOve the way ashu is here without being so dominant... you have to love him. Hmm Nids is more the kind i expected... i like that duality in her as well from the thorough pro to the insecure woman infront of ashu

hmmm he remembers her eh,,,

Yeh dil mange much more
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😉 Hope you enjoyed your marking! Nidhi here is slightly different as I had told you even on chat. She is intelligent, but that strong-headed. She is capable, but she needs support. And you can guess where that will come from. 😆

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sharmishtha02

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Posted: 13 years ago

#77

Originally posted by: Binat
Thank You Sharifa for requesting the 3rd chapter😛

So Ashu remembers Nidhi as one of the good students...hmmm...interesting. And he supported her today, love this Ashu, would have fit MB to a T. And KK as Nidhi would be perfect😉

When can we expect the next chapter????👍🏼

Thanks a lot dear and stop encouraging Sharifa. 😆 Else she will make me post the entire story on the same day. 😛

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DikshaBaluja

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Hii Mish...Thanks for starting a new FF...have become a big big fan of your writings...This plot is seriously very mysterious and mischievous...A teacher who had a grudge towards his student and is now unknowingly talking in a very calm manner to her using her first name...ultimately falls in love with her...very interesting plot...loved the way Nidhi handled Rakesh's parents...her being angry was quite natural...which ultimately did good to Rakesh and his parents...I'm amazed to see the way Ashu is talking to Nidhi..." why would I ask you to resign...everyone remembers intelligent students..."...waiting eagerly for next parts...thanks to Sharifa...post soon..:):)